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spy4me
2011-07-22, 19:01
A prisoner in freedom by spy4me.

Suddenly, a face showed up from the unkown, removing that blue image of twenty years’ struggle , no one could recognize him, except the shore where he used to write his poems and staring at the everyday meeting of the sun and the sea.
She, in the meanwhile, was in the last place can a man reach in that small village sharing the darkness with her desperate days and clasping the picture of her son, along time passed she did not see the light or inhale the odour of daisy, her favourite flower. ‘’Mary’’ was convicted of murdering her husband since she was the only suspect , she was on the corner, she could not utter a word. «guilty », pronouncing the verdict was an absolute shock for people who know her, Mary can never do it.
I came directly to the old house and touched its dilapidated walls wondering how would my life be if I still sinking in my sadness, I knew that my life would never thrives even with my uncle Larry in his small farm, the famous Larry who could set himself to be the mayor.
A man like me doesn’t deserve a life like his, a man who’s escaping all the time from some drops of water when he can just wait for the clouds to vanish and continue in his path.
I’m a man never tasted the freedom but read about it, wrote about it and heard a shepherd singing “I’m free with the birds flying”, I’m a prisoner like her but she is better than me when she released, she will know the freedom after she knew the prison, I asked her just to hug me, perhaps I could get wings and fly with birds, Mary called me “peter, my son”, how strange that voice, but it’s real, I’m here and she’s here and no one can take us apart again.
My mother was imprisoned for a crime she didn’t do and I was imprisoned for a reality that I could not cope with.
...............................the end....................................
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i wish you like it.......reading your replies is my pleasure

sarouna22
2011-07-23, 12:29
you ara always in the top spy
it is wonderful story really i love it
we are always waiting your news

peace my brother

spy4me
2011-07-23, 12:51
you ara always in the top spy
it is wonderful story really i love it
we are always waiting your news

peace my brother
thank you sarouna your presence here is a pleasure for me
thank you for reading

اناناسة
2011-07-23, 13:13
Hi again , i see you have a great style brother ... i am jalous ... thank you i like the style , the meaning, the plot ...everything ... i wish you all the best ...carry on cause you are talented :)

radpeace
2011-07-23, 15:35
good story of you spy4me...your writing style is excellent and we are waiting for more to read of your works

, you have special skills keep going on

spy4me
2011-07-23, 17:34
Hi again , i see you have a great style brother ... i am jalous ... thank you i like the style , the meaning, the plot ...everything ... i wish you all the best ...carry on cause you are talented :)
thanks for reading sister, im proud of your compliment

spy4me
2011-07-23, 17:36
good story of you spy4me...your writing style is excellent and we are waiting for more to read of your works

, you have special skills keep going on


thank you radpeace, i appreciate your words, i wish i can read for some of your works as well

احسان2
2011-07-24, 18:51
allways surprising me
amazing thats what can i say

spy4me
2011-07-26, 11:45
allways surprising me
amazing thats what can i say
always like your presence in my page
thank you for reading

aicha1
2011-07-29, 14:22
salam alaikom
that story was really wonderful i didn t feel that an algerian wrote it
your style looks fantastic
:)good luck

imane ha
2011-08-03, 23:35
thankx a lot for these fantastic story
waiting for more

imane ha
2011-08-03, 23:36
thank you so much a nice story

spy4me
2011-08-04, 17:26
salam alaikom
that story was really wonderful i didn t feel that an algerian wrote it
your style looks fantastic
:)good luck
thanks that's out of your high taste

spy4me
2011-08-04, 17:28
thankx a lot for these fantastic story
waiting for more
thanks for reading the more's coming inchallah

sali05000
2011-08-17, 19:35
i envy u spy 4me .u r great and i like ur way of writing .while reading u at once u push us in a vast sea of urs and in a vast ocean of ur great imagination.u r a supernatural writer..wish u all the best.give us more.thanx

spy4me
2011-11-12, 22:09
i envy u spy 4me .u r great and i like ur way of writing .while reading u at once u push us in a vast sea of urs and in a vast ocean of ur great imagination.u r a supernatural writer..wish u all the best.give us more.thanx
well sali i didnt expect the story can do that lol thank you

newsk
2011-11-21, 13:04
Man , you should open a blog somewhere , you could go far
you really got a high imagination , and great English writing skills
looking forward to read more from you