خاطرة لصديقة مخادعة

[ابتساام]

There are a lot of dark clouds in the sky
Many bad memories in my mind
Like the lightning struck the tree
Like the shock make you not free
I was afraid of the reactions
I was searched to find the solutions
I fell into the trap
Really I needed a slap
Just to wake up
And say that I wanna break up
From this delusion
I know we only die once
But for me I die twice or more
I know the ocean is bigger than the sea
And the caterpillar ****morphoses into a butterfly
Such as her mind is smaller than mine
And to ghost she ****morphose
The tears are running down my cheeks
Listen to me hear me
Do you think that the sparrow not fall out the nest
And the salmon leaves and never returns to the river
You decide because that was you now me
I'm such as the flower and the tree
When the wind blow very strongly
I'm strong
Such as the mountain remains lofty
Like the sea when he gets angry
Such as the seagulls me, fly away
But you stay
Down
You was the lightning and I am the thunder
Comes after you or calm before storm
Some people said
Turn around, look inside, look outside
You're facing the wrong way
What can I do§ the hate, Vindictiveness
Circilates with my blood
Throughout all my body
Words allow us to cominicate
Not any more

[غزلان]

very goooood

[ابتساام]

thanks baby

[emomo]

thanks nice

[om nour]

wawwwwwwwwwwwwww it's amazing words sweety

[ابتساام]

thank you friends

[❀عنْفُوَاפּ طُمُوحْ❀]

very good so nice

[ابتساام]

thanks my sister

[LAMIA BOUBOU]

very goooooood

[princesse nour]

What Aaroek beautiful, and wonderful writing !!
Thank you

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Do you think that the sparrow not fall out the nest
And the salmon leaves and never returns to the river
You decide because that was you now me
I'm such as the flower and the tree
When the wind blow very strongly
I'm strong
Such as the mountain remains lofty
Like the sea when he gets angry

what I can say that your poem is amazing contaning well chosen words appropriateful to the theme of your writing in adition to the rhyming words plus the ****fors and similes, you are just like sad condemned in the begining then you depict your self such as the natural phenomenon as strong as it is.......then I just want to say that your poem is so deep your words too....Finally I found someone who write deeper just like me......this part above is the part I'm impressed by....good luck for another works okey

[newsk]

Sis ! good poem , you are good Raper ..hhhhh

keep writing

[المكتشفة]

i don''t know what shall i say?? because i like it so much
and i lived the same moments as you my darling
i decided to write a poem about them(my old friends)but i haven't a lot of ideas.
thank you thank you darling

[منة الرحمن]

that's great my friend ....

I'm new here in this club ... and I'm a big fan in english

i wonder if i can join you ,,,,,,

i have too much to tell you about ....

.. I'll put some of my writings later

[ابتساام]

Do you think that the sparrow not fall out the nest
And the salmon leaves and never returns to the river
You decide because that was you now me
I'm such as the flower and the tree
When the wind blow very strongly
I'm strong
Such as the mountain remains lofty
Like the sea when he gets angry

what I can say that your poem is amazing contaning well chosen words appropriateful to the theme of your writing in adition to the rhyming words plus the ****fors and similes, you are just like sad condemned in the begining then you depict your self such as the natural phenomenon as strong as it is.......then I just want to say that your poem is so deep your words too....Finally I found someone who write deeper just like me......this part above is the part I'm impressed by....good luck for another works okey

thank you very much

[ابتساام]

that's great my friend ....

I'm new here in this club ... and I'm a big fan in english

i wonder if i can join you ,,,,,,

i have too much to tell you about ....

.. I'll put some of my writings later



welcome baby
yes you can and i accept you

[ابتساام]

your words are great thank you

[showttango]

thanks llllllll

[showttango]

your words are great thank you

[Me Too]

I liked it when you said I realy I needed a slap

[ابتساام]

I liked it when you said I realy I needed a slap

hhhhhhhhhh yes because i deserve it

[ابتساام]

.................................

[amel nina]

what a poem

it has great meaning


I just find myself very impressed by what u wrote


keep going girl

[ابتساام]

you know amel when your heart write the words come to express the feelings

thank you

[Hind_dz]

Niiiiiice, very nice

I truely love it, it rhymes n has beautiful words full with meanings

I'm sorry about what happened 2 u though

My Regards 2 U

[ابتساام]

hhhhhhhh thx