i saw the moon shine

[J.B.O.Y]

i saw the moon shine


i saw the moon shine
and i remember my feeling for u
i saw the moon shine
suddenlly i start thinking about you
i saw the moon shine
my heart start beat faster it was because of you
i saw the moon shine
and your picture cross my mind
i saw the moon shine
i felt like it's been 4ever since you left
i saw the moon shine
i remember all the pain i felt
all the memories we make
all the riskes we take
i saw the moon shine
& i start calling your name hoping you can hear me
even the wind were whispering your name
i start looking around for you hoping i can find you hold you tight keep you close to me
i saw the moon shine
then i remember your beautiful smile how could my day seems so great with it
i saw the moon shine
it make me feel that you were here next to me hold each other hands like we used to do
i saw the moon shine
then i realize the stronge love that killing me inside
i saw the moon shine
and the tears start falling from my eyes knowing you are not by my side
i saw the moon shine
then i remember the words you used to say & the love we used to share
i saw the moon shine
it make me said i miss you & everything in between
i saw the moon shine
it remind me how cute you were
...i am lost in the cold night looking to the moon light i am searching for you ,you were my guiden star but now my sky is empty all i can se is the moon shine & it's not enought ...i wonder were is my black moon ??is my black moon missing me like i do??
...and like the same moon shinning to my window here tonight i wish i can see your eyes and hug you tight..i wish my love set free to keep you warm in this cold night i wish the angles bring you tonight ....(writed by JBOY^^)

[J.B.O.Y]

hope u like it all of u
plz some opinions :)thnx

[spy4me]

your night was so long
when you spent it staring at the moon above
i wish it doesn't last long
before you meet your true love
thank you

[the fly boy]

Did he back or not
b4
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
just kiddin
nice words
I like it
^^

[lovely_ranouch]

reaally nice words
i like it
thxx

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

If that written words of your are depiocting your real feeling
And I think they are so....thge meaning is that you're romantic
and what happened to you I mean describing a natural
aspects of the night and the moon and so on plus the romantic
sentences I think they are just for one thing which causes
so much pain to us to anybody who is sensitive naturally
you know something about Poetry or thoughs you write
they used to say if you write what are feeling I mean the real feeling
of you that lead you to a fantastic poem and rhyming.....Miss
I'm impressed by your writing please don't stop keep writing
don't be disapointed I know what you feel when you fail
for me and for some true members here have no idea which is
called He or she is abeginner and he or she does nothing well
no you need first to read and learn from poems of those who are
really good writters or just intermediate writers like some ones
right here read and consider what others tell you just kee^p doing like that Girl
Don't give up Okey!!!