my poem "our world"

[salwastar]

hi guys


i bring to you my poem


i want you to say if it is better or not


here we are :1:



we are in this world like flowers

we are in this world like brothers

speak and mention together

the world can be better

our world is like a star

when you see it you can't imagine how far

between you and it

is too hard

so if you like your world

don't wish to be a lord

otherways you will rule

it with the wrong




i look forward to show a positif replies


see you :mh31:

[زيد المال عبد المجيد]

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[salwastar]

thanks my brother

[spy4me]

hi, yeah that's good for you
expressive and wise words
good work sis

[GINNA]

It s perfect
keep on this way

[Slim-Shady]

:) I like it........keep up the good work

[salwastar]

yay

good replies from nice peoples

thank you so much

you 've supported me and risen my confidence

[anes15]

nice poem ...............

[salwastar]

nice poem ...............

thanks :1:

[Lakamora_dz]

so good ...

[english lover]

very good sis continue on this manor

[salwastar]

very good sis continue on this manor


thanks

may god help you

[radpeace]

it's really a good poem from a foreigner learner of english, keep up writing poems sis you're good

[soumia-rs]

thanks sis you are very coOoOol^^

[salwastar]

thanks sis you are very coOoOol^^

thank you a lot