correction of BEM June 2011

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

salam
here is correction of BEM June 2011
not official one
here is the link

http://www.4shared.com/file/qDr3R5Mr/BEM_June_2011_with_correction.html?

Here is a PDF copy

http://www.4shared.com/get/6cyk1Rl0/BEM_June_2011_with_correction.html

good luck

[youcef00]

جاري الفحص ادا كان الملف ملغم او لا

[Eagel_noir]

واش التلغيم لحق حتى اللهنة

[هاجر1996]

ايه قادرين يحطو روابط ملغمة

[نهاد 34**]

non link biien merci khouya

[علال عثماني]

حملو ليس بملغم

[هاجر1996]

شكرااااااااااا دروك نحملوووووو
شكرااا لخي و اسفة لاننا شككنا فيييييك

[naruto uzu]

please wait me i'll send you my paragraph and correct it pleassssssssssssssssssssss

[naruto uzu]

قمت برسم الاطار
dear x
i'm realy happy for you my dear friend it seemed like you had fantastic holydays in Italy.
my holydays was quite boring

my parents was abroad as a result i had to spend the first week at home.
During the first week i had to look after my small brother , in the second week my parents came back therefore i went to Bijaia ,ispent a lovely time there .i had my meals in a big restaurent which serves tacty meals .it was the best holydays in my life
i wish that i meet you soon
yours x
احترمت علامات الوقف
مع العلم ان الجزء الاول كامل صحيح ماعدا لم اكتب beaches

[youcef00]

ياخوتي لازم تعسوا رواحكم مشي تحملوا برك الناس ضرك راح تحط مواضيع ملغمة
مرة واحد وضع هنا مواضيع ملغمة سرق واحد 68 حساب انترنت ايزي
احدروا
نتوما الخاسرين ماشي انا

[هاجر1996]

لكن اخي يوسف كيفاه نعرفو ان الرابط ملغم

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

salam
thanks for your reply
well concerning the correction of the this year it will take more consideration of the written expression
you can see that in the table i put about that
here I can see a great production even if there are spelling mistakes
since your form is a letter 1pt
the topic u r speaking about ur holidays 1pt
the opening sentence is great
although u adapted some ideas from the text , i think u deserve more than 3 or 4 points on it
inchaa allah all the success
good luck for tomor

[هاجر1996]

thank you veryyyyyyyyyyy much and the texte ie so easy

[naruto uzu]

thankssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
i expected more sir

can i get 5,5
because i really need a good mark
my mother is an english teacher
and the told me that i deserve more than 5
but i want your desision because you are the best teacher in algeria
and thanks for your topics

[إبرآهيمـ]

bmerciiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

thanks a lot and my regards to your honorable mother
well i wish that why not you deserve the full mark just by the end of ur production you forgot to talk about ur feeling and we have to take account of the spelling mistakes too
i was just strict with u , i think between 4,5 and 5 and your Mum can use the grid of evaluation i joined with the correction and you can score by yourself this is the aim to make our pupils believe that they can produce and write the written expression
just concentrate on tomor , you are great at English and I really appreciate your answer
good luck and great success inchaa allah and thanks again for the lovely words against my works , all the honor is mine
good luck

[moonlight7915]

سمير بوناب من افضل اساتذة الانجليزية من حيث نشاطه في المنتديات شكرا بصح اكتب بااوفيس 3

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله
شكرا لك سيدي و جزاك الله لك خير
حاولت البارحة وضع نسخة pdf لكن لم اوفق
سوف آحاول اليوم آنشآ الله
شكرا و السلام عليكم

[أبو يوسف عبد الوهاب]

thank you very much

[piano4]

SI un eleve a ecrit une lettre en commençant par
dear nabil
........................................
............................................
......................................
.......................................
et il l'a fini par
your freind djamel
jke crois la il n'a pas ecris son nom
et le nom c'est en pricipe le nom de famille
exemple ;
djamel ouadah
alors aidez nous svp
c juste ou non???

[piano4]

svp professeur bounab
dit nous qu'il faut pas ecrire le nom de famille
mais un prenom c normal et tres juste j'espere
parceque y'a beuacoup d'eleves qui on met
des prenoms pas des noms mais ils ont peurs
alors dit leurs que c'est tres normale
tansque l'eleve n'as pas ecris son NOM
do not sign your name

[ramoux]

هل الحل نموذجي ام مجهود شخصي

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله
فيما يخص التصحيح الذي وضعته هو مجهود شخصي بالتشاور مع آكفآ آساتذة المادة عبر التراب الوطني
آما فيما يخص كتابة لآسم في نهاية الرسالة بالرغم من وجود التعليمة التي تطلب من المترشح عدم كتابة ذلك
ليعلم جميع ابناانا ان هذا ليس عقاب بل مجرد تحذير للتلآميذ بحيث لن يتعرض آي مترشح لآي خصم من النقاط
كذلك هذه السنة سوف لن تصحح آوراق كل ولاية في ولايتها آي مثلا اوراق ولاية الشلف في ولاية بومرداس {مثلا}
بحيث لا يمكن التعرف عل المترشح حتا ولو كتب اسمه كاملا
كذلك التصحيح الذي وضعته هو تصحيح شامل لكن يوم التصحيح في مراكز التصحيح سوف يآخذ لآساتذة آجابة المترشحين بعين لآعتبار بحيث لن يضيع حق المترشح

[نعمة القدوس]

سلآم أستاذ ،،

قيمت روحي ،،
لقيت كلش صحيح ،،

يعني الجزء الأول 14/14 ،،

ولكن الفقرة ،،

ماعرفتش كيفاه نقيم روحي ،،

بما أنك أستاذ أرجوك قيمهالي ،،

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[Mr.Samir Bounab]

salam
I read your production , it's really wonderful and deserves the full mark
every candidate can evaluate himself or herself according to the grid of evaluating the written expression I put with the correction
this year that grid will be taken into consideration and the candidates will score at the this part of the exam
congratulation for your great performance

[نعمة القدوس]

Thank you alot !!

I am glad for that !!

and I wish that I will have a good mark

I couldn't evaluate myself because of what people said to me about my pragraph !!

I want to ask you

is it true what did they say !!

that my paragraph is full of mistakes !!

I need to know !!

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

salam
well there are not mistakes as i can see just spelling one for the verb "think" but just the way u organized ur ideas that's all
but it's not harmful
it's a great production it's more than what we expect from a learner at this level

May God bless you
success and happiness

[نعمة القدوس]

Thank You Mr.Bounab
for all what You said,
May GOD bless You too !!

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

welcome dear
happiness and success

[algerienne142]

sir i have a friend who wrote her whole name and her signator n her place
will they delete her paper
another question
in activity one in mastery of ******** spot the mistakes
i fond just two spend n an n i explained very well
will they give me just one point
another question plz
can i give u my paragraphe to correctitfor me !!

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

salam Algerienne 142
well as i have explained above the fact that your friend signed her name is not a sanction or punishment for the candidate , it just a warning and the pupils will get their full mark if their productions are correct and conform to the "grid of evaluation of the written expression" that I put with the correction above
concerning your second question yes you will have [0.5pt] for each correct answer in that task
even for the first activity about [yes/no] questions even the candidates who answered just with {yes and No} will have the full Activity1: Read the text answer the questions
No, they did not / just { No} both 1pointl
2./

Yes, they did
or just { Yes} both { 1point} because here we are testing if really the candidate understood the text
the principle here is to
WORK ON THE IDEAS NOT ON THE WORDS

yes you put your production i would be very pleased to correct it

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

salam Algerienne 142
well as i have explained above the fact that your friend signed her name is not a sanction or punishment for the candidate , it just a warning and the pupils will get their full mark if their productions are correct and conform to the "grid of evaluation of the written expression" that I put with the correction above
concerning your second question yes you will have [0.5pt] for each correct answer in that task
even for the first activity about [yes/no] questions even the candidates who answered just with {yes and No} will have the full mark
Activity1: Read the text answer the questions
No, they did not / just { No} both 1pointl
2./

Yes, they did
or just { Yes} both { 1point} because here we are testing if really the candidate understood the text
the principle here is to
WORK ON THE IDEAS NOT ON THE WORDS

yes you canput your production i would be very pleased to correct it

[djalilhoa]

please correct my paragraph
dear fatma
i went to Tunisia last year with my familly .we went toTunisia by car.
we stayed for 15 day in sousa , in a house near the beach , we always went there to swiming , we visited all the mouniments in tunisia like El jem and Kartag and always we went to Kantawi in the night to see boards and play games , my favorite game the is e evoulation is a big qame turn in the air , the first one i played horror game but i can t forget this holiday it was very beautiful paroude in my life

[Mr.Samir Bounab]

salam
really a wonderful production
it deserves the full mark (6/6) congratulations
may God bless you
happiness and success inchaa allah

[djalilhoa]

salam
really a wonderful production
it deserves the full mark (6/6) congratulations
may God bless you
happiness and success inchaa allah
you are with me if you are with me thanks a lot may allah bless you

[لالا فاطمة نسومر ~]

nice .. thank u so much sir

I hope that God bless you

[أُسَامَةُ]

I hope that too

[doct]

السلام عليكم
ممكن وضع تصحيح امتحان الانجليزي ش ت م دورة جوان2011

[أُسَامَةُ]

قريبا ان شاء الله

[naruto uzu]

hi sir i'll give you my paragraph
i deserved 11,5 for questions
so you will give me my mark
????ok

[أُسَامَةُ]

بالتوفيق لك

[amina96]

oustade baghi nsa9si fi tmerine ta3 correct the mistake ana g3ate vrgule w derte verbe spent wderte tani nichan fi balste an derte a
chhal ya3toni fi hada temrine

[naruto uzu]

dear x
i'm realy happy for you my dear friend it seemed like you had fantastic holydays in Italy.
my holydays was quite boring

my parents was abroad as a result i had to spend the first week at home.
During the first week i had to look after my small brother , in the second week my parents came back therefore i went to Bijaia ,ispent a lovely time there .i had my meals in a big restaurent which serves tacty meals. .it was the nest holidays in my life.i wish that i meet you soon
yours x
i did letter's forme

[doct]

اذا كان بمقدورك اريدوه الان

[amina96]

bsah darouna piege fel temrine ta3 conjugaisin daryrin mora Last March vérgule aya normalemnt tani fi tmerine ta3 correct the mistake ndirou vérgule

[amina96]

please sir read my comments

[amina96]

i m wait sir please help me

[أُسَامَةُ]

انظري لقد وضع التصحيح اختي

[محب بلاده]

الملف موضوع من طرف الاستاذ بوناب وهو استاذ انجليزية

وغير ملغم اشهد له بنزاهة في مثل هذه الاشياء

[أُسَامَةُ]

نعم اخي الاستاذ بوناب استاذ محترم