My dark world

[lynz hardoussa]

i write songs and poems but i don't let anybarry read them exept for my best friend !! cuz once a had a blog and i wrote my poems in ... but some people actually some ineducated people copied my poems as their poems so i got mad and i didn't want to publish them anymore ! but in this great forum and in this wing i found that people write their own poems with no prob so i really would like to share the first poem that i wrote and that was when i was 14 ^^ :rolleyes:here it is plz injoy and comment :) thx


no one will see it the way i do
no one will get it like a knew
i wanna do it
but it's hard
like i'm in a room all dark
i don't wanna let any barry down
i still on the ground
but i don't wanna turn arround
cuz i'll find my shadow with out a sound
i don't wanna open the dirty window that i found
There's words still unspoken
But the eyes are wide open

[lynz hardoussa]

come on comment plz !!

[Glee]

ITS good sist just needs some cleaning and just keep ON

[spy4me]

you were 14 when you wrote this words and that's enough to let me say
good work and thank you
waiting for more

[lynz hardoussa]

thx gyes ^^

[sarouna22]

good work
keep on
we are waiting for more

see you

[lynz hardoussa]

thx sarouna ^^

[lynz hardoussa]

my other poem is "wat do U think" take a look :)

[حزين الذكريات]

I also do not want to write my poems on the forums so as not to steal,
and belongs to someone else
I liked your words and strongly

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[lynz hardoussa]

thank you ^^

[bila00b]

you said " I wanna do " ...what do you wanna do ?

[dr_house]

ohhh nice when isee u do that i feel so goood thanks to you dear
and me too iwrite a songs some day you will see me a famous singer
and you will buy my album

[lynz hardoussa]

nchallah why not :)