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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : why you leave me??!!


sarouna22
2011-03-25, 13:07
if you know how much i miss you
you will not believe it
if you know how much i lost you in every place
you can not imagine that
why you leave me?why?i don't know why
i always think of you i memorize every word you told me
i hope you feel the same about me
because then i'll be the happiest girl in the word
i love you,i adore you,i love every thing that have a relation with you
so,why you leave me?why you say good bye
i'll never forget this strong word
i hate it ,really really i hate this word
you make me suffer every day
pleaze love me the same way
i love you
i want what rest in my life to be next you
i need you by my side
i need you now more than before

if the days do not bring us together;
I hope to you happiness in your life
thank you for the days i spent with you

SAROUNA22

ام احمد الغالي
2011-03-25, 19:09
I advise u to read more in order to improve your ******** ********, nice effort.
good luck

ام احمد الغالي
2011-03-25, 19:10
لماذا كلمة لغة بالانجليزي لا تظهر

laytitya
2011-03-25, 21:03
holleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

مسلم أمره لله
2011-03-28, 23:14
hhhhhhhhhhhh
يضحكوني هاذو تاع الحب
ربي يعاونك ويرجعولك

jojo lover
2011-03-30, 15:43
wow its unbeliveball
but ther is a little mistacke world not word
i hope thats helpe you
http://files2.fatakat.com/2011/1/12945419311203.gif

spy4me
2011-03-30, 17:21
well, i hope you find what you're looking for.
do not listen to people who're trying to reduce your expressive words
nice work.
carry on

Glee
2011-03-30, 22:15
well, i hope you find what you're looking for.
do not listen to people who're trying to reduce your expressive words
nice work.
carry on

EXACTLY as spy told you NEVER mined about ppl who try to put you DOWN JUST keep on writting no metter what anybody says

and its a really good one
I loved the 1st part when it says

if you know how much i miss you
you will not believe it
if you know how much i lost you in every place
you can not imagine
you put it good with the cant imagine and the not believe it
thnx again and keep ON

مسلم أمره لله
2011-03-30, 22:25
well, i hope you find what you're looking for.
Do not listen to people who're trying to reduce your expressive words
nice work.
Carry on

راك عليا؟
مقبولة منك

lynz hardoussa
2011-03-31, 15:15
hi ^^
i kind of like the poem but it's full with mistakes !!
but any way good luck in ur next poem :)

sarouna22
2011-04-01, 11:19
well, i hope you find what you're looking for.
do not listen to people who're trying to reduce your expressive words
nice work.
carry on

hi spy

i hope you are ok
and thank you for every word you said to me

really really i don't care about those people

i don't want to respond them

because i don't want to descend to their level

al7amd llah i have high confidence in myself

Thanks again

god bless you

sarouna22
2011-04-01, 11:25
EXACTLY as spy told you NEVER mined about ppl who try to put you DOWN JUST keep on writting no metter what anybody says

and its a really good one
I loved the 1st part when it says

if you know how much i miss you
you will not believe it
if you know how much i lost you in every place
you can not imagine
you put it good with the cant imagine and the not believe it
thnx again and keep ON

thank you so much my brother

As I said to spy I don't care about those people

see you:)

sarouna22
2011-04-01, 11:28
hi ^^
i kind of like the poem but it's full with mistakes !!
but any way good luck in ur next poem :)

thank you
we will learn from our mistakes
god bless you

wolf-
2011-04-18, 14:49
thxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

كارهة
2011-05-19, 14:32
kee p on thank you for the days i spent with you unbelivable