What if [الأرشيف] - منتديات الجلفة لكل الجزائريين و العرب

مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : What if

hinda1992

2011-03-23, 09:40

What if you knew that i couldn’t leave you
What if you knew that I couldn’t forget you
What if you knew that I couldn’t stop loving you
What if you knew that I became miserable because of your love
What if you knew that I cried and that no body had ever made me cry except you
What if you knew that you destroyed my heart
What if you knew that your eyes kill me
What if you knew that I’m still hoping to have you around me
What if you knew that my entire life depends on you
What if you knew that I miss you
What if you knew that I get you in my mind all the time
What if you knew that my life seems sock without you
What if you knew that I don’t see my future without you
What if you knew that almost loved some one just because he looks like you
What if you knew that I’m still madly in love with you

Will you just stay there and pretend that nothing from this interests you and that you don’t care at all about me??!!
Enjoy my pain

kimou.

2011-03-23, 21:05

what if i just told u that your poem is amazing keep going ahead no one can stop u cause u r awesome

sarouna22

2011-03-25, 13:45

i love your poem very much

thanks dear

peace

sakina27

2011-03-25, 17:47

for the second time wow what can i say great keep on

Glee

2011-03-25, 19:55

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Glee

2011-03-25, 20:00

what if i didn't read the title of your poem

what if i didn't click on the title of your poem

what if i didn't like this poem

what if i didn't read who wrote this poem

what if i didn't know who wrote this poem

what if i didn't start reading this poem

what if i stooped in the half in reading this poem

what if i complete reading this poem

and what if i say this poem in good

what if i say i am sorry for your lost

LOL I made my own poem I ROCK:cool::cool::cool: LOL JUST kidding:D

and thnx 4 it, its really good keep ON

laytitya

2011-03-25, 21:08

i love your poem very much

thanks dear

thanks

novateen

2011-03-31, 20:08

A very nice words keep on

kmus

2011-04-07, 20:12

Hello,

If you've wrote this for me , I would say:
"All I want is you"

You should add to your poem "what if all I want is you?" (from "How would it be", by Lene Marlin)

romantic feelings

Hellsmoke

2011-04-20, 18:17

What if the whole thing was a silly prank ?

Would you get mad ? Would you shout that very annoying sound that keeps your mind woke up in midnight ?

that smirk keep on grinin' that smoke keep on asphyxiatin' , that crazy laugh keep on revolvin'

That cold eyes keep'on glarin' & that so clearely white face keep'on perfect

Scream that ugliness in your heart, confess your dirty side

Seek the light, need the bright sunlight, more selfishly a calm down

Howahhh, Houwahhhhh, ____ Ugly voice, beautiful things are ugly cuz' they never show up their true faces.

Oh face/off____ Face/off c'mon what's your true lies ?!

=====> Comin' back to earth ( lol ____felt like inspiration xD) heh, nice poem good words Yeah so deep pain , amazing

Peace

dream world

2011-05-31, 18:06

wow!! nice words dear!!! keep going

nounette

2011-06-01, 22:23

i like it... good poem
keep going

iris2032

2011-08-17, 10:05

oceon'sflower

2011-09-22, 20:18

your poem is very good;keep on

manel1992

2011-09-28, 14:29

nice u will have a shining future in this domain and i really enjoy it because its such an honest word from honest creation i like the most the two last lines they were strong in meaning and sensitive there are a magic in ur poem because it expresses a real experience u have already lived it congratulations keep on writting and i will read ur poems i am looking forward to read ur poem again good luck

wiseman

2012-02-10, 14:42

realy nice words , but unfortinatly i felt the pain that you feel, it's not something good ,i wish that he will hear you and return to you,

•°o.O ســــــــــــــــــــــآم O.o°•

2012-03-07, 20:20

**thnx girl**

.kiki

2012-03-31, 12:27

Oh God!! Oh God! you've compeletely own my heart with your words..

hinda1992

2012-03-31, 20:14

thanks sister

بثينة الجزائر

2012-03-31, 23:48

hope every thing will be ok with u
you seems that you'r broken heart

أميرة العرب

2012-10-19, 17:11

saléém

nice poem dear

i liked it because it's from the heart

keep going sis

peace

princesse