That day...

[herry$]

That day
i was there
listening to her
i had nothing to say
nothing to do but cry

*****
She told us
that is heartless
and too ruthless
to hurt your mother

****
dear mother
u did whatever
to make me happier
even if i was a bad daughter
that used to ignore you
to yell at you
but not to tell you
"mama i love you"

****
that day
when i walked home
i though about you ,mum
about telling you
how much i love you

****
now i'm home
i'm here , mum
i wanna hug u
so where r you?
..
nobody was there
i searched everywhere
until i found her
sitting there
i called her
mother .. mother
but no answer
...
SAY SOMETHING
ARN'T YOU LISTENING!!

she was smiling
and me .. crying

i was too late
and fate never wait

She was .. Gone
and left me ....Alone
Alone...
*****
this is my first poem

[sarouna22]

God saves your mother

and saves all mothers


I felt it so much and i like it

thanks my sister

[herry$]

Thank you sis for passing , and frankly it is not a true story
but one of my nightmares

[fatimaa1]

oh sister so scary poem
but full of meaning as what sarouna22 (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/member.php?u=249168)
said God saves our mothers
thanks for sharing
&
keep on

[herry$]

oh sister so scary poem
but full of meaning as what sarouna22 (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/member.php?u=249168)
said God saves our mothers
thanks for sharing
&
keep on

Oh thanks dear for your lovely reply
may god bless you

[no way end of time]

ya allah wallahi this is a great words and deep from your heart may allah protect our mothers
whatever we do we can't give what they gave us

[herry$]

ya allah wallahi this is a great words and deep from your heart may allah protect our mothers
whatever we do we can't give what they gave us

What a nice reply !! i'm so thankful sis
may peace be upon u

[spy4me]

?who taught me love

?too seeing above

i'm sitting in my ground and staring around

my soul looking for that hand

smooth like the desert sand

mum, whatever i do, to grant you your due

i can't give you, the favor of you

i remember, the time you spent

to guide me, the roads I went

mum, if my words are sufficient, my heart will be efficient

to thank you about caring me, to thank you about amusing me

i can see how the world is changing, but only thing here is biding

my heart wants to say, i love you mum, for you a kiss every day

what's a good person you are, no one like you so far
thank you for talking about mothers
your mother is a pearl you have to take care about her

[herry$]

?who taught me love

?too seeing above

i'm sitting in my ground and staring around

my soul looking for that hand

smooth like the desert sand

mum, whatever i do, to grant you your due

i can't give you, the favor of you

i remember, the time you spent

to guide me, the roads I went

mum, if my words are sufficient, my heart will be efficient

to thank you about caring me, to thank you about amusing me

i can see how the world is changing, but only thing here is biding

my heart wants to say, i love you mum, for you a kiss every day

what's a good person you are, no one like you so far
thank you for talking about mothers
your mother is a pearl you have to take care about her




Great words !! i'm so amazed , thank u brother , may god bless u

[AYA1997]

.it is so beautifule it make me cray
.i wishe ife i can write a poem lik this

[herry$]

.it is so beautifule it make me cray
.i wishe ife i can write a poem lik this

And that's my point : make everybody cry xD
Just kidding , i'm really glad to see that my lil poem impressed ya
and u don't have to wish something that u r able to do^^
try and u'll write something more impressive than mine
May God protect ya dear

[AYA1997]

thanx sherry

[no way end of time]

thanx spy4me beautiful words

[herry$]

u r quite welcome ^^