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lost girl
2010-12-17, 23:17
h:mh92: everybody this is my first topic here and i hope u'll like it
you are my snow white
you're the stars in my night
you're the beautiful light
for u i'll fight
cause u made me a knight
u're my inspiration
u're the princesse of my imagination
u're the queen of my nation
salaaaaaaaaaam

lost girl
2010-12-18, 13:31
oh come on is it so bad?? not even one comment!!? but thanks anyway

bila00b
2010-12-19, 10:02
well it is good but Is the subject about a boy because the word PRINCESS is a little bit embarassing

lost girl
2010-12-19, 13:49
well it is good but Is the subject about a boy because the word PRINCESS is a little bit embarassing
well first thanks '
and, no it's not about aboy and actually i didn't write it my BFFE (ZAHRA) wrote it for me so i thank her so much and thank u

Hellsmoke
2010-12-19, 14:54
This poem sounds like a confession from a boy to a girl ! so it's a bit strange that yor BFF wrote that 4 you !

maybe she wrote it in first place thinkin' of her charming prince ,

anyway it's really a lovey dovey poem nice :D

Peace

lost girl
2010-12-19, 16:46
This poem sounds like a confession from a boy to a girl ! so it's a bit strange that yor BFF wrote that 4 you !

maybe she wrote it in first place thinkin' of her charming prince ,

anyway it's really a lovey dovey poem nice :D

Peace

may be u're right but thanks for passing here
and why is it allways about boys and girls?. for me my mom is my princess and my queen my BFF is my princess my sis my teacher each one of them is my princess and about the prince it could be my dad my bro my friend or anyone else but love isn't allways for the other sex it could be friendship , maternity and paternity

spy4me
2010-12-19, 17:37
hi lost girl i wish you find yourself
the poem was great
it could be greater if it was from a boy to a girl, that may gives it more expressing
keep yourself with your Best Friend For Ever "zahra" she loves you since she wrote these nice lines to you
thank you

lost girl
2010-12-19, 18:15
hi lost girl i wish you find yourself
the poem was great
it could be greater if it was from a boy to a girl, that may gives it more expressing
keep yourself with your Best Friend For Ever "zahra" she loves you since she wrote these nice lines to you
thank you


:mh92:i was lost but not anymore and you may be right about(it could be greater if it was from a boy to a girl, that may gives it more expressing) and thank u for the comment

sar2a
2010-12-19, 20:39
thank you very much my sister
it's so good

lost girl
2010-12-19, 20:53
thank you very much my sister
it's so good
thank u sis god bless u

miss.rayane
2010-12-20, 06:25
niice and cool words thxx sis

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