Hole in my heart

[bila00b]

Chilly wind blows through my heart
Leave me alone . my heart is frail
Drawing love in a chart
My heart is stuck on a nail

I'm cold ... I'm lonely
Where is my missing part
My pain is always and daily
Hole in my heart

Screaming loud for your unknown name
Crying myself every night
Still i am all the same
My life without love doesn't feel right

Because of the hole in my heart

[miss.rayane]

reaaaaly cool and beautiful words thxxx sis keep on

[bila00b]

lol ..I'm not a sis ...I'm a bro ..thank you fo your coment

[miss.rayane]

sooooo sooory it's my bad

[Hellsmoke]

Your poem remember me of a story named " Manhole" about a man who is looking for a heart ( something beating, something red, it's moving, it's warm, that sounds make you feel uneasy ...Bada Bump ba da bump , bada Boom ...it's squeezing' you gotta run ! ) a big hole there,

Yeah this man have a mechanical heart he feels no pain, no cold no warm he is a Robot in case to be human he must go through many troubles to get his hole full of emotions

it was really touching moving story!

Anyway Mr keep on going !

Peace