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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : My grief my new poem


cute_angel
2008-07-03, 11:41
My grief

Life is becoming a grave

That's treating me as a slave

Chained in the darkness of that cave

with no power to speak or even to wave

I'm no more free no more alive

Nor can I ask for help neither been save

waiting for the clock to strike five


In that moment I wish I could wake

From a nightmare that made me shake

Covered with sweat as if I was inside a lake

A lake which I wish I could break



It Into pieces of stone

To free poeple and feel I'm not alone

Fighting sorrows ;crying on my own

Waiting just for a call of a phone

A soft voice repeating a noun

Which gonna make me smile and not goan

Pushes me to look up and not down



I cry I shout so loud

My GOD give me a faith's sword

To fight that nagging sound

Inside my head which is saying one word

LIVE IN GRIEF.LIVE IN GRIEF

smart
2008-07-03, 13:17
hi cutie
wonderful poem
i told you that each one you write is better than the first
keep up sweety

hairless17
2008-07-05, 22:38
I am back
wonderful
that is all what I can say

cute_angel
2008-07-06, 13:10
hi cutie
wonderful poem
i told you that each one you write is better than the first
keep up sweety

welcome smarty thanks so much for the nice passage

I'm really happy coz you've liked it


I am back
wonderful
that is all what I can say

welcome back

and thanks so much for the nice passage

أم بدر الدين
2008-07-06, 13:52
Very Nice ..go Ahead.

hairless17
2008-07-06, 23:52
What do you think of a space for others' poems

smart
2008-07-07, 13:03
Yes we can make this space but in condition..........we can put comments
ooooooook
Just do it sir

hairless17
2008-07-07, 13:05
I will do it

smart
2008-07-07, 13:10
thank you
you are making us happy again

hairless17
2008-07-07, 13:14
It is my joy to do this

Mai chan
2009-09-10, 22:21
thanks so much fo that nice poem