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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : To my Mother: my New Poem


smart
2008-06-29, 18:30
peace be up on you guys
here is my new poem i hope that you will like it
and iam waiting for your comments
to my mother
Oh my mother………..oh my dear
You are the one that takes all my fears
You are the sun that bright my days
And the moon that all night with me stays
Never think that i will leave you one day…
Coz i cant live without you even for one day
You are the treasure of my life…
And the reason for me to live
You are the only one who get me
You are the only one who cant leave me
Oh my god…………..please accept my call
Give my mother her paradise………and so all the mothers
Please give them as they always gave us
Amen…….amen……amen
I give this poem to all the mothers for all what they have done for us…………..thank you mom.

Batoul29
2008-06-29, 19:57
This poem is one of the most wonderful poems I have ever red

smart
2008-06-29, 20:39
thank you so much darling
and this is the most sweet words i have ever heard

hairless17
2008-06-30, 22:05
you are really talented smarty
you are impressing me more and more

smart
2008-06-30, 22:37
thank you ...........thank you...................thank you so much sir
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أم بدر الدين
2008-07-01, 16:22
oh...i really love it..your poem is much better than mine...
may ALLAH bless your mother and allthe mothers..they are our reason in this life
you will be the best dear. ...

smart
2008-07-01, 16:32
thank you honey
i knew that you will love it
thank you so much
you are all encouraging me and guiding me to the best
may allah protect you all

hairless17
2008-07-06, 00:13
any new poems ?1

smart
2008-07-06, 16:46
cute wrote new poem

hairless17
2008-07-06, 23:28
where are they ? 1

smart
2008-07-07, 12:53
she put it in the forum
its title is my grief

hairless17
2008-07-07, 14:17
Ok I found it thanks

smart
2008-07-07, 22:28
You are the most welcomed sir

hairless17
2008-07-08, 01:14
Any new poems ?1

smart
2008-07-08, 09:23
I have poems but they are not mine
i didnt write them
if you want i can put them in the forum

hairless17
2008-07-08, 16:28
Yes you can put them in the section
poems from everywhere:

http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=45479

smart
2008-07-08, 19:39
Okay
I will put them as soon as possible

hairless17
2008-07-08, 19:57
And I am waiting to see them

smart
2008-07-08, 20:00
Thank you sir for correcting the title

hairless17
2008-07-09, 00:28
This is my duty . You re welcome

هاوي تصميم
2008-07-11, 23:41
that great poem
thank you sister
you didnt told me that you wrote a poem for mom
great poem
more good work

hairless17
2008-07-12, 13:17
Welcome D Salem
Glad to see you here

smart
2008-07-12, 16:07
Thank you so much
I wanted to make it a surprise
MR,hairless d.salem is my brother

hairless17
2008-07-13, 00:06
Wonderful
You are a member of the djelfa.info family

smart
2008-07-13, 07:11
Yes sir
We are all happy to be here

smart
2008-07-13, 16:36
Didn't You see it in my signature!!!!!!!!!!!!

Batoul29
2008-07-13, 16:42
It's wonderful to have a brother with you in the forum
right
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smart
2008-07-13, 16:44
Yes i like it
Do you have brothers batoul??????????????????????
I guess not

Batoul29
2008-07-13, 16:49
Yes you're right
I have only sisters

smart
2008-07-13, 16:53
It is great to have brothers
They will love you and take care of you
D SALEM always helps me for school and i have another who is spoyling me

smart
2008-07-13, 16:54
I have one sister and she is smaller than me

Batoul29
2008-07-13, 18:34
All my sisters are smaller than me
There is Hibat-Allah and the twins

smart
2008-07-13, 18:43
Really...............You are the oldest one in your family

Batoul29
2008-07-13, 19:08
Yes, I am
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smart
2008-07-13, 21:58
Great...............then you have a lot of responsibility
Good luck dear

hairless17
2008-07-16, 17:57
The best thing in being the oldest is that you learn more about life

Batoul29
2008-07-17, 14:51
You are right sir

hairless17
2008-07-17, 16:51
I have lived it

Batoul29
2008-07-18, 15:10
You too sir
you're the oldest one in your family
????????????????

smart
2008-07-19, 13:03
being the oldest means that you don't have some one to guide you
For example my brother shows me how to organize my time fot the exams and how to prepare for the lessons because he went throw it before and he is trying to make me not to make his same mistakes..............you know what iam saying

hairless17
2008-07-21, 02:35
You too sir
you're the oldest one in your family
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Yes , I am
Why all these question marks ?1

smart
2008-07-21, 17:16
She was wondering that's all

aliallawa
2009-06-19, 09:56
peace be up on you guys
here is my new poem i hope that you will like it
and iam waiting for your comments
to my mother
oh my mother………..oh my dear
you are the one that takes all my fears
you are the sun that bright my days
and the moon that all night with me stays
never think that i will leave you one day…
coz i cant live without you even for one day
you are the treasure of my life…
and the reason for me to live
you are the only one who get me
you are the only one who cant leave me
oh my god…………..please accept my call
give my mother her paradise………and so all the mothers
please give them as they always gave us
amen…….amen……amen
i give this poem to all the mothers for all what they have done for us…………..thank you mom.


أماه لا تقسي علي كفـــــــــــاك * والله لن أرضى بغير رضــــاك


لا لن أكون لغير عفوك طالبـــــــا * حتى وان طال جفــــــــــــــاك


ان كان عفوك بالدراهـــم يشترى * فلك الدراهم والجواهر هــــــاك


قد كان عفوك بعد ربك مطلبــــــا * فالحمد لله الذي ســــــــواك


في آيه الله القديــــــــــــــر توعد * بالنار من يــــــــا أم عصـــــاك


ما ذاك الا لمشقة قاسيتـــــــــــها * في حمــــــلك بي وبأبنــــــاك


هم تسعة من الشهــــــور تعاقبت * الله فيها بالجنــــــــين حشــاك


بعد الشهور التسع وضع مـــوهن * لا يقدرن عليــــــه مخــلوق الاك


أماه يا أغلى الجواهر كلهـــــــا * جودي علي ببعــــض رضـــــاك


راعيتني من غير أن تتـــــــلذذي * بالراحة فيها تغمــــضي جفناك


جل الذي خلق الأمومة في الحياه * فهو الذي بالحنان حبــــــاك


مع تحياتي

aliallawa
2009-06-19, 10:00
Yes , I am
Why all these question marks ?1

batoul is very smart . She thinks that u r the oldest one in your family just because u r hairless= no hair= because the problems of your kids make your hair fall........... hahahaha