The newest poem of cute

[cute_angel]

peace be upon you

i'm sorry I didn't write this poem in the topic of our creations because I saw that there is no right to put comments

but I need comments and critics

this is the poem I hope you'll like it

Farewell

The snow showers the icy land

And the wind allows me to send

My word on a wave's hand

To reach the ocean's end

Where it can knock the doors of my friend

Who's sitting on the golden sand

And the sea_****ls in behind

Just as a heroine of a legend




Aflying letters on the birds wings to say farewell

Which is a magic spell

From a deep tears_well

Just to say and tell

How many times I'm gonna drill



Your name not just one

Time even the distance is a shoot of a gun

That's gonna kill my life's joy and fun

i'll call you untill the night will run

and the day comes with it's sun

[smart]

what a wonderful poem cutie
you are awesome
welcome home we missed you

[cute_angel]

hello my dear sister I missed you more

thanks so much for these words which are encouraging me

THanks may God protect you

[Batoul29]

It's a wonderful poem
Keep up cute_angel

[cute_angel]

Hello Batoul nice to see you sister

thanks so much for being here in that page

May God protect you too

[smart]

you are welcome sweety
we are here for each other

[amine-politique]

waw so beautiful

[hairless17]

what a nice poem cute
you are doing very well

[cute_angel]

Thank you so much for the encouragement Sirs

[hairless17]

your work is encouraging you

[bila00b]

amazing poem you are talented

[أبوعبد الباسط]

i read your poems again and again.
it is very simple but not all people can say.
GOD bless and we hope a nice future for you where to see your dreams come true.