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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : °*° Once upon a time °*°


Fairy_Rina
2010-10-26, 21:03
once upon a time
in a love song with a perfect rhyme
in a world with nothing called a crime
once upon a time
in a period of a prime
once for a very long time
when i had everything
once when i could do anything
the time when i had strenght
to help u and to give u more
once when i had faith
while u were hopless nd got nothing to store
the time you where suffering
you were living in a terrible sore
searching for the solution which is helping
it was me the one who sailed u back to shore
that time is gone nd i cant do this any more
now it's impossible i can be like before
it's the time to do everything by ur own
come on move what r u waiting for
you got to go ahead but just alone
come on do it what r u looking for
im not gonna be there , not any more
we got to move on nd close that door
dont look around u'll not find me
everything changed im not the girl who used to be
i've gave u a lot of stuff
and it was so good enough
now everything is over
we r not friends , not any longer

Fairy_Rina
2010-10-29, 20:11
Hey come on people , no one liked my poem ?? even u didnt like it just say it
i' ll accept it , but plz say something :confused::confused::confused::confused:

odd.dilarobia1
2010-10-29, 21:24
very nice snowland princess

رحمة 1994
2010-10-30, 13:46
wawwwww it's a very nice poem
i really like it ^^

Fairy_Rina
2010-10-30, 19:38
thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuu guys

ali gourgache
2010-11-15, 14:51
Bravo Fairy_Rina...........it's really amazing and it seems really a reflection of your honest feeling and emotions........................Bavo again for these splendid words and keep doing well....................waiting your new poems

miss u so much
2010-11-16, 23:17
don't say that u forget me
how u can forget me
?
? how can i forget u
u always come in my dreams
but i wake up lonly
without u my heart
come to my life
again ..again
i want to live with u
i want to spend my rest of life
only with u
it can't happens
i hope u understand me
no way
i trust on my perfect god
i ask allah
to be with u in jannah

Fairy_Rina
2010-11-22, 20:06
wow that was so cooooool thx a lot

mira27
2010-11-22, 21:29
Hi there

?so, fairy- rina is thare a story behind this poem

Fairy_Rina
2010-11-23, 12:51
not exactely, but u can say yes

hamoudi ikram
2010-11-23, 16:07
very good poem my dear u have the same feeling tht i have u really made me cry because of wat u wrote..my friend this is really true....and u r very amazing

Fairy_Rina
2010-11-26, 12:32
wow , thx that was so sweet from u , nd sorry i didnt mean to make u cry
i was just expressing my feelings

cut women
2010-12-11, 17:50
very nice fairy_rina good peom thank you

Fairy_Rina
2010-12-12, 17:01
u r welcome my dear nd thx for ur coment

herry$
2010-12-17, 21:22
ur english is perfect , just keep on :)

Fairy_Rina
2010-12-18, 14:07
thank u that was so sweet from u , nd i'll do my best to keep going on