I want to show you my poem

[smart]

this is my poem
i have a will ...and i will do it
No matter what i face from troubles
I never give up
No matter what happend in my life
I continue my way and i do not stop
No matter what i hear from the others
I never cry and stop
Because i know that my way is the correct
And i have the whole support
And no one can make me stop
And iam going to make it to the top.

[cute_angel]

Peace be upon you

Masha'allah my sister

you write in a good way even you are in the secondry school

Keep going my dear and i'll here bidniAllah to read with pleasure

[hairless17]

here is one of the best learners of English in a secondary school that i have ever seen
thank you
keep going on

[smart]

thank you so much cute angel and hairless what a sweet repley iam honored to know this from you]

[hairless17]

this is reality
you must be proud of yourself
and million thanks to all your english teachers

[smart]

[]iam proud mr,hairless and you are correct i should thank my teachers they are wonderful and they are keeping on encouraging us
thanks a lot my teachers

[hairless17]

good keep on

[smart]

And Thank You Also For The Support

[hairless17]

you merit this support

[cute_angel]

yep you deserve it my sister

[smart]

no one ever told me that but my teacher

[hairless17]

consider me as your teacher

[Dark Butterfly]

a realy great poem
sister
keep on

^^

[hairless17]

thanks dark butterfly for passing

[smart]

thanks darky for passing
you are as my teacher without to say it

[hairless17]

where are the poems

[smart]

which poems?!!

[hairless17]

I mean other new poems

[أم بدر الدين]

DEAR SMART you are one of the best learners of English in a secondary school i have never seen before
thank you
keep going on
your poem is very nice

[hairless17]

you see smart it is not only my opinion

[smart]

thank you all so much
i will try to become better .....and better

[hairless17]

that is what we are expecting

[smart]

of course if you help me
i cant do it by my self

[hairless17]

I am always ready to help you
just ask

[smart]

i know that i can count on you

[hairless17]

and I am waiting for you requests

[smart]

imagine for one minute that you are alone in this world
no parents,no friends,nothing to be learnt
no workers,no schools
no buildings ,no rules
no listeners to the words you use
every thing would get confused
ial sure that you think life would be impossible
because man is always sociable
and his life in these conditions would be unbelievable
if it were possible,it would certainly be horrible
no one can live without at least one friend
otherwis all human relationships would arrive at their end
and our hapiness,there would be no way
even if we try every day
to speak to somethiung or an animal
and unfortunately,we would only recall
that one should difinitly accept
the true meaning of the proverb
friendship is like the relationship between the hand and the eyes
when the hand get hurt,the eyes cry
and when the eyes cry the hand wipes!!
i hope that you will like it

[hairless17]

really nice
continue smarty

[smart]

thanks.............you will see amayzing things

[hairless17]

of course we are waiting

[smart]

i will bring a new poem
inchaalah today

[hairless17]

and we are waiting

[smart]

iam exhausted...later
exuse me

[hairless17]

you are excused

[smart]

thanks.............its title is good bey
wait for it

[smart]

good bey
face to face in this place,
tears in my eyes,
heres where the story ends
listen to your lies
all that you do is to apologize,
burning me out from the inside
all alone ,i have cried
we must say good bey!!!
memories,good days, bad days,
they will stay with me always
my broken spirit is frozen to the core
i dont want to be here anymore
i understand
if it makes you feel bad
if it makes you sad
but there is nothing we can do
this is a good bey!!
i hope that you will like it

[hairless17]

wonderful .

[smart]

thank you hairless

[Batoul29]

I say that you poems are amazing

[smart]

Thanks A Lot Batoul
Iam Waiting To Hear Some Of Yours

[smart]

any new poems??!!guys

[Batoul29]

Sorry, but I don't write poems

[restless]

Perfect!
We are all proud of you dear student..

[hairless17]

thanks smart and restless
I will try to bring you some poems
but they are not mine

[المتفائلة]

cooooooooooooooooooooooool
i d like it

[smart]

thank you so much my teacher..............iam glad that iam making you proud of me
thanks for the passage el motafaela
and we are waiting for the poems

[cute_angel]

good bey
face to face in this place,
tears in my eyes,
heres where the story ends
listen to your lies
all that you do is to apologize,
burning me out from the inside
all alone ,i have cried
we must say good bey!!!
memories,good days, bad days,
they will stay with me always
my broken spirit is frozen to the core
i dont want to be here anymore
i understand
if it makes you feel bad
if it makes you sad
but there is nothing we can do
this is a good bey!!
i hope that you will like it



MashaaAllah my dear honestly and without lies or pretending I say Bravooooooo and Chapeau my dear

it's a great poem

I'm waiting for the new one ok

[smart]

i sent it to you my dear cutie
read it and tell me

[cute_angel]

I read it

Masha'allah too I't's absolutely great with no doubt

And I hope you would share it with the other mebers as soon as possible coz it's wonderful and i'm sure they are eager to read it

[fati_reb]

it s indeed a nice and meaningful poem.....i swear you can go deeper and deeper in english in order to go
farther.good kuck darling.

[smart]

thank you so much
you girls are encouraging me
thanks a lot
may god bless you

[hairless17]

welcome fati reb
smarty is our best young member
we are expecting more and more

[smart]

thank you so much sir
iam trying to do my best
mr,hairless the forum is really booring without you
you have to come back as you used to be

[hairless17]

I have come back
I am always with you

[smart]

thanks sir
i really need a father in the forum

[hairless17]

I am so proud

[smart]

I am so proud

and iam so happy
and my father is really thankful for what you are doing for me

[aliallawa]

I didnt know u r keen on writing poems in english. Congratulations . Just keep on .
yours ALIALLAWA

[ينابيع الصفاء]

this is my poem
i have a will ...and i will do it
No matter what i face from troubles
I never give up
No matter what happend in my life
I continue my way and i do not stop
No matter what i hear from the others
I never cry and stop
Because i know that my way is the correct
And i have the whole support
And no one can make me stop
And iam going to make it to the top.
I'll be more than another Je serai plus qu'un autre
More than another Plus qu'assez pour toi
I'll be Je serai
x(More)smart...more than a woman (Plus) Plus qu'une femme
x(More) more than another (Plus) Plus qu'assez pour toi

[mina_girl]

i like ur poems so much
u r a good writer
iam also student in secondary school
but i dont know the English ******** like you
i encourage you dear
i hope to be like you

[smart]

I didnt know u r keen on writing poems in english. Congratulations . Just keep on .
yours ALIALLAWA

Well.....I try my best sir
Thanx for Your encouragement sir & god bless You

[smart]

i like ur poems so much
u r a good writer
iam also student in secondary school
but i dont know the English ******** like you
i encourage you dear
i hope to be like you

Hello my dear mina & welcome among us
Thanx a lot for Your encouragement sis.....I think You are good in English & You need to practice that's all
My best wishes for You