Do you remember??

[ali gourgache]

Do you remember??

I remember your sight
Your feeling and your eyes bright
Iremember the years ago
When we tried together as you know

I remember the cock-crew
Over there;in my town;in my fields
Where there is a grain yields
and all my griefs and sorrow

Try again;try to remember the light
The stars;the moon;the sky in the night
I don't blame you 'cause you put it aside
You forget everything as you decide

The snow in the montain is white
Your sound is echoing where you shout
On the rock where you stay around
In my town;in my field;in the countryside

How can i make you remember,?
I haven't got sword to fight
I haven't got clock or reminder
i have just a pen to write

I remember when we accross the river
I remember the sound of thunder
Under the rain you shiver
All these and you still don't remember!!!

You ignore it and you put it aside
But remember i was your guide
That one day you laughed with a delight
I remember from you just hatred and flight

I hope you like it.......waiting your comments:19::19::19:

[إفتكار]

thank you i licke it
we waitting for your news

[spy4me]

well done brother
we're looking for more from you

[mohbadboy]

awesome
i like it

[ali gourgache]

it's very kind from you ..................thanks for your encouragements ...........thank you again

[دموع الوفاء]

Really so cool
but i'v a question!!
who write this amazing words??
ur pain or ur pen!!
,,
Ur writing is so deep
so keep on
,,

[ali gourgache]

Really so cool
but i'v a question!!
who write this amazing words??
ur pain or ur pen!!
,,
Ur writing is so deep
so keep on
,,


thanks for passing..............actually i really wrote it from my heart to be a combination between the feeling of hope and sadness............but i'll never lose faith........thank you very much for your encouragement

[hiba27]

it's good ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; good luck in writing

[ali gourgache]

it's good ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; good luck in writing

thank u soooooooooo much for your sweetest passage...............good luck you tooooooooo

[Darkness angel]

as always you write the best word's keep up

[ali gourgache]

as always you write the best word's keep up

Thanks Darkness angel for your encouragement...............you made eager to write more:19::19::19:

[Darkness angel]

hiiiiiiiiiii;as always u give the best i loved it

[ali gourgache]

hiiiiiiiiiii;as always u give the best i loved it

And as always you post the best comments that you have..............i'm grateful to you and i'm sooooooooooooo sorry for the late comment...............thanks again and i wish you the best

[ali gourgache]

Do you remember??

[حكاية قلب]

Do you remember??

Yeah i remember
that this words are so
beautiful
nice
and honest

Well Done

i like it
^.^

[ali gourgache]

Yeah i remember
that this words are so
beautiful
nice
and honest

Well Done

i like it
^.^

thanks a lot for these splendid words......and thanks for your encouragement.......Good Luck:mh92::mh92::mh92:

[حكاية قلب]

thanks a lot for these splendid words......and thanks for your encouragement.......Good Luck:mh92::mh92::mh92:

Never MInd
it's the truth
:19:

^.^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

First I would thank you Man for these poem
I liked it too much...it's like a romantic movie
I felt my self watching a film or something like
that it's a real gift you know how to choose words
and how to depicting real images just like the reader can see them when he reads
your lines that's really fantastic work ...the best of the best
An illustration!!!
...............................Fight (A)
...............................Night (A)
...............................show (B)
...............................Grow (B)


The first part rhymes like this "AABB" it's called
the "Heroic Couplets" exactly the opened couplets why?
because when you have words rhyming in the end
of four lines two rhymes together and the second two lines
rhymles together. they are an opened couplet because
the send couplet determine the meaning.
the fifth part opf your poem rhymes "ABAB"
it's called the Heroic Quatrain which consists
of four Iambic Pentameters. it could be "ABBA"

[omo mazen]

thanks so much

[ali gourgache]

First I would thank you Man for these poem
I liked it too much...it's like a romantic movie
I felt my self watching a film or something like
that it's a real gift you know how to choose words
and how to depicting real images just like the reader can see them when he reads
your lines that's really fantastic work ...the best of the best
An illustration!!!
...............................Fight (A)
...............................Night (A)
...............................show (B)
...............................Grow (B)


The first part rhymes like this "AABB" it's called
the "Heroic Couplets" exactly the opened couplets why?
because when you have words rhyming in the end
of four lines two rhymes together and the second two lines
rhymles together. they are an opened couplet because
the send couplet determine the meaning.
the fifth part opf your poem rhymes "ABAB"
it's called the Heroic Quatrain which consists
of four Iambic Pentameters. it could be "ABBA"

Thanks brother thanks a lot for the encouragements..............Actually i do know these things but wat i wanna say that i've written this poem from the bottom of my heart......it's really spontaneous..........Thax Again:19::19::19: