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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ...if you know


spy4me
2010-09-17, 18:50
i wrote this poem behind a reason....



If you know
If you know how are deep my wounds
If you know how many dimensions I'm living in

If you know how I see the spaces getting narrow
If you know how the hope stops when it collides with weakness
If you know that my worlds suffer the loneness
If you know that I am a king without a kingdom
If you know that I am a stranger with my feelings
If you know that I can't leave my prison because of words
If you know which key may open my heart's door
If you know what you want to know
You'll know that the moon stopped calling me
You'll know that the stars stopped shining to me
You'll know that birds stopped singing to me
You'll know that I still hear you
You'll know that I never change

ali gourgache
2010-09-19, 12:04
Can i know the reason??okkkkkkkkkkk regardless the reason the poem is sooooooooo nice and i'm sure it's from the bottom of your heart.................Never give up .........waiting your answer

spy4me
2010-09-19, 16:54
Can i know the reason??okkkkkkkkkkk regardless the reason the poem is sooooooooo nice and i'm sure it's from the bottom of your heart.................Never give up .........waiting your answer
how curious you are hhhhh just kidding.
ok, i can tell just that it was a reply for a girl's letter

ali gourgache
2010-09-19, 20:48
how curious you are hhhhh just kidding.
ok, i can tell just that it was a reply for a girl's letter

i'm very curious and i love asking sooooooooooooooo much questions ...........i was sure that it's about a girl ............any ways i'm spying4you

yours Ali:19::19::19::19::19::19::19:

spy4me
2010-09-19, 21:48
you're clever and curious

ali gourgache
2010-09-20, 13:45
you're clever and curious


thanks brother it's a kind from you waiting your new subjects:mh92::mh92::mh92::mh92:

دموع الوفاء
2010-09-29, 15:00
if u know , u 'll know :19:
,,
Away from ur reason
I like ur pen
when he put the right word
in the right sentence
,,

hiba27
2010-09-30, 09:26
it's a good peom ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, and i hope that person will hear you whenever he or she is and trust me the real feelings and the deeper are always heared no matter what happen;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

spy4me
2010-09-30, 14:40
hiba ,دموع الوفاء thank you all
your comments motivate me for more

zahradz
2010-09-30, 14:47
i like this one
it s beautiful you re really good
carry on

spy4me
2010-09-30, 14:51
i like this one
it s beautiful you re really good
carry on
thank you zahra you're the best

Hellsmoke
2010-09-30, 15:00
Tic..toc...tic..toc ! sounds like you broke up with a girl ...

Heart beating... a month, thirty days, one hour fifty nine minutes & twenty seconds to live.

Ba-bump ba-bump ...Curious what's this ?
a heart sickness , hard breathing, 2 steps, , a glance, a hope finally a silence. shut up!

Crazy stares, one hundreds lives, 1000 reasons to die.

This is creepy. closes eyes,

this is a farewell.


Good ! writing thumbs up ! * grin* hha i'm little dizzy so don't care so much abt what i wrote up.

Peace

hiba27
2010-09-30, 15:06
hiba ,دموع الوفاء thank you all
your comments motivate me for more

you're welcome :19:

خـواطـر
2010-09-30, 15:36
....Remnants of characters

nice......