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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ''The greatest school ''mum


spy4me
2010-08-31, 14:17
The greatest school (mum)


?Who taught me love

?Too seeing above


I'm sitting in my ground and staring around


My soul looking for that hand


Smooth like the desert sand


Mum, whatever I do, to grant you your due


I can't give you, the favor of you


I remember, the time you spent


To guide me, the roads I went


Mum, if my words are sufficient, my heart will be efficient


To thank you about caring me, to thank you about amusing me


I can see how the world is changing, but only thing here is biding


My heart wants to say, I love you mum, for you a kiss every day


What's a good person you are, no one like you so far

أميرة العرب
2010-09-09, 15:25
hi

well .........i really don't know what to say

this is great

i do really like it

it's nicccccccccccccccccccccccce

thanks

mums are the best think that we can have

take cair of yours

أميــــــــــــــــــ العرب ــــــــــــــرة

spy4me
2010-09-09, 18:28
princess again, you're really amazing, thank you again

meriem inconnue
2011-05-29, 13:40
mum merite this and more

Glee
2011-05-29, 17:27
REALLY GREAT Spy I LOOOOVED IT and it's soooo TRUUUUE
I LOOOVED THIS PART

Mum, if my words are sufficient, my heart will be efficient

ابتساام
2011-10-01, 16:40
it's amazing

Hillin
2011-10-02, 11:35
A sweet Nice poem with sweetest words coming from a pure heart
Really A wonderful poem and I loved so much
Moms are the beautiful gift that Allah gave to us
so thanks to Allah and thank you for this cute Topic
Takecare for ur mum
My best regards

ilina 07
2011-10-05, 13:10
great job i love it

nounouss
2011-10-06, 16:20
the sweetest creature ever.. mother
may allah bless nd protech u. my angle and all mothers in th world
barak allah fik

احسان2
2011-10-07, 09:16
You are telling the truth
Impressive and a great poem
waiting for more

sourire hili
2011-11-10, 17:39
a gret one brother and I ask allah to bless our parents by the way I wish all the best to you

Jimmy The Rap Soldie
2012-08-26, 19:00
veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy beauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful

baby angel
2012-08-26, 19:46
nice one you jaless boy