Imiss you

[hoho023]

hi guys how r u ?
well i'm new here and i just want to share with u this words


hey baby...........where are you?
what are you doing now?
how you feel ? what are you thinking? you are with who now ? tell me baby .......
i need to hear your voice
i need to talk to you
i miss you..............
i miss our days , the days that we spent together
i miss the school days with you , i miss you so much
i miss your talking
i miss your jokes
i miss your smile , i miss how you make me smile , i miss playing with you
i miss everything that we used to do it together
i miss you so much
I'm sorry that i didn't love you like you deserve , i regret cuz i left you, i wanna comeback to you but i can't , i don't wanna hurt you again and you know what ?
I'm so sad that we can't get back our love and even our friendship
i miss you so much
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by me
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i hope u like it and i'm sorry if i had some mistakes

[bila00b]

ok i won't say excellent but you are good ...sorry if this is not the comment that you were hoping for

keep going

[moonlight19]

thank u for ur time and words dud.

[hoho023]

thnk u guys for ur comments

[didin]

so cool thanx man

[lady gaga]

wow
u r good

[hoho023]

thank u so much for ur comments

[أميرة العرب]

السلام عليكم

great words

thenks
and by the way u are welcome here bitween us

أميرة العرب

[حنا090ن]

nice...it seems to be real words of real feelings

[حنا090ن]

MISSING YOU
I miss u so much my heart is sure
As time goes on i miss u more
Your happy smille Your loving face
No one ever will take your place

[hiba27]

true feelings;;;;;;;;;;;;;; nice words

[hoho023]

thnk u guys

[miss.rayane]

really cool poem and very nice words well done

[*هبةالرحمن*]

so inocent words coool

[houriato]

very amazing! keep on man

[khadidja92]

it s a great peom but i knw u can to better keep going

[hoho023]

thank u so much khadidja92

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Yeah that's so great your words are depicting your characteristics of recalling memories that you left to that one you are missing but with your pure heart I know how someone feel when he is hurt or want to back to what he had but he can't that's awsome I wish you will eb back together to that person you love from my deep heart I hope it for real___By the way your writing is so good and welcome to these forum keep writing okey good luck

[rock-girl46]

nice but if u really want to write a great poem
u need to live the event
keep going

[newflower]

excellent brother i hope t share us more with ur true feelings
thanx bro..
:mh92:

[نسرين ز]

thank u for this subject and i wont to tell u we all messing to somone so we know how u felt and i hope he accept u're apology