short story about love

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One upon a time a bird fell in love with a white rose ,one day he proposed to her but white rose refused , white rose said i do not love you bird daily came and proposed to her , finally white rose said when i will turn red i will love you , one day bird came and cut his wings and spread his blood on the rose and the rose turned red then the rose realized how much bird loved her but it was too late because bird was dead . so respect love and feelings of the person who loves you .

[cute_angel]

WoW

What a nice story

very sensetive and meaningful

thanks so much

keep it up

[stop nihad top]

never mind sweety
take care

[cute_angel]

Once upon a time there was a bird fell in love with a white rose ,one day he proposed himself to her but white rose refused , white rose said Ido not love you bird but the bird daily came and proposed him self to her , finally white rose said when i will turn red i will love you , one day bird came and cut his wings and spread his blood on the rose and the rose turned red then the rose realized how much bird loved her but it was too late because bird was dead . so respect love and feelings of the person who loves you .

Just some simple mistakes if you don't mind

[gold_dream]

nice story
thank's

[Mohamed]

Peace be upon you

Very nice story

Thanks Nihad

Thanks Cute_angel for the correction

[stop nihad top]

thank u very much cute
u gave me a honour
thanks gold & med

[setifienne]

nice story !! thanx a lot nihad
Regards

[stop nihad top]

never mind setifienne