My sky /my new poem

[cute_angel]

Peace be upon you

How are you guys

these days I was a bit upset

so I tried to write those words

I hope you will like it

And I'm waiting for your criticism ok

My sky

Once a fortune_teller in the sky

Told me about the secret of a butterfly


In a cradle of life where I found a goblin

Of a fairy tale that showed me the way to spring


Where the flowers twinkeled like stars

And theire dew like a crown of pearls


I walked like an elf between the heigh trees

And the serene and pure seabreeze



Then I saw a castle of white snow

On a mountain surrounded by a rainbow


I climbed it to reach the palace

To see the magic and charm of the place


But a wind blow full of sorrow

And made me like a thin leaves of a willow



So my tears rush from my eyes

And my ears didn't hear an voice


I found my self in a whriles full of woes


In the darkness of sadness and solitude

I dindn't find anyone just my God

Who gave me a candle of faith to be my guide

[cute_angel]

No one liked it???????

[gold_dream]

thank you so much angel!it is nice poem I discovered many new words here

[setifienne]

peace be upon u dear cute angel
,of course we did like it !!! it's beautiful ,and each syllable is pregnant with nuances of profoundly important meaning i really enjoyed reading it ,and i loved the two final lines the most ,thank u so much ,God bless you
Regrads

[cute_angel]

thank you so much both of you

really I'm happy to read your comments

God bless you

[smart]

thank you so much cute angel you enjoyed me by reading this wonderful poem i am waiting to hear another poem from yours

[cute_angel]

Thanks so much sister for the sweet reply

[imane-23]

very nice poem continue

[imane-23]

very nice
congratulation

[cute_angel]

thanks sister

[hairless17]

**** What a nice poem *****

[cute_angel]

thanks for the nice comments

[hairless17]

i suggest that we make a space for our own poems
what do you think

[cute_angel]

I't's a good idea but let's see the modirator

[smart]

hi i just wanted to ask from you some thing,can you borrow it for me i really liked it and i want to read it to my friends in the english sessons
iam waiting for your reply

[cute_angel]

Of course that's my honor my dear you can for sure

and I hope your friends will like it

Thanks

[hairless17]

I think that it sis a good idea

[cute_angel]

thanks for the passage

[hairless17]

what's new here ?

[cute_angel]

nothing,,,,!!!!!!!!

[smart]

Wont You Give Us Any Poems You Have Written Hairless?????
Or You Dont Write Poems

[hairless17]

I am not very good at writing poems
but I will try to find you some

[smart]

thank you so much
i will enjoy reading them

[hairless17]

there is a poem that a friend was telling
I don't know its origin:
try to sing
try to love
life is not eternal
look at me
look at you
look at moon on the sky
look at birds which fly
life is not eternal
try to sing try to love

[smart]

wooooooooooow
it is so wonderful
thanks

[hairless17]

you re welcome smarty

[أم بدر الدين]

if it is really your own creation I have to say very nice sister and go on
this forum is becoming richer with these golden fingers .peace be upon you

[cute_angel]

Oh my God do you think I'm not telling the truth:sdf:

No I swear a God it's mine ANd I have others :19:

:19:but you know something I'm really happy because saying it doesn't look:rolleyes: mine means that it's good

thanks malika for the sweet passage and nice encouraging comments:D

[أم بدر الدين]

it is really very nice and sorry I didn't mean that you are not telling the truth because your poem is so nice as if a good poet wrote it..congratulations.
by the way this means that you are a brilliant student/pupil..go ahead

[cute_angel]

I'm really poud of your words

you know you are encouraging me to write moore

it's gonna be a long time since I wrote This last poem

but insha'allah I'll write more this summer especially because I'm free I finished exams yesterday

by the way I'm a student third year english

[أم بدر الدين]

i suggest that we make a space for our own poems
what do you think
a very good idea..i really wanted to suggest this idea for you today..but the poems must be ours and we vote for the best one..what do you think

[cute_angel]

very nice It'll create a sense of competetion and creation

[أم بدر الدين]

for that reason you write like that...i really appreciate all what you write go on and good luck for the results of your exams

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[cute_angel]

thanks my dear

[hairless17]

a very special way of writing your name malika

[أم بدر الدين]

thank you sir I like creativity and all what is new...

[hairless17]

there is now a space for our own creations
please join it and enjoy

[أم بدر الدين]

I'll do it INCHAALLAH

[hairless17]

and i am waiting

[اميرة15]

wonderful poemwhat this