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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Cross the universe


Fairy_Rina
2010-06-05, 11:30
" Cross the Universe "
i hope that u know where are u going
because im followong you
walking through the stars wich are glowing
because i know that i'll be save with you
swimng through a huge wave
and i'll holding you
im my hero , he is brave
flying quickly through the soft clouds
touching the flying birds
im sure that this
is so much true
this could be my bliss
when im next to you
so , fly with me
fly high with me
and try to coutch me

i wish u'll like it ........... it's of my best poems.

Fairy_Rina
2010-06-07, 17:33
helloooooooooooooo..... ??? come on pliiiiiiiiiiiiiiz somebody there pliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiz anyone say anything
oh come on people if this poem is so bad just say it , it's ok with me just say anything pliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiz

bila00b
2010-06-08, 11:11
We meet again rayna ...What can I say ...this is the best poem in the forum ...seriously ...you are talented and your poem is great because you are not writing it by your fingers but with your heart ...god bless you ...You are the next Shakespeare

MEGHNIFIQUE
2010-06-08, 13:21
it's so nice ,you choos the right word
going on

Fairy_Rina
2010-06-19, 12:41
thx a lot my friends that was sooooooooooooo sweet from you

odd.dilarobia1
2010-06-21, 15:05
soooooooooooooooooooooooo nice snow land princess

keep going

Fairy_Rina
2010-06-21, 18:50
thx Mimo that's so nice from u .......... but dont call me snow land princess , i dont live in Alasca , hhhhhhh

smart
2010-06-21, 22:10
Hello Rina
WAW....Your poems are great....Truelly You write in a very good way
Keep it up & some day We'll read about You maybe
I used to write poems but now....I lost my inspiration & I don't write any more
Thnx sister

Fairy_Rina
2010-06-24, 20:16
thx to u my friend im so glad to here that from u thx a looooooooooooot
nd i wish u'll return ur talent back coz writing poems is so nice nd it gives u a good feeling