شوفو هاد التعبير بالانجليزية

[mimi_dellys]

:mh92:
هادا التعبيرديالي
من انتشائي


واجب منزلي
المطلوب كتابة رسالة لصديق اوصف فيها
الثانوية التي ادرس فيها
اوكي

dear lamia



I'm writing to you to warn you of coming to my school after i heard you want to,I'm assuring you
will regret if you do
you can't imagine how my school is horrible.I feel like i'm in prison with hard labor. and specialy the old appearance , wich suggests that it's a real jail
Although it overlooking the sea but that view reminds me by "Alcatraz" (Alcatraz is a prison in the middle of the sea). As well as overlooking a scary cenetry
Whithout forgeting the prison gards, of course they are the observers ; you can't walk any step without a survey : where are you going..why..what will you study..you're late...realy i feel like i can't breath
And finaly the hard labor wich is the speciality of teachers..with home works,exercises,projects...and so much of work
shortly,don't come...it's the real hill
with love,mimi
اكيد رايكم يهمني
مع تصحيحاتكم
:19:

[lindossible]

there are a lot of mistakes

[mimi_dellys]

شكرا على مرورك
انتظر تصحيحك

[خـواطـر]

به اخطاء فقط

[menacer]

ur english is very bad like an Algerian

[bila00b]

so you are all critics ..let's see you do like that ??
Algerian are famous with the big mouth(no affene)

[اموووولة]

ton expression est plein du fautes et il est tres ennyeux

[mimi_dellys]

اوكي
بالنسبة للي قالو اني جزائرية و مثل الجزائريين نقوللهم جزائرية و افتخر
و اللي قالو فيه اخطاء راني نستنى التصحيح
و الكل نقوللكم شكرا على ردودكم و صراحتكم
و تمنياتي لكم بالتوفيق

[ARCHER-DZ]

:mad::mh5858:

nti raki ...................... je suis prof d anglais


ماشي كما هاك حبيبنا مهما تكون صفتك :confused:

[angel 91]

salam khti

habbit bark ngoullek beli nti 7orra f ta3bir dyalek w wahed ma 3andou el 7a9 fi la façon li t3abbri biha ok ??

7abbit n3awnek c just un éssé t7ebi tchoufi men un otr c pa 1 prob

alors


dear lamia


I'm writing to you to warn you about coming to my school after i heard that you want to visit it,i can assure you that you
will regret it ,
you have no idea how horrible is my school . I feel like a prisoner all the time , that is because of the old appearance and the old walls which makes you think you're in a real jail
Although it has a panoramic view , it overlooks the sea , that view reminds me of the famous prison "Alcatraz" which is situated in the middle of the sea. As well as a cenetary near by .
not to mention the prison guards, "the observers" ; you can't walk any step without a high level of security : where are you going?...why??..what are you going to study??..you're late... blah blah blah !!! . i'm suffocating , i can't even breathe freely .
And finally the hard labor which is the speciality of teachers..giving us exhausting home works,exercises,projects with no use ... and a lot more
in one simple phrase : i'm begging you not to come , you will see a living hell !!!!
faithfully yours
MIMI

that's it my dear i hope you like it
ma dirich 3la nas li thebbet el ma3nawiyat ok ma cherie ?
3andek ousloub chbab bezzaf f ta3bir
nchallah tekhedmi haka fel bac
nchalah ga3 njibouh

a+ mimi

[mimi_dellys]

angel 91
merci bcp
عندك الحق و ماتخافيش عليا
حتى واحد ما يقدر ينزل لي معنوياتي
اصلا هو تعبير حر
و انا نحب نعطي كل ما هو مختلف
مانحبش الممل
و شكرا لتصحيحك
و لإطراءك
مرورك فرحني
...........
والأخرين نقوللهم اتعلموا تكون عندكم احترام للاخر
شكرا على مروركم جميعا
mimi

[mimi_dellys]

:mad::mh5858:




ماشي كما هاك حبيبنا مهما تكون صفتك :confused:


merci bcp
wlad bladi

[fares kafi]

أختي الكريمة أنا طالب سنة ثالثة ثانوي لغات أرغب فعلا في المساعدة علي أن أبدأ بنقطة مهمة ألا وهي: يمكنك حذف بعض التكرار لأن كثرة التكرار تؤدي بالنص إلى الركاكة ... سأحاول بقدر الإمكان أن ساعدك بقدر الإمكان المهم الإستفادة وشكرا.

[lotfi diablo]

salam 3likoum
je vois ya mimi beli hada angel marahou hab ni y3almek ni walou grace a c'est parole
comme a+ ma cherie
attantion au gens comme sa
c un site d'education c pas pour rencontre et pour fair des conaissance d'amour dsl pourr les parole

[pink.girl]

:dj_17: ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffpppppp

[mimi_dellys]

أختي الكريمة أنا طالب سنة ثالثة ثانوي لغات أرغب فعلا في المساعدة علي أن أبدأ بنقطة مهمة ألا وهي: يمكنك حذف بعض التكرار لأن كثرة التكرار تؤدي بالنص إلى الركاكة ... سأحاول بقدر الإمكان أن ساعدك بقدر الإمكان المهم الإستفادة وشكرا.





merci 3lik ya akhi

[mimi_dellys]

salam 3likoum
je vois ya mimi beli hada angel marahou hab ni y3almek ni walou grace a c'est parole
comme a+ ma cherie
attantion au gens comme sa
c un site d'education c pas pour rencontre et pour fair des conaissance d'amour dsl pourr les parole



و عليكم السلام
يعيك الصحة خويا على النصيحة
و لكن اسمحلي نقولك هو ماقاللي والو
صححلي اخائي و حاول يرفعلي معنوياتي
و ماكان مادخل العلاقات الغرامية
ماعلاباليش منين جاتك هاد الفكرة
؟؟
شكرا على كل حال على مرورك

[belhariro]

my school it s horirble too

[mimi_dellys]

my school it s horirble too


:19:
كاااااااااااااملين كيف كيف

[seddikfoot]

هدا جيد تجنب الاخطاء

[abou wassim]

شكرا على هذا الموضوع

[angel 91]

mimi je ss une fille w habbit bark n3awnek wallahi ma 9sedt 7ata 7aja 3ayana kol wahed w afkarou w tari9tou f ta3bir

lotfi diablo ngoullek inna ba3d al danni itm

w machi ga3 ennass kifkif

peace out

[Kadisings]

HI Mimi, I really loved your essay
it's wonderful!!!
I really appreciate your work

only by trial and error you'll make a difference
so keep trying:)
people here are being so rude
so you don't have to be offended
they are nothing but rude people
so consider this saying when thinking of them
Whoever one is, and wherever one is, one is always in the wrong if one is rude. ~Maurice Baring

[AYOOM]

iI LOVE IT SO MUCH

GOOD

[wardi18]

بليز ركزو على الباك راهو على الابواب

[jozefjozef560]

mimi_dellys
المهم المحاولة يا غالية

[Kadisings]

thanks for your essay Mimi
it's good to try because practice makes perfect
ony by trial an error you'll be able to write great essays
just keep trying no matter what guys here may comment
just don't push your self and answer rude people
they're rude by nature and you can't change human nature no matter how much you try to
and if you need my help just ask me, Id love to help you out
see u

[Kadisings]

focus on exams
good luck to everyone