great poem

[sarahouse]

Just keep trying
Take a white paper
And a dark pen
You will be the owner
Of the words and you can
Register your memories
Before it gone
Then you’ll feel that you’re alone
Do it and take a chance
Be enterprising at once
Go up and climb Knowledge Mountain
We'll see what will you gain
Happiness, love again and again
You’ll continue your win
You could occur an explosion
And make some attention
Be smooth and nice
Before you break the beautiful thin ice

[sali12]

so cute very nice

[buffy 23]

waaaaaaaaaw ..thanks a lot .very beautiful poem ..

[ازيان نسرين]

thank you very much it's gorgeous

[kmus]

Honestly, I don´t find this poem great! Or didn´t I undestand it? Don´t tell me keep trying :) (as the title suggest), but help me instead to get the picture! :)

[safioo]

very nice chose of words
thank you sis

[صادقة الود]

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoow!!! :)

so beautifuuull!!!! honey

thank you a lot!!!

[sarahmmmm]

Well well well
your poem is combination of slogans i think
there IS a lack of rhyme and rythm
it does not sound like a real poem
mind your mistakes like gr ones

register your memories before they are gone

but a nice try don't give up
carry on
good luck

[laalmi222]

you have to practic more but oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oook

[dahman.aoulef]

Just keep going its cooooooooo..................:19::19: