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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : My new poem


cute_angel
2007-12-25, 12:11
Peace be upon you

It was a long time since I wrote my last poem

this is the new one

it is a sonnet an Italic sonnet

I hope you'll enjoy reading it

A magic song

Under the moon light in a dark night

I have heard an angel's word

A song like a sun warming my world

I couldn't locke the gate of my heart

And ignore the magic of that sight

An angel like a charming guide

Gave me a sense of honour and pride

And treated me as a great gallant

It was a stream of a wonderful dream

Not a far rare frightning nightmare

It was the same rhyme of a sun beam

Like a fair fresh pure air

brave_heart
2007-12-28, 15:39
Peace be upon you
Hello cute angel
Your poetry is very nice
I wish to read more if you can
Take care

cute_angel
2007-12-28, 18:06
Hello brave heart

really I'm so happy to see your reply

and glad to read your words

thanks so much

be sure if I write any new poem with God willings I'll put it here

thanks

God bless you

setifienne
2008-01-03, 15:43
salam dear sis
excellent poem ! thanx a lot ,it brought a big smile to my face and a great joy to my heart , keep it up and let us enjoy such sweet and joyful words
Regards

cute_angel
2008-01-03, 16:49
Oh my dear sis

really your words make me fly

because you who brought happiness and joy to my heart

you who makes me smile

because you've liked my simple poem

when the others didn't except for my brother brave_heart

I'm really really appreciating your passage

asking God to give u all best things in that world

REgards

God bless you

Mohamed
2008-01-06, 23:44
Peace be upon you sister. I have also liked your poem, but the trouble is when we read something that reachs our heart we will not find words easily to express that. I hope you will find inspiration to write more and more. Thanks a lot dear sister

cute_angel
2008-01-08, 14:21
Peace be upon you too

what can I say to say

your words are really giving me hope and happiness

in addition to the desire to write more

thanks so much

and we are waiting for your splendide poems too

God bless you

smart
2008-03-13, 17:13
thank you so much for this lovely poem
i will send you my poem next time

smart
2008-03-13, 17:16
thank you so much for this lovely poem
i will send you my poem next time

cute_angel
2008-03-25, 15:50
thanks smart I'm happy that you liked my poem

I'll happy to recieve your poem next time ok

don't forget that