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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : My newest Poem


bila00b
2010-01-29, 10:12
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Think of all disrespect
Death is just life’s special effect
We live but no control
Wrong step ahead and you will fall

Others don’t have a pulse
their lives are just false
false have to turn true
only solution is nothing to do

I don’t have to remind
Answers are in your mind
You don’t have to be blind
But you can reach the light and find

Find yourself without you
Only solution is nothing to do

Everyday there is something to ask
Your life is just a transparent mask
A mask you can see through
Only solution is nothing to do

Does your soul make you a joke?
For many times you will choke
Where will you put the blame?
On the creature without shame


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amoula m.l.a
2010-01-31, 19:36
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey billa billa...:mh31:
hoping u r doing well....well well welllllllllllllllll
always shining...peace be up on u bro...
:19:;)really amazing & special words
hoping to c u moooooooooooooore & mooooore
ur sis

bila00b
2010-02-01, 13:20
thank you Amoula you are a very amazing person and don't let anyone else to tell you that you are not
hope you understand and thank you

amoula m.l.a
2010-02-01, 19:19
pst thnx bro...but i didn't understand....wht do u mean when u said don't let anyone tell u that coz u r not
tell me wht?
well...am busy coz am passing th bac this year but be sure that i won't let u alone i mean without my comments
so keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep writing & i'll add always my comments
it's a promis engrained by ur sis ok?
c u soon

bila00b
2010-02-02, 13:36
I meant that you are a great person and don't think other way
and I'm passing bac too
thank you for your comments

shooter
2010-02-03, 15:27
It was great. just keep on reading and enriching your english background.
By the way it would be better if you say "my most recent poem instead of newest"
you're great

bila00b
2010-02-04, 12:38
thank you so much for your coments