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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : my new poem plz read it.


ريان
2010-01-19, 18:18
Only you
when i met you
that's was by accident
and when i loved you
that's was a nice accident
how did we met
i didn't get it yet
how did you get in
my heart and made it listen
how did all that thing
happend with no reason
only you ; can take me
every where and let me fly
only you ; can touch me
and let me touch the sky

i wish u liked it ; thx :)

Rouch
2010-01-19, 19:01
Very Good Keep Shining Like This

ريان
2010-01-19, 19:27
thaks ma friend nice to hear that from u .

ٵڶقًـ۾ًـږღٵڶڝۼےـړ
2010-01-20, 17:16
You really have talent

wonderful words and distinctive feeling

between the lignes of your poem .

keep writing sis rayène and u'll an excellent poet

My regards ..and i'll very be very proud to read

more of yr poems later

ريتاج1
2010-01-21, 09:42
good poem thanks

bila00b
2010-01-21, 13:09
ٍThat was very touching poem , I think you fell in love and that's why these words are deep


God bless you

FARES888
2010-01-23, 15:54
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god that is really great thankx a lot

خولة سكيكدة
2010-01-24, 17:17
that 's verry sweet thanx

yakumo
2010-03-11, 21:09
ooh thanks...it's amazing

H@NEN
2010-03-21, 13:22
it's a nice poem thanks

Tsukikaze
2010-03-21, 17:49
it's a great poem!!
thanks a lot sis!
keep going!!l

dia24
2010-03-31, 19:42
wonderful i love this words.

dia24
2010-03-31, 19:43
thats girl is so lucky.

dia24
2010-03-31, 19:45
thank you so much

marissa.l
2010-03-31, 20:40
thank you very muche

houdanet
2010-05-18, 09:29
Wonderful very cool
*******You are really talented ******