What happen to our mind

[النوري1]

What happen to our mind what can u find
U must always look behind
Or u feel that u are precise and really u are blind
American, frensh, how about algerien kind
Lost paradise what happen to our mind

[⌈الأشتر⌉]

Thank you. but I think there is a lot of mistakes here if you let me help you

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you need to fix especially the tenses

for example
:

What happen to our mind ==> what happens(happened) to our minds

and here

Or u feel that u are precise and really u are blind

the meaning doesn't sound right according to the previous sentence.. I think you should use the future tense : Or you will feel
and better to replace
and really.. by but you are really blind


and:
Algerien==> Algerian
Frensh==> French


What do you think my friend
?

am I right
?

[النوري1]

very thanks for u

[oussgamer]

Goooooooood

[النوري1]

For a good end u must understand
For the best of ur friend put ur hand on my hand

[النوري1]

Move your hand my friend then surely you may understand
Your mind in what’s band
pull your problems back not behind no one you remind
or you walk all your life like a blind