What do you think

[عاشقة علم]

السلام عليكم نتمنى تعطولي رايكمم في هذه الفقرة تع الإنجليزية :

the shopping day is so important to everyone who wanna get his favorite things ; what he need for his house / car and to be sure to get the right and the good product with a nice quality our shop-keepers must be honest with every customer
first of all ; the shop-keeper must have human qualities par example : he should be helpful with customers and make them feel comfortable he also can be cheerful with them like when they enter the shop he had better smile and welcome them
Add to , the shop-kepper must be honest with his customers and give them the orginal product not the fake one he also should be fair in the price
finally , he must be plite with the customers especially the old ones , be respectful and fair
the shop-keepers take a big part from our shopping day so if they do this notices and advices the customers will be more greatful and feel happy

أي انتقاد في اللغة يرجي المساعدة

[الثلـــجة الصغيرة]

مرحبا أُختي ..
حسناً ، لا تستخدمي اللغة العامية الامريكية في الفقرات لان المصحح سيأخذ نظرة سيئة بأنك غير جادة في الكتابة
أقصد هنا wanna gotta gonna أتمنى فهمتي علي
كذلك يستحسن التوسع في الأمثلة و شرح الفكرة ، موفقة عزيزتي

ps : وين راكم فالانجليزية ؟

[الثلـــجة الصغيرة]

+ غير ذلك تعبيرك رائع موفقة ^^

[انسام الريح]

السلام عليكم نتمنى تعطولي رايكمم في هذه الفقرة تع الإنجليزية :

the shopping day is so important to everyone who wanna get his favorite things ; what he need for his house / car and to be sure to get the right and the good product with a nice quality our shop-keepers must be honest with every customer
first of all ; the shop-keeper must have human qualities par example : he should be helpful with customers and make them feel comfortable he also can be cheerful with them like when they enter the shop he had better smile and welcome them
Add to , the shop-kepper must be honest with his customers and give them the orginal product not the fake one he also should be fair in the price
finally , he must be plite with the customers especially the old ones , be respectful and fair
the shop-keepers take a big part from our shopping day so if they do this notices and advices the customers will be more greatful and feel happy

أي انتقاد في اللغة يرجي المساعدة

لن انتقد اصلا خاطيني هذه اللغة لكن شد انتباهي هذيك ل par حتى انا ديما تصرالي نخلط اللغات ههههههه

[عاشقة علم]

مرحبا أُختي ..
حسناً ، لا تستخدمي اللغة العامية الامريكية في الفقرات لان المصحح سيأخذ نظرة سيئة بأنك غير جادة في الكتابة
أقصد هنا wanna gotta gonna أتمنى فهمتي علي
كذلك يستحسن التوسع في الأمثلة و شرح الفكرة ، موفقة عزيزتي

ps : وين راكم فالانجليزية ؟

مرحبا بك :

i think that wanna or gotta is the same words of got and want so i don't see a problem with that cause one time my teacher give us an examle and she writte :i wanna see the sea

so thats wqy i"m used normaly

شكرا لك ع كل حال
الانجلزية رانا فدايركت سبيتش

[عاشقة علم]

+ غير ذلك تعبيرك رائع موفقة ^^

شكرا حبيبتي

[عاشقة علم]

لن انتقد اصلا خاطيني هذه اللغة لكن شد انتباهي هذيك ل par حتى انا ديما تصرالي نخلط اللغات ههههههه

ههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه اجل

[الثلـــجة الصغيرة]

Soooo you are in the last unit *^*

[أحلام جامحة]

السلام عليكم
التعبير عموما جيد و لكن لاحظت فيه بعض التسرع في التنقل بين الأفكار حيث أراها أحيانا غير مترابطة
إضافة إلى كلمات في غير موضعها المناسب يعني هي جائزة لكن هناك مفردات أبسط و أبلغ
و وجود بعض الأخطاء هنا و هناك كأخطاء إملائية و أخطاء في أزمنة التصريف
موفقة أختي

[SELIM2019]

السلام عليكم نتمنى تعطولي رايكمم في هذه الفقرة تع الإنجليزية :

the shopping day is so important to everyone who wanna get his favorite things ; what he need for his house / car and to be sure to get the right and the good product with a nice quality our shop-keepers must be honest with every customer
first of all ; the shop-keeper must have human qualities par example : he should be helpful with customers and make them feel comfortable he also can be cheerful with them like when they enter the shop he had better smile and welcome them
Add to , the shop-kepper must be honest with his customers and give them the orginal product not the fake one he also should be fair in the price
finally , he must be plite with the customers especially the old ones , be respectful and fair
the shop-keepers take a big part from our shopping day so if they do this notices and advices the customers will be more greatful and feel happy

أي انتقاد في اللغة يرجي المساعدة
هناك بعض الاخطاء وخاصة اللغة العامية slang لا تستعمل ابدا في النصوص او الفقرات سواء في امريكا او اي دولة اونغولوفونية
here's an example
Shoping has became a "must" in the one's life, it happens nearly on a daily basis, breaking it apart infew words, it's basically going to the mall to buy things we need in our daily life, whether it's clothes, food or so, however, us, consumers can be decieved by missleading ads, frauds, fake ads and new trends.
I, myself, believe that the relation seller-buyer should be 100 per cent honest and far away from any lies or tricks, if not it won't be the "ethetical" job as it should be,
However this happens all the time, and by this I mean the misleading and fake ads, because even if there was few who don',t seller nowadays think about the money and nothing but that, they don't care about the after sell, about quality, neither about the feed back nor buyer experience.
there is however a few methods to avoid that that I myself use, for example reading the reviews, people tend to be honest to help each other after they buy the same product so they write about it, and that is call a review, reviews can be really helpfull and can tell so much informations that aren't mentioned buy the seller. another way is to just ask about it, sellers, people, cousins whoever! atleast you get an idea.
you know as much as it looks tempting and realistic nowadays ads, the quote "too good to be true" can really apply here, am not saying all sellers are liars, but there is no harm if you use your brain for 5minutes before jumping into the shopping wave, it can benifit you, it can save you money and disappointment.
forgive me my mistakes if you found any, these are my words though.

[SELIM2019]

مرحبا بك :

i think that wanna or gotta is the same words of got and want so i don't see a problem with that cause one time my teacher give us an examle and she writte :i wanna see the sea

so thats wqy i"m used normaly

شكرا لك ع كل حال
الانجلزية رانا فدايركت سبيتش

"wanna" and gotta" are a shortcut for want to and got to, these are used in AMERICAN slang not in regular english
هذه عامية ولا تستعمل كما قلت في الفقرات والنصوص, تستعمل في الرسائل للاختصار نعطيك بعض الامثلة التي تسمعينها في الافلام ولن تجديها لا في الكتب
finna= about to
ain't= (to be) not
lol= laughing out loud
smh= shaking my head (disappointment) n
chick= a good looking girl
fine= handsome
edibles= drugs
استعمالك لهذه الكلمات مثل استعمالك للغة العامية تاعنا في اللغة العربية
ايضا تصحيح لجملتك في الاعلى
I think that wanna and gotta are the same as want to and got to, so I don't see a problem with using it, yet, my teacher herself used it in sentence that she wrote to us.
that's why I use it on a regular basis.
**

[عاشقة علم]

"wanna" and gotta" are a shortcut for want to and got to, these are used in AMERICAN slang not in regular english
هذه عامية ولا تستعمل كما قلت في الفقرات والنصوص, تستعمل في الرسائل للاختصار نعطيك بعض الامثلة التي تسمعينها في الافلام ولن تجديها لا في الكتب
finna= about to
ain't= (to be) not
lol= laughing out loud
smh= shaking my head (disappointment) n
chick= a good looking girl
fine= handsome
edibles= drugs
استعمالك لهذه الكلمات مثل استعمالك للغة العامية تاعنا في اللغة العربية
ايضا تصحيح لجملتك في الاعلى
I think that wanna and gotta are the same as want to and got to, so I don't see a problem with using it, yet, my teacher herself used it in sentence that she wrote to us.
that's why I use it on a regular basis.
**

i know it all just don't make it so complicated thank you next !

[مُـ‘ـُنُـ‘ـُـعُـ‘ـُمُـ‘ـُ]

مرحبا بك :

i think that wanna or gotta is the same words of got and want so i don't see a problem with that cause one time my teacher give us an examle and she writte :i wanna see the sea

so thats wqy i"m used normaly

شكرا لك ع كل حال
الانجلزية رانا فدايركت سبيتش


don't use wanna, gotta and the other informal words
هل رأيت نص كتبوا فيه هذوا الكلمات ؟

نفس الشيء كي تكتبي بالذارجة تاعنا في فقرة اللغة العربية ^^