طلبتكم و رديتوني

[iman mimi]

لاه يعني طلبتكم في فقراات الانجليزية و واحد ماعبرنيييي

و الله رايحة نهبللللل راني حابة نحفظ ga3 الفقرات psq مانيش فاهمتها طوول

حابة ندي فالفقرة على الاقل 3 تعيشووووووو الله يحفظكم اعطوليي فقرات يكونو مش طوال و ملاح

الله ينجحكم كاااامل

[black dark knight]

هذه على child labour عمل الاطفال -كتبتها انا -


Many children around the world , especially in india and africa , are forbade from their childhood .by being engaged in child labour, hard and dangerous works .because of their illiterate parents or their big families or because of being poor....
I think that child labour is a wrong thing , because ,it violate childrens rights like : education , playing , having friends ... and it causes health problems , in addition working childs become so fragile when they grow up due to the heavy weight them have to carry ...
We have to stop this phenomenon by , firstly . making tough punishment to businesses who use child labour . secondly , Raising awareness of the seriousness of using this innocent childs .finally, making special complimentary schools in order to gave those children the chance the get a right education..
In conclusion, children’s rights must not be defended only by international organizations like UNICEF and UNESCO but it must be defended by us too
للوحدة الاولى

[black dark knight]

و هذه complaining letter تجدين الموضوع في ص 130 من الكتاب
-محاولتي الخاصة-
Dear sir or madam
Im writing to complaint about the holiday advertisement wich was in the newspaper, and wich you have promise us that we will never forget
My holiday with your company did not correspond to what the advertisement claim. Firstly, the advert states that every day we will be able to choose from a lot of activities , but in fact , their was only two activities ofred per day . Secondly, the advert promises us of a group-work activities like : camping and tow problem-solving activities , Unfortunately , we coudn’t even pitch a tents . Thirdly, it says that we can enjoy relaxing games at some of remarkable facilities at the residential center ....but ..instead , they put us in a youth hostel , which was seven kilometres away .and we never saw the residential center..there were neither buse no taxies . and the game..there were only : table tennis , and a pack of cards ...finally the food and beds their were a disaster, we found a dirty bed-clothes and a bad tasting food..
In general, our holiday was a catastrophe ,and as a result of all these non-kept promises, i feel so upset and angry , because i wasted my time cand money in such thing .
Therefore, i want my money back
Yours faithfuly,(you wright your name)
Enc.the facsimile of our reservatins
للوحدة الثانية

[black dark knight]

و هذه بعض الاخرى
http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=318833

[ino sweet]

يا اختي حاولي تحلي مواضيع و فقط الانجليزية امرها سهل اغلب الاسئلة قوااعد

الفقرة الموضوع الاول فيها دائما 3 نقاط على الشكل بمعنى انك تخلي فراغ تبداي بحرف كبيــر تنتهي بنقطة الفقرة الثانية الى السطر و هكذا

و 2 على المضمون،،و توظيـــف الجمل الل راح يمدهملك هو انت ما عليك الا تربطي بينها بروابط بســــــيطة and,,fiirst,,,,,,in addition ,,,,,finally

و انت انتهيت

يعني ببساطة مش شرط الفقرة تكـــون مبتكرة

فقرة بسيـــــــطة فالموضوع الاول تدي 4.5 ،،،او حتى 5

ليس كل شيء حفظ


بالتوفيــــــق

[iman mimi]

شكراااااااااااااااااااااااا بارك الله فيكم ربي يوفقكم نشاالله

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