~وْضــــًـــًــَــــْْعُيًاتـــــــــــ أدُمـــــــــــــــــاجًْْيَةُ~~

[Fâdôùà2016]

:dj_17::dj_17::dj_17:ألســــــــــــــــلام عليكم و رحمة الله تعالى و بركاته أما بعد :
لقد فتحت هذا الموضوع ليقوم كل واحد منا بكتابة فقرة حسب الدروس و المجالات التي درسناها و تناولناها في مادة الانجلـــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــيزية
وقد فتحت الموضوع بعد القائي نظرة على موضوع مشابه له تماما لكن في مادة الفرنسة فتحته الاخت منار لكني شديدة التعلق بالانجليزية
لا علينا أسفة لانني اطلت الكلام
سأعين انا موضوع الفقرة في كل مرة لكن لدي ملاحظة :ان لا توضع فقرات متععدة تتناول موضوعا واحدا

لكل موضوع فقرة واحدة
سابدء انا و اضع اول موضوع و يتحدث عن endangered animal :حيوانات مهددة بالانقراض
و لاشك ان موضوعي لن يخلو من الاخطاء اتمنى تصحيحها ان و جدت :1::1::1:
:19::19::19:

[*آية*]

شكرا لكي أنا هلأ راني نراجع كي نكمل ندير فقرة على طفولتي باستعمال i used to

[Fâdôùà2016]

Stop Killing ânîmâls !!!
every year a lot of animals disappear ,but we don't save it ,Why??
Every one should ask him self why .... We think that the animals are a problem for our life ,So we kill them .But that's not the cause of disappearance.the right causesis the human and the natural:the human kill them for their fur,for food and for fun and this is not all the causes because the human also polluate the environnement and burning forests so this animals don't find the food to live .so he don't keep any olaces to let them live in peace.This causes laid to :deforestation ,pollution of the environnement and disappearnce of animals and ecological imbalance .
finally,we should save this animals by put them in protectorates and secure the food ...
This animalsContribute to the ecological balance so we should protect them :24::24:

[Fâdôùà2016]

شكرا لكي أنا هلأ راني نراجع كي نكمل ندير فقرة على طفولتي باستعمال i used to
لا :mh92::mh92::mh92: شكر على واجب عزيزتي انا بانتضار فقرتك

[Ibti Hal]

stop killing ânîmâls !!!
every year a lot of animals disappear ,but we don't save it ,why??
every one should ask himself why .... We think that the animals are a problem for our life ,so we kill them .but that's not the cause of disappearance.the right causes is the human and the natural:the human kill them for their fur, food and fun .he also pollute the environnement and burning forests so this animals doesn't find the food to eat which doesn't keep any places to let them live in peace.this causes laid to :deforestation ,pollution of the environnement and disappearnce of animals and ecological imbalance .
finally,we should save this animals by put them in protectorates and secure the food ...
because it's contribute to the ecological balance :24::24:


اختي فدوة صلحت لكي بعض الاخطاء توجد بعض العبارات التي حذفها لان هناك العديد من التكرار
مشكورة واصلي

[هنـــــاء]

:oابلنسبة لي ساقوم بكتابة فقرة بموضوع
*my futer plan *حياتي المستقبلية
وستكون على شكل رسالة
لن اتاخر في وضعها :o

[Fâdôùà2016]

اختي فدوة صلحت لكي بعض الاخطاء توجد بعض العبارات التي حذفها لان هناك العديد من التكرار
مشكورة واصلي
شكرا لكي اختي الغالية على مرورك و على تصحيح اخطائي لن اكررها مجددا اتمنى ان تكتبي انت ايضا و تشاركينا فقرتك بانتضارك عزيزتي :1::1::1:

[Ibti Hal]

حسنا عزيزيتي اعطني موضوعا لاكتبه لكي وسأبذل فيه قصارى جهدي

[هنـــــاء]

26/03/2016
Dear marry
Thank you for your last letter , this is my turn to tell to you what I ‘ll do after I get my bem
If I get my BEM I ‘ ll go to the High school and I ‘ll study there for 3 years if I ‘ll succeed in my bacaloria I ll move to the university to study medcin . I plan when I ll get my diploma I ll visit you in London perhaps I’ ll continue my studies there among you or go to American scientific researches to work there and get money

I passed my greetings to everyone ** goodbye

Yours X


فقرة بسيــــــــــــــــــطةصححو لي اخطائي اعلم
انها كثيرة هههه

[*آية*]

26/03/2016
dear marry
thank you for your last letter , this is my turn to tell to you what i ‘ll do after i get my bem
if i get my bem i ‘ ll go to the high school and i ‘ll study there for 3 years if i ‘ll succeed in my baccalaureate i ll move to the university to study medcin . I plan when i ll get my diploma i ll visit you in london perhaps i’ ll continue my studies there among you or go to american scientific researches to work there and get money

i passed my greetings to everyone ** goodbye

yours x


فقرة بسيــــــــــــــــــطةصححو لي اخطائي اعلم
انها كثيرة هههه



فقرة مليحة فيها أخطاء بسيطة

[هنـــــاء]

فقرة مليحة فيها أخطاء بسيطة

thank youuu:o

[Fâdôùà2016]

[ابتهال عزيزتي اذا قدرتي اكتبيلنا فقرة about pollution (causes and effectes and some solutions [/SIZE] Iam waiting U BABY <3 :) ................!

[Fâdôùà2016]

26/03/2016
Dear marry
Thank you for your last letter , this is my turn to tellyou about my expectationwhen I pass my bem
I ‘ ll go to the High school and I ‘ll study there for 3 years if I ‘ll succeed in my baccalaureate I ll move to the university to study medcin . I plan when I ll get my diploma I ll visit you in London perhaps I’ ll continue my studies there among you or go to American scientific researches to work there and get money

I pass my greetings to everyone ** goodbye

Yours X


فقرة بسيــــــــــــــــــطةصححو لي اخطائي اعلم
انها كثيرة هههه

فقرتي رائعة اتمنى ان تصححي اخطائك و لاتكرريها من الافضل تقولي pass not get لان الاولىpass تعني ساجتاز الامتحان و اتفوق اما الثانثة فتعني انك ستجتازين الامتحان و انت لا تعلمين هل ستنجحين ام لا لكنك تلميذة مجتهدة فمن الافضل انك تقولين الاولى و لقد قمت بتغيير بعض العبارات

[هنـــــاء]

فقرتي رائعة اتمنى ان تصححي اخطائك و لاتكرريها من الافضل تقولي pass not get لان الاولىpass تعني ساجتاز الامتحان و اتفوق اما الثانثة فتعني انك ستجتازين الامتحان و انت لا تعلمين هل ستنجحين ام لا لكنك تلميذة مجتهدة فمن الافضل انك تقولين الاولى و لقد قمت بتغيير بعض العبارات

شكرا على التصحيح فدوة لكنك
مخطأة تمام فـ passe تعني
ساجتاز ..وذلك دون العلم
بالنجاح او الفشل ام اget
فيعني اجتزت الامتحان
ونجحت فيه

لا ادري فربما
انا المخطأة رغم
اني متأكدة من اجابتي
الا ان اجابتك
منطقية هههه
:1::1::1:

[*آية*]

شكرا على التصحيح فدوة لكنك
مخطأة تمام فـ passe تعني
ساجتاز ..وذلك دون العلم
بالنجاح او الفشل ام اget
فيعني اجتزت الامتحان
ونجحت فيه

لا ادري فربما
انا المخطأة رغم
اني متأكدة من اجابتي
الا ان اجابتك
منطقية هههه
:1::1::1:


you're right

[هنـــــاء]

Pollution
Pollution is the biggest problem in our modern life . It doesn’t affect our country only but the whole world. There are different kinds of pollution which are relate to the environment, water pollution, air pollution, and land pollution
Man is the main responsible because technology. By increate factories ,companies and the number of vehicles ,he causes lot of diseases mentally and physically
So, we must together link our effort to stop polluting earth


*آرائكم و ملاحظاتكم

[Fâdôùà2016]

pollution
pollution is the biggest problem in our modern life . It doesn’t affect our country only but the whole world. There are different kinds of pollution which are linked to the environnement like :, water pollution, air pollution, and land pollution
man is the main responsible becauseof technology. By increate factories ,companies and the number of vehicles ,he causes lot of diseases mentally and physically
so, we must together link our effort to stop polluting earth


*آرائكم و ملاحظاتكم

فقرتكـــــــــــــــــــــ رائعة حقا و في القمة مشكورة مزيد من التالق

[هنـــــاء]

فقرتكـــــــــــــــــــــ رائعة حقا و في القمة مشكورة مزيد من التالق

merci:o merci :Dmerci;) merci :rolleyes:merci
طلعتيليــــــــــــــــ~ــــــي لموراال
ههههههههه
+
شكرا على
التصحيحـ~

[Fâdôùà2016]

merci:o merci :Dmerci;) merci :rolleyes:merci
طلعتيليــــــــــــــــ~ــــــي لموراال
ههههههههه
+
شكرا على
التصحيحـ~


Nô biggie dear :19: :19: :19: Hhhhh

[ندوشةة]

فكرةة جميييلة اختي فدوة
سأحاول كتابة وضعية في اي مادة و سأضعها ان شاء الله
لي عودة

[Fâdôùà2016]

فكرةة جميييلة اختي فدوة
سأحاول كتابة وضعية في اي مادة و سأضعها ان شاء الله
لي عودة


حَســــــــــــــــــــــــــــــنًَا عَز}يـــــــــــــــزَتي ندوشـــــــــــــــــة أنا في انتظَارك :1:

[Ibti Hal]

اهلا اختي فدوة شكرا على موضوعك لكن لم انتبه للموضوع الذي حددته لي وقد تمت كتابة تلك الفقرة اعطيني موضوعا آخر لاكتبه لكم

[Fâdôùà2016]

اهلا اختي فدوة شكرا على موضوعك لكن لم انتبه للموضوع الذي حددته لي وقد تمت كتابة تلك الفقرة اعطيني موضوعا آخر لاكتبه لكم

لا مشكلة عزيزتي تستطيعين الكتابة عن types of school in Algeria بانتضار محاولتك :1::1::1:

[آناء الليل]

hi every body : i'll write a paragraph about ben badis .

[آناء الليل]

Abdelhamid Ben badis is one of the greatest men who let their touches in many fields . He was the leader of the muslim reform movement in Algeria during the period of the French colonoilism .He kicked the bucket on December the 4th,1889 in the capital of l'Est Algerian Constantine . He grew up in a pious and cultived family whitch has educated him the Holy Quoran . At the age of 13 this .religious child has memorized it . In 1931 ,he founded the Association of Algerian Muslim Ulema to fight the unfair colonialism and to remove it . Through this organization he educated people sciences, literature and history to make them conscious . This emblematic figure dedicated his life to spread knowledge. Thats why he won the celebrity not only in Algeria but in the whole world Ben Badis passed away on April the 16th 1940 but he won't be forgotten because every year we celebrite this day to remember him . .

[آناء الليل]

*Sorry because i commit some mistakes i wish that you'll read my paragraph .
please correct the mistakes .

[Ibti Hal]

Good evning Fadwa i will write a letter about types of school in Algeria
Dear Adrienne
Hello . How are you? , i hope you are good ,thent thanks for your last letter , nomw it's my turn to tell somthing about education in Algeria
First , when the children was 5 years , he started study kindergarten for one year than he study at primary school until be 11 years
after that he study at middle school for 4 years who end whith the brevet exam
If he pass the prevet exam they continue her education the secondary school and work hard for three years to get the certificat of bacaloreate
Finally , they chose the job which will be in the future and learn some things about it in the university
I hope you like our programme of education , good bye and see you soon
your friend (Ibtihel)

[آناء الليل]

very nice paragraph but you make some mistakes we say child was 5 years not children (plural) and then you mean (بعد)

[آناء الليل]

we say also his education not her and i advice you to avoid using he sometimes and they other times .
انت رائعة ابتهال في تعبيرك wish you all the best

[هنـــــاء]

! hello girls
تعابيراتكم
قمة في
الابداع

[هنـــــاء]

To the mayor of ………
I type Mr. the mayor with all my respects to describe to you our dure situation after the spread of deferent garbage which destroy the view of the village and causes deferent illness
This problem is because the irresponsible inhabitants who throw rubbish anytime and anywhere and the problem of the worker
So , we must organize a day to clean the city , we need money and lot of been
Please accept again all my respects

[آناء الليل]

type Mr. the mayor with all my respects to describe to you our dure situation after the spread of deferent garbage which destroy the view of the village and causes deferent illness
This problem is because the irresponsible inhabitants who throw rubbish anytime and anywhere and the problem of the worker
So , we must organize a day to clean the city , we need money and lot of been
Please accept again all my respects




Woooooooow rositta so nice excellente

[Fâdôùà2016]

To the mayor of ………
I type Mr. the mayor with all my respects to describe to you our dure situation after the spread of different garbage which destroy the view of the village and causes DIFFERENTillness
This problem is because the irresponsible inhabitants who throw rubbish anytime and anywhere and the problem of the worker
So , we must organize a day to clean the city , we need money and lot of been
Please accept again all my respects


فقرتك رائعة حقا لكن اود ان اسالك ماذا تعنين ب dure لانها كلمة فرنسية و تعني قاسي اذا كنتي تريدين هذا المعنى فمن المفضل ان تقولي tough
CONTINUE you Don't have a mistakes in your paragraph excellenT

[Fâdôùà2016]

Abdelhamid Ben badis is one of the greatest men who let their touches in many fields . He was the leader of the muslim reform movement in Algeria during the period of the French COLONIALISM .He kicked the bucket on December the 4th,1889 in the capital of l'Est Algerian Constantine . He grew up in a pious and cultivated family which has educated him the Holy Quoran . At the age of 13 this .religious child has memorized it . In 1931 ,he founded the Association of Algerian Muslim Ulema to fight the unfair colonialism and to remove it . Through this organization he educated people sciences, literature and history to make them conscious . This emblematic figure dedicated his life to spread knowledge. Thats why he won the celebrity not only in Algeria but in the whole world Ben Badis passed away on April the 16th 1940 but he won't be forgotten because every year we celebrite this day to remember him . .

very sweet continue Iwish to u the best in BEM :1::1:

[ندوشةة]

سلآآم اعطييوني موضوع نكتب عليه my paragraph ^_^

[Fâdôùà2016]

Good evening Fadoua i will write a letter about types of school in Algeria
Dear Adrienne
Hello . How are you? , i hope you are good ,then thanks for your last letter , now it's my turn to tell something about education in Algeria
First , when the child was 5 years , he start his study inkindergarten for one year then he study at primary school until be 11 years
after that he study at middle school for 4 years which end with the brevet exam
If he pass the brevet exam he continuehis education in the secondary school and work hard for three years to get the certificate of baccalaureate
Finally , he choose the job of the future and learn some things about it in the university
I hope you like our programme of education , good bye and see you soon
your friend (Ibtihel)

Hello Ibtihel I wish that you are awesome now .You have some mistakes ,but i wanna tell u that you will be better in English , Good job anyways ,don't' repeat your mistakes Okay
Good bye
:1::1::1:

[آناء الليل]

thanks Fadwa . i want ask you something .... Are you a student as we , i mean are you studing at the middle school?

[Fâdôùà2016]

thanks Fadwa . i want ask you something .... Are you a student as we , i mean are you studing at the middle school?

Yùp dear I'm like u a student at middle school this year i wil pass my BEM exam

[Fâdôùà2016]

سلآآم اعطييوني موضوع نكتب عليه my paragraph ^_^



you can write about your childhood mimories
I'm waitinG u :mh31:

[حًنــآنَ]

اقترحوا علي موضوع اكتب عليه فقرة
بالمناسبة فقراتكم كلها رآئعة ، وآصلوآ

[Fâdôùà2016]

اقترحوا علي موضوع اكتب عليه فقرة
بالمناسبة فقراتكم كلها رآئعة ، وآصلوآ


[Fu can write about anythinG you want [/FONT] IMAGINE THAT YOU ARE A RETIRED man or women write about your life and your expectation in the future .use:the future simple and relative pronouns :which,who,that,..ext[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR]

[كاتمة الاحزان]

بارك الله فيكم ^^
كنت حابة نشارك لكن رانا متأخرين في الإنجليزية هادا وين دخلنا في المجال 2 life in the future

[Fâdôùà2016]

بارك الله فيكم ^^
كنت حابة نشارك لكن رانا متأخرين في الإنجليزية هادا وين دخلنا في المجال 2 life in the future

حسنا غاليتي انتم متاخرون قليلا لكن ستستفادين بعد قراءة الوضعيات لعلها تفيدك

[هنـــــاء]

فقرتك رائعة حقا لكن اود ان اسالك ماذا تعنين ب dure لانها كلمة فرنسية و تعني قاسي اذا كنتي تريدين هذا المعنى فمن المفضل ان تقولي tough
CONTINUE you Don't have a mistakes in your paragraph excellenT

نعم اقصد به القسوة
و بطريقة اخرى
our bad situation

[Fâdôùà2016]

نعم اقصد به القسوة
و بطريقة اخرى
our bad situation


Yùp u càn say like that can u têll mê yôùr nàme please

[هنـــــاء]

call me Hana if you allow ^_^

[Fâdôùà2016]

it's okay nice to meet you Hana .Frankly I love this name becauseit's the name of my Ideal friend

[هنـــــاء]

ahh ok glad to meet you fadoua

[Fâdôùà2016]

ahh ok glad to meet you fadoua

:dj_17::dj_17::dj_17::dj_17::1:

[dhekra]

letter opening about Ibn badiss

Thought Ibn Badis didn't participate in the Algerian revolution , he was the hero of the Algerian independence for me . There Are Three reason why
First , he was a man of peace,he foughtthe French colonialism by using his pen and his ideas
Second , he created The Algerian Muslim Association which helped the Algerian to get their freedom
Third , he didn't fear the french colonialism , and this is why he won the respect of the Algerian and all the world pepoles . So we should remember him at least once a yer on April 16 th.

[Fâdôùà2016]

letter opening about ibn badiss

thought ibn badis didn't participate in the algerian revolution , he was the hero of the algerian independence for me . There are three reason why
first , he was a man of peace,he fought the french colonialism by using his pen and his ideas
second , he created the algerian muslim association which helped the algerian to get their freedom
third , he didn't fear the french colonialism , and this is why he won the respect of the algerian and all the world's pepoles . So we should remember him at least once a year on april 16 th.







موضوع رآئع خالي من الأخطاء

[حًنــآنَ]

good job
study hard