Sorrow Harmony

[maghi]

Sorrow's Harmony


When the seconds becomes hours
When the hours becomes days
When the days becomes years


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When you feel so sad
And you don’t find a friend

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When your dream dies
And life seems a basket of lies

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When people slowly kill you
And you don’t know what to do

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When the street becomes dark
And your soul needs to ask

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When they break your heart
And you don’t know how to restart

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Don’t lose hope
Because days will show you the truth
And just the truth


With the drops of my pen

[fulla23]

thank you very much
it was very interesting and very beautiful
i think it is the better one

[maghi]

thank you very much
it was very interesting and very beautiful
i think it is the better one

I'm the one who should thank you...
that's so kind of you ...
your signature on my paper is an honor
for me ..I really appreciate that dear ...

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hello;
I would like to welcome you in this forgotten section stay here and contribute and don't hesitate to post your writings ... I really liked this piece of poetry and it's well organized keep it up

[maghi]

Hello;
I would like to welcome you in this forgotten section stay here and contribute and don't hesitate to post your writings ... I really liked this piece of poetry and it's well organized keep it up
Thanks a lot, your praise is much more than I deserve,

Your sharing perfumed my paper,

I really appreciate that, I’m gonna do my best

to keep it up…

[.kiki]

Thank you very much for sharing this with us, intersting indeed.
Umm.. just a little note, I believe we use becomes instead of becomes when it's plural? so instead of "seconds becomes...." we say "second become..."
keep it up!

[maghi]

Thank you very much for sharing this with us, intersting indeed.
Umm.. just a little note, I believe we use becomes instead of becomes when it's plural? so instead of "seconds becomes...." we say "second become..."
keep it up!

thank you so much dear ..
your notes are like diamond
pearls..
so glad for your being on
this page.

[nana47]

peace be upon you friend
before writing any thing just wanna say forgive my weak langage
thanks for sharing it was nice

i wanna share some words with you
i dont know why i'm feeling like that
“Bessha” all will be ok
I say that always in my first hours in my sad days
All going to be wright
And the wrong will be wright
The smiles “falso “will be someday a pure one
The smile fake faces that I see every day will change some day
And “cash nhar “I’ll find just the pure persons in my life
In my life I dream always to get my pure life
….the life where all things will be as I want
and alwayse a new day will cames

[maghi]

peace be upon you friend
Wa alaykoum salam
..
before writing any thing just wanna say forgive my weak langage
it's not weak dear .. we all have issues
..
thanks for sharing it was nice
and thanks for your being in my topic

i wanna share some words with you
that's an honor for me
...
i dont know why i'm feeling like that
“Bessha” all will be ok
I say that always in my first hours in my sad days
All going to be wright
And the wrong will be wright
The smiles “falso “will be someday a pure one
The smile fake faces that I see every day will change some day
And “cash nhar “I’ll find just the pure persons in my life
In my life I dream always to get my pure life
….the life where all things will be as I want
and alwayse a new day will cames

a new day will come
..
so cool .. I liked it ..
I just don't understand the words between brakets?

[nana47]

a new day will come
..
so cool .. I liked it ..
I just don't understand the words between brakets?


the words between brakets are familiar arabic ******** (عامية ) it's a style of writing hope that you like it

[maghi]

the words between brakets are familiar arabic ******** (عامية ) it's a style of writing hope that you like it


Oh ..really .. I liked it ..
it's such a good idea ..
this strange style to avoid the regular writings ..
Good luck ..

[Southpaw]

nice one ^^ keep up the good work

[maghi]

nice one ^^ keep up the good work
your being in this topic is much nicer ..
Inchallah .. I'm gonna try to keep it up ..

[maghi]

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