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[hicham91]

hi sis
this is the poem i told u about
i hope u like it


Before i learnt how to write, i’ve been taught how to humble
The way my mind works, and my thought’s rumble
My words against people’s feelings… no, I can’t gamble
That’s a big guilty… I can not handle
I'm not that bussy … my words will amble

We may had battle or we played a game
But your condition and others are not the same
I said what I said searching for fun, not seeking the fame
Hope the words made us close, cz ur satisfaction is what I aim

I’ll write one note : ‘my word is my pride’
I’ll say it: your masterpiece above us shall shine and ride
And if that’s wrong, I’ll count it as a fact i would hide
Cause I’ll gain a friend, a teacher, an artist who should be named as poetry bride

[سطايفية بكل فخر]

hello bro
finalllly u put the poem lazy boy
really its amazing words
i keep it as a souvenir from you bro
thx to put it and keep writing ok

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hello; I thought that this is your personal writing so I decided to move to the member writing sections coz it's the appropriate one to post your personal writings
good luck
ps: I like the poem

[oumhanni]

Wonderful, thanks

[قدس الاسلام]

It is really surprise to me to know that you are writing in english
really you deserve MY SISTER

[hicham91]

hi.... i wrote that as a reply
it took me 15 min... it is not very well
and sorry forgot to mention ESS lol



i set the clock... to give you a last reply
prepare the rhyme... and open up the words supply
my sister.. its not laziness... its time and now i comply
as a hope giver and back by time since you was a butterfly (papillion.2gz vers trettoir hhhhhhh)
you helped me many times... and now my turn to return the favor
you are in djelfa forum... and without u it has no flavor
you help all the people here.. shortly you r a life saver
you are an idol... dont give up and become a waiver
its not about how hard life can get... its about how much you can be braver
if you ever saw an opportunity... just apply
i have faith in you... as you can help others to stand... you can mke urself fly
tik tok... three,two,one,, and the clock says bye
...

[سطايفية بكل فخر]

hello
sorry i didnt reply u before because i was busy u konw im still studing khkhkh
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realy u took just 15 min to reply§ its good n abt the words u r right they r not well but they r amazing
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thx bro im so happy to hear these words they mean a lot to me specially in this time , happy coz u didnt forget our brotherhood n our friendship btw good u still remember some moments of the sweet past ( yamat l bac hhh) when we were young with energy n we were hopeful now (rahat 3lina) we r old n lazy as the grandparents n i swear after many years i ll have azhimer lol
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me too i have faith in u bro n i know that u r not a lazy boy but i ll call u always lazy boy (19 man badlouch hadratna)
i keep it as a souvenir from you bro
keep writing n dont frget ess n real madrid next time hh
have a nice days bro

[سطايفية بكل فخر]

good evning bro
happy aid 4 u n all ur family
its long time lazy boy
how r u
what do u doin in ur life
i hope that everything is good with u
all the best bro
we wait ur new poems

[oussgamer]

Nice one, plus learned new words. Thanks