Poetry competition

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Poetry Competition
The best/ Lyric/ Acrostic/ diamante poem


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Dear faithfull members, Although the competition is is likely to be entertaining. It will also meant to carry learning goals
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In this part, we would like you to write poetry provided that you respect one of the three poetry procedures below



1) Dimante poem:



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Follow the example below to be able to write a very short poem in the shape of a diamond





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A diamante poem is made up of 7 lines using a set structure:


Line 1: Beginning subject

Line 2: Two describing words about line 1
Line 3: Three doing words about line 1
Line 4: A short phrase about line 1, a short phrase about line 7
Line 5: Three doing words about line 7
Line 6: Two describing words about line 7
Line 7: End subject
An example of a diamante poem


Bike
Shiny, quiet,
Pedaling, spinning, weaving
Whizzing round corners, zooming along roads
Racing, roaring, speeding
Fast, loud,
Car





2) Acrostic poem:


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The example below will illustrate how an acrostic poem can be

a) Write an acrostic poem about one of the following terms:

patience/ Blessing/ paradise/

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3) The Lyric poem:

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It’s when you write about a personal, emotional experience or feeling

Members in the English club are famous for writing such kind of poems



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The competition is about the best Diamante poem
the best acrostic and lyric poem as well

[Asolvip]

ok then i'll be the first to put her poem of the 3rd kind :
The title:
Please Stay !

I’m lost , I’m dead I can’t even raise my head
I thought you’ll love me but you killed me instead
The dark room is holding my pain
My mind is shaken; I think I’m going insane
I loved you, you were my only one
I dreamt about you, you were my white swan
Where are you now? Where is my smile?
Why should you be so hostile?
You are my Angel and my soul
All your injuries I’ll delete them all


I’ll always be so stupid and bad
I know I’ll always make you feel sad
Can’t you forgive someone who’s dead?
My feelings were pure and true
Now I’ve got no clue
My life’s changed when I met you
I said I’ll never have a girl but you
You are my lost dream
Can’t you hear my scream?


I cried for you day and night
I wanted to set everything right
I wanted to end up our fight
I wanted to hold you tight
But you skipped out my hand
And you went to wonderland
Without you I can't stand
I draw a fake smile, yes I pretend
You are my every thing
You’re the queen and I’m your king
All I have to do is to sing
With a sad melody of my heart strings

You’re away! Far away … but I need you to stay
No tears, no fears, just smile for a day
You are mine only mine, please don’t go away
I’ll be there waiting you at the end of your way
So please stay …

[Asolvip]

thank you so much

[Asolvip]

Paradise

Pray to Allah and never stop
Angels will count your every tear drop
Rising your face to the sky
As your heart beats scream and cry
Did I choose the right way?
I wonder why am I throttled this way ?
Seeking for the potion of truth
Every day I’m looking for a proof

[Asolvip]

I tried my best to write the dimante peom:



Dark
Gloomy, sombre
Scary ,shocking , creepy
Thin corners, large dusty chandelier
Catching , killing, creaking
ghosts, blackness
castle

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Asolvip (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/member.php?u=463021)

Great Job dear

You were able to write about only one genre of the three

Yet, your writing style is amazing!

Thanks for being the first who undertakes the mission

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hello;
It's very to attend this contest
Can we contribute to all the four types of contest (poetry - literature - Islam door and english club)?
What about the deadlines?
is there any money for the winners hahaha

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Hello;
It's very to attend this contest
Can we contribute to all the four types of contest (poetry - literature - Islam door and english club)?
What about the deadlines?
is there any money for the winners hahaha



Hi there

Of course yu can contribute to whichever type you want ..
or the four types at once...
No problem!

We have not specified a deadline yet

Concerning money ...let me discuss it with the other supervisors hhh


Good Luck

[حكاية قلب]

Hey, First of all, Ramadhane Kareem to you all ♥
mmm, Maybe I will join this, I loved the Idea of the Competition,
see ya later ...

[whoseen]

very nice work...keep it up.....hurray for u Narina

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Hey, First of all, Ramadhane Kareem to you all ♥
mmm, Maybe I will join this, I loved the Idea of the Competition,
see ya later ...



See you again dear!

Ramadan Kareem, Too!!:mh92:

very nice work...keep it up.....hurray for u Narina

Thanks for backing me up ..Whoseen

See you soon, here.:mh92:

[سجودي لرب العالمين]

Hello everyone , and Sà7à ftorkoum
i just wanna ask are we supposed to write just one genre of the poems or all the three?
Thank u

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Hello everyone , and Sà7à ftorkoum
i just wanna ask are we supposed to write just one genre of the poems or all the three?
Thank u



Hello Dear
Ramadan Kareem

As you like , write one type pr the three types at once

Good Luck

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Salam Aalaikoum, Sa7a Ramdankoum
I am very sorry for being late I'm very busy and I didn't have conexion :o
Okay, here we go;
Diamante poem about (Palestine)

Palestine

Ignored, resistant

Suffering, screaming, and begging

Vulnerable to exploitation; but they’re not listening

Partying, denying and bowing

Afraid, hesitant

Arabs

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Here we got the...
Acrostic poem
Patience
Play the life’s game be ready from the start
Accept it like it is, adapt and live this opera
Tremendous it is this piece of art
Identify the plot never flee or fly
Evidence is the last aspect you expect in this life
Never get bored shocked, never ran or hide
Care for yourself and cause your haters paranoia
Every day’s basis with patience won’t annoy you.

Paradise(Acrostic poem with internal/ending rhymes)
Purified and hidden in the heaven for the pure hearts for whatever
Accumulated in, stimulate the good living with no scars forever
Repent if you’re a sinner, remember the poor when you eat your dinner
Aimingto it there is no comfy lift; however there is a step by step ladder
Do the good, be the good dealer; it doesn’t matter how but just don’t natter
It has to get worse, before it gets better. Feel those who live a life in the gutter
Stay strong. Isolation is better than bad friends; books are loyal and smarter
Empty your heart from the aversion, fill it with affection; laugh now, cry later.

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

and this is the Lyric poem
Death Row (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=1826827)