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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Poem of my hair for fun


bila00b
2009-09-05, 20:35
When you look at my hair
you'll understand why life is unfair
looks like the barber had a bad day
even him didn't know what to say

I look like a jewish robot
I'm crying it's not my faut
Maybe he wanted to dig to my brain
now my skull feels the rain

Girls when the see they scream
My gel is a feet cream
It's a hairy funny nightmare
And that's why life is unfair

bila00b
2009-09-05, 20:36
tell my your opinion

salsabil15
2009-09-08, 00:33
it's amazing...but u should review ur poem to correct some grammatical mistakes....
Good Luck

bila00b
2009-09-08, 11:42
ok thank you so much

أبوعبد الباسط
2009-09-08, 12:23
thanks a lot
this is what you said about your hair
what about hairless people
they are poor.they have nothingto cover their bold heads.
you may ask me that i am one of them.
of course not.

hairless17
2009-09-08, 16:41
thanks a lot
this is what you said about your hair
what about hairless people
they are poor.they have nothingto cover their bold heads.
you may ask me that i am one of them.
of course not.



So am I

http://prince14.jeeran.com/66.GIF

conqueror
2009-09-10, 09:31
hairless people are good looking .. really not bad