About a girl

[bila00b]

When i look in her eyes
i see an angel in discyes
i can see many lies
the sea of love will rise

The magic in her smile
followed by her face
a beaty from a mile
it's a love race

when she look at me
I imagine my life without me
i'm just a drop in the sea
i'm blind but she made me see

[chadliaicha]

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw , it's amazing

[feddag]

don't make a girl your god

[conqueror]

when she look at me
I ifeel thirsty
and I'll in mood to drink a tea
not a drop but like a Sea

[Nice Girl]

waaaaaaaaaaw
it's very nice
thinks

[sarita93]

that's greeeeeeeeeeeeeeat

[nibras]

welll thats fabulous im mean perfect well donne

[Darkness angel]

OMG,you'r so gone with this girl

[abella0823]

wawww veryyy nice poemmmmm

[bila00b]

thank you brothers and sisters ...to be or not to be

[ENGLISHlover]

are u crazy plzzzzzzzzzz back to ur mind u have a real world to leave in okkkkkk take care my son of ur future its better for u

[bila00b]

sorry but i can't control love ...can you stop loving someone

[قطرةندى]

She is luckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkky girl

[olivia daneham]

great belive me you are great
i liked your poem's so so much
i coulden't read and go without thanking you for the wonderful words

[bila00b]

thank you for the splendid words Olivia and god bless you

[olivia daneham]

it's the truth realy
i'm pressed for your writing

[bila00b]

thank you and I'll be watching your poems

[وينري]

It is really an awesome poem, that realy shows that u are really in love, but u really have to protect this love if u don't wanna lose , words are really great, and i really thank u!!!!!*

[bila00b]

Thank you so much but We broke up and I'm hurt and I will write about my pain

[نور الهدى دريد]

Wonderful words my brother is characterized by tenderness and sweetness, thank you for such participation

[dia24]

thank you so much

[dia24]

such a lovely words

[dia24]

but what does mean discyes???????????????????

[dia24]

waiting for your answers so please

[bila00b]

disguise means undercover
إخفاء

[عرش المعرفة]

can a ask you sur ???
what s mean " discyes "
thenk u for the " amazing words !!

[bila00b]

I wrote it wrong ....it's disguise and it means undercover

[جاكباور]

its very nice

[djirah27]

wich wonderful words and well organization

[belladona]

nice poem but realistic she is just a girl so dont make of her a godess

[bila00b]

hehe she is not god....but she is priceless...at least she was...I'm alone now ...thank you for the comments

[bila00b]

thank you for your comments

[Shooter16]

nice words

[bila00b]

thank you very much

[عيون الماس]

u re a great poet an u have very beautiful emotion continue like dat u will be a great in the future......God bless ya broth

[hafid47200]

thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[mimi_gabriela]

wowww.romantic lol!!
thanksss

[selma999]

so amazing

[dounia dalal]

thank you verry muche

[no way end of time]

you 're right it's hard to stop sedenly thinking abt some one but it's life
but the great love it's not the love of human being but because the love mean weekness in personality we should control our feeling and hold it at least the great and the perfect love is loving allah and his massenger and mouslims and our family it's better

[bila00b]

you are right

[BENDIB MALEK]

you are a great poet

my god

[bila00b]

well thank you but I'm not that great ...thank you for your comments

[mimissa22]

wonderful poem

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
thank you