Don't give up

[ASTUCIEUX]

peace be upon you

this is one of my poems hope you'll like it

Don't give up

When the stormy waters take you away

Don't give up you can find the way

You will be backin the light of the day

SO don't be shay just try to fly

Again with your dreams in the height sky

never say but always say hey

DO YOU KNOW WHY!!!!

Because you have a friend

Who is like silver or gold

with him you can avoid the bad

You will face what makes you bleed

You must be proud of such kind of friend

He will be your guide even you are blind

He will be with you till the end of the world

SO BE PROUD

[غرداوي]

You have aready reminded of the proverb that says "as long as therz life therz hope "so
I won't be neither shy ,nor I will give up

Thaths what I may say

[ASTUCIEUX]

mmmmmmmmmmmm actually I don't know this proverb it's new for me:rolleyes:

of course you haven't the right to be shay if you failed one day

you have to start again:)

anyway I appreciate your reply

thanks so much

[siham]

Salam

You write nice poems

and particularly optimistic ones

Siham

[ASTUCIEUX]

thanks sister

I appreciate your passage

God bless you

[selma999]

ur place is not here
u must be a great poem writer

[hamdadi]

Seriously ? Great writer ? Man it's just a copy paste okaayy
Everyone can do that

[biba94]

nice
i like it
wonderful meanings
never say never and give up
god bless u sis

[milia87]

nice poems

. i like it.
thank's

[teacher60015]

thanks you all

[teacher60015]

that's really amazing

[اميرة 15]

thank you very much

[amina96]

I like ur peom

[~كِبْريَاء أمِيرَة~]

your poem is really cool thank's