i'm sorry !

[روح قسنطينة]

last summer i wrote a poem 2 my best of friends , n i wanna share with u 2 tell me about ur opinions
K and M
I know that i hurt you
And i broke your heart too
My face is sad and blue
So gloomy and i just wanna spew
Oh! i was like dirty jew
Rude like that i lived in slew
Run away is what i wanna do
Yesterday, is the day when i knew
Knew that i was as bad as my shoe
Man tell me what shall a little girl can do

[نارينا]

the rhyme of the verses seems typical

Nice job

.....keep on writing ....
though girls are the subject theme of any vital issue ......

[whoseen]

last summer i wrote a poem 2 my best of friends , n i wanna share with u 2 tell me about ur opinions
K and M
I know that i hurt you
And i broke your heart too
My face is sad and blue
So gloomy and i just wanna spew
Oh! i was like dirty jew
Rude like that i lived in slew
Run away is what i wanna do
Yesterday, is the day when i knew
Knew that i was as bad as my shoe
Man tell me what shall a little girl can do


nice poem and nice name soul of constantine keep practising and reading poems

[روح قسنطينة]

the rhyme of the verses seems typical

Nice job

.....keep on writing ....
though girls are the subject theme of any vital issue ......



hhhhh
thnx sis :19:
but i stopped writing poems from last summer b'coz i'm bac student n i don't have time !!
by the way i'm a girl n this is not my count :p

[روح قسنطينة]

nice poem and nice name soul of constantine keep practising and reading poems

thnx bro !
i'll try 2 continue both of reading n writing poems b'coz the poesy is my only talent

[روح قسنطينة]

any comments ?_?

[Maroni47]

nice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Southpaw]

Very well ryhmed poem though ^^

thx

[alaa mimo]

wow good job it' s beautiful !!!!!!!!!!

[اعجوبة الحياة]

i love it

it is so nice

good jobe girl

[اعجوبة الحياة]

i love it

it is so nice

good jobe girl

[هنـــــاء]

it 's very fantastic .... !^* good job girl

[khalilm1]

Nice really appreciate that work you did

[Samiramro]

Thanks a lot

[1ishak]

jooooooooobGood nice

[Miss-Black]

Good job
i really like it
:19:

[kacimo.samy]

nice work dude

keep on