محتاجة لرايكم جميعاااااااا....

[owl city]

مرحبااا اصدقائي لقد طلبت منا استاذة الانجليزية وضع شعر قصير عن اي موضوع فاخترت انا ان اضع شعرااا عن امي و هدا هو شعري بقلمي الخاص فقولوا لي رايكم بصراحة و حبذاا لو تقولون لي ارائكم بادقق التفاصيل تفضلوا و انتقدوا و امدحوا ههه=
Dear mom
you're my shiny sun every day
I feel sad every second you're away
you're like a moon in a dark night
knows what is wrong and what is right
mom you're a wonderful flower
and you will stay like that for ever
I love you so much mother
you are always so awesome
and nice my lovely personne

تقبلوا تحياتي اختكم ***امينة****

[owl city]

اين انتممممممم........................

[owl city]

اصدقاااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااائي.. ....

[honey swifter]

رائئئع أمينة
الله يبارك
بارك الله في قدراتك حبيبتي

[مريم المتفائلة]

الاخت امينة والله في قمة الروعة لا ينقصه شيء

[M3sRine]

its verry nice and perfect poem

[owl city]

رائئئع أمينة
الله يبارك
بارك الله في قدراتك حبيبتي
انا جد مسرورة انه اعجبك و بارك فيك الرحمااان و شكراااا على مرورك المعطر نورتي الصفحة لينة غاليتي
في انتظار اراااء الاخرين و مدحهم و انتقاداتهم.......

[owl city]

الاخت امينة والله في قمة الروعة لا ينقصه شيء
شكرااااا حبيبتي حشمتيني هههههه نورتي الصفحة بمرووورك .....

[owl city]

its verry nice and perfect poem
thank you so much I'm soooooo glad that you like it .......

[سلمىسلمى]

what you have write is good
i liked it
but there is a little mistake

know what's wrong and what's right....♥

[شمس الاصيل هالة]

رائع واصلي الاجتهاد والمثابرة

[ترانيم الامل]

رائع يا امينة
اعجبني كثيرا بارك الله فيك

[owl city]

what you have write is good
i liked it
but there is a little mistake

know what's wrong and what's right....♥

اولااا شكرااا على مرورك لكن انت لي راكي غالطة
knows I mean THE MOON ** IT **we must make the S
اوك حبيبتي سلمى

[owl city]

رائع يا امينة
اعجبني كثيرا بارك الله فيك
اناااا جد فرحة لاننك احببته غاليتي ابتهاال ......شكرااا على مرورك حبوبتي

[saddam02]

Oui Si Bien

Bravvvvvvvvvooooooooooooo

[owl city]

Oui Si Bien

Bravvvvvvvvvooooooooooooo
Merciiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii bcppppppppppp...........

[0nesrine0]

wooow IT's very niceeee good job

[سلمىسلمى]

اولااا شكرااا على مرورك لكن انت لي راكي غالطة
knows I mean THE MOON ** IT **we must make the S
اوك حبيبتي سلمى


hhhh
you didn't understand me
i'm not talking about know
because the s is a big mistake
i'm talking about
rong ---wrong
have u understand
and don't forget
that i know English too much
and i can't make mistake like that
i mean the s
because something happen
to me which makes me don't forget the
s
hhhh

[owl city]

hhhh
you didn't understand me
i'm not talking about know
because the s is a big mistake
i'm talking about
rong ---wrong
have u understand
and don't forget
that i know English too much
and i can't make mistake like that
i mean the s
because something happen
to me which makes me don't forget the
s
hhhh



okey thank you soooo much i understand but don't be so salfish and snob me too i now english maybe better than you okey dear and all the people make mistakes by the way you musn't say happen ...you should say happened because it's in the past ***the girl who don't ***make mistakes hhhhhhhhhhh

[owl city]

wooow IT's very niceeee good job
Thanks my lovely girl ........................

[هدى المتفائلة]

انه رائع امينة ما شاء الله واصلي

[owl city]

انه رائع امينة ما شاء الله واصلي
شكراااا لك كبدودي و حبوبتي هدى نورتي الموضووووووووع

[sweet ninita]

مرحبا اختي ارجوا ان تكوني بخير
بالمناسبة اعجبني موضوعك جدا جدا جدا
ارجوا منكي ان تدخلوا الى هده السبورة ان لم يكن لديك مانع http://www.twiddla.com/1792975
بااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااي

[owl city]

مرحبا اختي ارجوا ان تكوني بخير
بالمناسبة اعجبني موضوعك جدا جدا جدا
ارجوا منكي ان تدخلوا الى هده السبورة ان لم يكن لديك مانع http://www.twiddla.com/1792975 (http://www.twiddla.com/1792975)
بااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااي
شكراااا حبيبتي على مرورك اني تما اوك حنونتي

[سلمىسلمى]

okey thank you soooo much i understand but don't be so salfish and snob me too i now english maybe better than you okey dear and all the people make mistakes by the way you musn't say happen ...you should say happened because it's in the past ***the girl who don't ***make mistakes hhhhhhhhhhh


I'm not proud of myself or something like that
And I think I set the thing that does not sin against the
And is the "s"
And you can not know English like me dear
This is impossible
As for my fault it was a mistake in writing
And I do not think it's good to mock
I hope understanding :19:
and who u know English better than me "even that is impossible"
u made many mistakes in your reply

i now english maybe better than you okey

the correction is
I know English maybe better than you okay
and the big mistake is
that
you don't know English better than me okay
hhhh
bye

[owl city]

I'm not proud of myself or something like that
And I think I set the thing that does not sin against the
And is the "s"
And you can not know English like me dear
This is impossible
As for my fault it was a mistake in writing
And I do not think it's good to mock
I hope understanding :19:
and who u know English better than me "even that is impossible"
u made many mistakes in your reply

i now english maybe better than you okey

the correction is
I know English maybe better than you okay
and the big mistake is
that
you don't know English better than me okay
hhhh
bye



HI HOW ARE YOU MY LOVELY GIRL THANKS FOR YOUR ANSWER AND REMARQUES I HAVE2 PRINCIPALE MISTAKES ALWAYS I DO THEM 1-STUDY I
2-KNOW
AND ABOUT OKEY OUR TEACHER TEACHED US TO WRITE IT LIKE THAT OKEY DEAR AND I KNOW ENGLISH BETTER THAN YOU MAYBE OR YOU KNOW BETTER THAN ME WE SHOULD DO A CHALLENGE SOME DAY WHEN WE ARE FREE TO KNOW WHO IS THE WINNNNER NO???????????
AND DON'T FORGET THAT YOU ALWAYS MADE A MISTAKE YOU WRITE WITH OUT CAPITAL
LETTERS
good night I'm witting your answer
oh my god I like so much talking in english
WITH PEOPLE I WISH SOME DAY WE SPEAK TOGETHER ENGLISH IN A PAGE OR TWIDDLA *****OKEY****

[سلمىسلمى]

hi
nice to see again and thanks for your reply
and we all hope that
we find someone to talk English with
bye

[hadjer lbc]

لا فض فوك
أكملي على هذا المنوال أخيتي في الله ~

[ملامح خجولة.]

رآآآئع عزيزتي واصلي
حفظك الله وحفظ لك امك وحفظك لها
وافرحها بكِ
++
موفقة حبيبتي

[hadjer lbc]

ليس العيب ان نخطئ العيب ان نعيد الخطأ
علابالي كامل تعرفوها بالصح حاولوا تكون انتقاداتكم للنصح مش للتبهديل
مكانش فينا واحد كامل
الكمال لله وحده

[ريمي2]

please selma stope what's this why you speak like this you know english very well that's good and we are happy for that but i think amina is like your sister and you must be mor polite with him i wish there is not a lot of mistakes and along than'x for you and i say for amina your woork is very nice

[سوسنة المروج]

مرحبا أختي أمينة كيف الحال؟
صدقيني خاطرتك رائعة بالنسبة لتلميذ في السنة الرابعة متوسط ونحن نعلم جميعا أن كل ابن ادم خطاء لكن الكل يحاول تصحيح الخطأ
واصلي على هذا الدرب اخيتي وفقك الله

[سلمىسلمى]

please selma stope what's this why you speak like this you know english very well that's good and we are happy for that but i think amina is like your sister and you must be mor polite with him i wish there is not a lot of mistakes and along than'x for you and i say for amina your woork is very nice
I apologize

But you keep up a lo tin your reply
I also did not say anything to Amina requires all these harsh words typed in your reply
And I think that Amina asked us to give them our opinion and to correct errors found
And I gave my opinion
So I ask you not to go too far and MAKE yourself wise among us:mad::mad::mad:

[owl city]

لا فض فوك
أكملي على هذا المنوال أخيتي في الله ~

رآآآئع عزيزتي واصلي
حفظك الله وحفظ لك امك وحفظك لها
وافرحها بكِ
++
موفقة حبيبتي

ليس العيب ان نخطئ العيب ان نعيد الخطأ
علابالي كامل تعرفوها بالصح حاولوا تكون انتقاداتكم للنصح مش للتبهديل
مكانش فينا واحد كامل
الكمال لله وحده

please selma stope what's this why you speak like this you know english very well that's good and we are happy for that but i think amina is like your sister and you must be mor polite with him i wish there is not a lot of mistakes and along than'x for you and i say for amina your woork is very nice

مرحبا أختي أمينة كيف الحال؟
صدقيني خاطرتك رائعة بالنسبة لتلميذ في السنة الرابعة متوسط ونحن نعلم جميعا أن كل ابن ادم خطاء لكن الكل يحاول تصحيح الخطأ
واصلي على هذا الدرب اخيتي وفقك الله

i apologize

but you keep up a lo tin your reply
i also did not say anything to amina requires all these harsh words typed in your reply
and i think that amina asked us to give them our opinion and to correct errors found
and i gave my opinion
so i ask you not to go too far and make yourself wise among us:mad::mad::mad:

هههههه غبت يومين صرا كل هذا هيا لا باس حبيباتي دعونا لا نتشاجر كلنا نجيد الانجليزية و كلنا نعشقها و كما قالت الاخت هاجر ان الكمال لله و ليس للعبد يا سلمى و شكراااا على ارائكم جميعا نورتولي الموضوع حقااا احبكم صديقاتي حبا جما و حتى اليوم عرفت مدى تعلقي بكن صراحة..... تفضلوا تحية مني و قبلة لكم هيا في امان الله و حفظه ووفقكم جميعاااااااااااااااااااا
و ترقبوا الموضوع محتاجة رايكم *2* عما قريب وشكرااااااااااااا

[ريمي2]

Gerank apologized to my sister, but when I saw your response is lat me
Angryand I wish you accept my apologies selma i am very sorry

[سلمىسلمى]

هههههه غبت يومين صرا كل هذا هيا لا باس حبيباتي دعونا لا نتشاجر كلنا نجيد الانجليزية و كلنا نعشقها و كما قالت الاخت هاجر ان الكمال لله و ليس للعبد يا سلمى و شكراااا على ارائكم جميعا نورتولي الموضوع حقااا احبكم صديقاتي حبا جما و حتى اليوم عرفت مدى تعلقي بكن صراحة..... تفضلوا تحية مني و قبلة لكم هيا في امان الله و حفظه ووفقكم جميعاااااااااااااااااااا
و ترقبوا الموضوع محتاجة رايكم *2* عما قريب وشكرااااااااااااا




woooooooooooow



always mu name in the reply

:confused: