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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : untiteled


amelhope
2014-08-24, 20:33
Hi everyone enjoy this :

I woke up at night
And sit under the moon light
To hold a pen and write
About the things that bring me delight
Like those beautiful sights*
Which makes me forget that spite
But I don't have this might*
So I have just to keep quite
Cause I'm not ready for another fight
And that's what I think is right

saha21
2014-11-18, 14:37
good, waiting for other contributions

Bouchra mimi
2014-12-02, 14:38
Nice one , I like it

Good job, keep it going

Waiting for more

Best of luck

الضب الزين
2014-12-07, 16:17
(Amazing ... keep writing ( but without fighting hhhhhh

Mai chan
2014-12-18, 20:59
Good but try to use one tense the past
all in all good
keep it up