Ain’t playin

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

“Ain’t playin”

‎Written: 06/07/2013
Modified: 15/08/2014


Seeking to expose the missing truth
Every time I write I bring the proof
Life is a coward never stops the troops
Reality inspired, no cashes I scoop
Written and spread, no revenue
So many are lost in this avenue
Bunch of losers lost the Follow-through
Clowns and liars ain’t being true
I’m the same dude I didn’t sell my soul
Even through the bullshits that I’ve been told
I’m gonna shine like a shining gold
Gonna be the same one-faced and bold
Militant lyrics in the subject’s core
U wanna take a ride; join my course
Books inspired; that’s my source
Rap is dead, they buried his corpse
Now he’s back so meet his ghost


Black ink and lyrics, I’m in brain and spirit
My adversaries couldn’t get it the way I spit it
Coz I ain’t playing; Ain’t Playing

Your concepts jumbled by Hollywood
Better have a little bit of the rectitude
Boy youhave a problem of attitude
Stay conscious ask for fortitude
I’m self-educated, I try to be serious
So many think I’m so mysterious
To rap I’m furious, I’m not imperious
To see the rap high I’m delirious
Don’t wonder why it is my skeleton
When I feel gloom it’s my medicine
Dose after dose it’smy Cocaine
Anesthesia to kill the routine
Now I’m back flip you lid
I’m not your friend start to slid
Rough enough without no league
Tough enough I bring fatigue


Black ink and lyrics, I’m in brain and spirit
My adversaries couldn’t get it the way I spit it
Coz I ain’t playing; Ain’t Playing


This Life sucks as a matter of fact
In a country of the bureaucrat
In a country of the false compacts
In a country where money impacts
I am twenty six now I realized
This is not the future I fantasized
Paradox in society too much homicides
Algeria is corrupted by the devil minds
It’s them ugly who life stands aside
Don’t feel nothing; as cold as ice
Fear fronting; as coward as mice
That’s why all time they disguise
I see Miss Justice doesn’t wanna focus
On real traitors’hocus-pocus
I’m exhausted of the bogus
Who people fear like an ogress


Black ink and lyrics, I’m in brain and spirit
My adversaries couldn’t get it the way I spit it
Coz I ain’t playing; Ain’t Playing


I could not dream like Luther King
I see nightmares but I rarely dream
Once I wanted to fly I lost my wings
I couldn’t find something where I cling
Then I fell in a dirty dry filed
I had to keep my eyes peeled
Bodies chilled, blood spilled
Some survived others were killed
I tried to figure out what’s going on
No body spoke but they pointedout
To a white castle with greens around
Dead king crowned by his surround
Celebrating, laughing, dancing
I wanted to step in I kept advancing
The so called ogress started cursing
Back to your field serve some nursing


Black ink and lyrics, I’m in brain and spirit
My adversaries couldn’t get it the way I spit it
Coz I ain’t playing; Ain’t Playing



Explanations of words
· Follow-through = the actions that sb takes in order to complete a plan:
Example: The project could fail if there is inadequate follow-through.
· Flip your lid = to become very angry.
· Hocus-pocus = tricks used to deceive, or words used to hide what is happening or make it not clear.
· Bogus = false and phony person who counterfeit and deceive people.
· Ogress = A female giant or monster in legends and fairy tales that eats humans.
· Keep my eyes peeled = to be careful, to take care of sth or sb.



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The 4th Damn

[Bouchra mimi]

Clowns and liars ain’t being true
I’m the same dude I didn’t sell my soul
Even through the bullshits that I’ve been told
I’m gonna shine like a shining gold .


It was really worth waiting

Wow, Just wow, I am stunned. I loved it. Very nicely written.
Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as
well as the strucutre. Amazing Job. Keep up the outstanding
work.

as always amazing job

God bless u , n accept my passing by

see u

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Clowns and liars ain’t being true
I’m the same dude I didn’t sell my soul
Even through the bullshits that I’ve been told
I’m gonna shine like a shining gold .


It was really worth waiting

Wow, Just wow, I am stunned. I loved it. Very nicely written.
Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as
well as the strucutre. Amazing Job. Keep up the outstanding
work.

as always amazing job

God bless u , n accept my passing by

see u


Hey; Bouchra sorry to make you waiting I just remodified it all coz it was written in a very diffrent way and the words that's why it took me a long while to do it
thanks for passing by
BTW
did you get the message on the 4 th verse?
it's the introduction to the next one - Politics -
:19:

[Bouchra mimi]

Never mind , so the next one is Politics ...

Yep i prefectly get that beautiful 4 th verse

You know that every time i read ur writings , i feel
relief n exited ( is that make sense ) hhhhh
that why i enjoy reading them

i used to write but now i dont get the inspiration
i guess that i need that one certain thing that makes me
pick up my pen n paper ...

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

i used to write but now i dont get the inspiration
i guess that i need that one certain thing that makes me
pick up my pen n paper ...


Mmmmmm! I understand u very well coz even me I had one special reason that pushed me to write what i have inside my heart & brain but by time I discovered that I have to write what's good for people to read not romance and nonsense things
Hmmm! Inspiration yeah it depends on inspiration I just got it when I totaly forget about writing i mean when I forget and decide to keep away of writing Inspiration knocks my door and words keeps raining on my mind hhh and I find myself writing that's it but sometimes when inspiration goes away It needs a great effort to completes what was written u know so here depends on how much efforts i try to accomplish my writing :D
thanks 4 passing by next time inshallah

[Bouchra mimi]

I dont know i 'll try to do the same

Maybe i'll get that insperation

Thanks any way u r so kind n helpfull bro

U r like my oldest brother that i 've never had

Yep next time Insh 'Allah

Take care

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

I dont know i 'll try to do the same
Maybe i'll get that insperation
Thanks any way u r so kind n helpfull bro
U r like my oldest brother that i 've never had
Yep next time Insh 'Allah
Take care

:o:o:o
ok lil sister it's my duty to provide lil help

[Ihope]

شكرا على المجهود المحمود

[نَازِكْ]

reserved till i finish reading it ^^
what's up bro it's been a while without showing up are you ok ?n that's me intissar i've changed my username ^^

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

شكرا على المجهود المحمود
شكرا على المرور الطيب

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

reserved till i finish reading it ^^
what's up bro it's been a while without showing up are you ok ?n that's me intissar i've changed my username ^^
Hello How r u doing
I used to take a look here everyday but found nothing
:D
Thanks for passing i've been waiting for your comments hhhh
BTW
what' does the new name mean???
i'm curious
:1:

[نَازِكْ]

Hello How r u doing
I used to take a look here everyday but found nothing
:D
Thanks for passing i've been waiting for your comments hhhh
BTW
what' does the new name mean???
i'm curious
:1:



and i've been waiting for the topic as well and me iam fine ^^hmd
and pls bro give me some time to read it very well cus i lost my english ^^
the new name refers to stars n it's my best poet's name she writes in arabic her poems are amazing n the reflect my soul try to read for her she is نازك الملائكة

[yakumo]

Hi pals!!
Hope u'r doin' well!!
Well,it took me a while to read, however I bet it took much longer to be posted LOL,
It seemed u were somehow belonging to a fascinated world that's called "Rap" !
Be grateful for every single word ur mind offers..,watch yourself...,observe how u interact with ur ideas... Assume much...Give it ur all.,,even,,,it might not work every time, yet eventually it will. That's when NEW style begins. Run with it, it'll keep u alive!I
Keep goin' bro! Hope u my best
:)
Peace

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

and i've been waiting for the topic as well and me iam fine ^^hmd
and pls bro give me some time to read it very well cus i lost my english ^^
the new name refers to stars n it's my best poet's name she writes in arabic her poems are amazing n the reflect my soul try to read for her she is نازك الملائكة

Hahhhh yeah take your time u should read between the lines and focus on every line :1:
if you lost some words dictionary is ur friend :D
Nazek elmalaiika
I know her an arabic writer she's from lebanon I think
the last time I read her it was on 2005 Hhhhh since days of secondary school loool
I'll try to read some of her writing and see ...
gud luck

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hi pals!!
Hope u'r doin' well!!
Well,it took me a while to read, however I bet it took much longer to be posted LOL,
It seemed u were somehow belonging to a fascinated world that's called "Rap" !
Be grateful for every single word ur mind offers..,watch yourself...,observe how u interact with ur ideas... Assume much...Give it ur all.,,even,,,it might not work every time, yet eventually it will. That's when NEW style begins. Run with it, it'll keep u alive!I
Keep goin' bro! Hope u my best
:)
Peace
:D:D:D:D
Hello what's up brother how r u doing
Yeah, it's a great world that needs more attention needs a great mind's eye more culture rich vocabulary for a special delivery. It depends on who's the writer? if he's that good type it will be a good one talking about life in general or some cases in special private or whatever...! but if the writer is sick minded person and (makhlou3) his writing will be like I kill u I have cars I do this I did that see my cats eat my luch hhhhhh u know that kind of celebrities the Phony ones the cowards u know that kind of people who follow and immitate MK celebrities Hhhh
and yeah It was written and done in 2013 in a different way but I changed everything but leaving the same theme which is
I am not playing I am serioud in my topics

[yakumo]

:D:D:D:D
Hello what's up brother how r u doing
Yeah, it's a great world that needs more attention needs a great mind's eye more culture rich vocabulary for a special delivery. It depends on who's the writer? if he's that good type it will be a good one talking about life in general or some cases in special private or whatever...! but if the writer is sick minded person and (makhlou3) his writing will be like I kill u I have cars I do this I did that see my cats eat my luch hhhhhh u know that kind of celebrities the Phony ones the cowards u know that kind of people who follow and immitate MK celebrities Hhhh
and yeah It was written and done in 2013 in a different way but I changed everything but leaving the same theme which is
I am not playing I am serioud in my topics


Hi bro! that's pretty fine,thnxx!I :)
Yeah, I see a new style has so much potential, and so do u! The secret ain't the size of the steps u take; the secret is actually takin' one...ur cause's often much deeper :) .. so much efforts!! cuz when u choose to... U can handle anythin'..U can achieve anythin'..U can do anythin'.,,U Can!!!!& I'm one v ur fans!
I'm gonna be ready fr a new one!!
:19:
Just keep this masterful spirit!

[نَازِكْ]

mmmm 1/ nazik is from iraq n read for her ,in her poems there's smth very special there's grief and unbearable pains
2/ i read it n it took me a while but it worths but man you're playin you're playing with words with those rhymes i heard the tune n i felt like i get a new breath that's what such meaningful rap exists bro to let you breath n cry out all the damn things hidden inside you bro that's why you were fighting there but honestly between the lines there was an enemy you're facing him saying that you're a different person ;a different persons who has no relation with fantasy ,who lives the moment and who lives among reality
you were fightin there bro ^^
the last verse was the best ever it makes me wonder can we even dream ?do we have the right to do so ?it's a dead country with zombies who are us n shinigami * which are our dawla "them" we don't have neither the choice to live nor to die ...is it reality or an other bluff ?reality sucks but dreams are even worst
shinigami is a japenes word that refers to those who controls ghosts
i won't say it's wow because we surpass such words but imma thank you for sharing n the 4th damn seems interesting don't make us wait

[amine pop 4 life]

I told u once that your place is between shiney stars so keep it and try to reserve ur place there..

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hi bro! that's pretty fine,thnxx!I :)
Yeah, I see a new style has so much potential, and so do u! The secret ain't the size of the steps u take; the secret is actually takin' one...ur cause's often much deeper :) .. so much efforts!! cuz when u choose to... U can handle anythin'..U can achieve anythin'..U can do anythin'.,,U Can!!!!& I'm one v ur fans!
I'm gonna be ready fr a new one!!
:19:
Just keep this masterful spirit!


I don’t if i got your message for real or not; I mean about the new style if you mean the new method of writing I mean in the first writing I used to write randomly without measures and without counting lines and other Musical criteria. The lines here are shorter than the previous due to the kind of beats I was writing on they are slow and each line must contain only one bar after the middle of it and so on … and you can feel the flow reading it. My causes come coincidently sometimes when I’m walking street or watching TV or doing anything else words come to my mind and then I start to compose lines Two, three, four lines and a new subject and theme is built then I carry on writing till the end it depends on how much information I have about the topic, searching for rhymes, assonance, consonance … etc. about writing anything I want! I’m trying to be mature and having my personal attitudes no hypocrisy and paradox only reality and being real it’s the characteristics of a good citizen and freedom of expression. You’re my fan man thanks a lot for your following and time actually it’s the reason I carry on, you are appreciated; actually I found your vote last year on the contest of 10 best topics in the Member’s writing. For the next one (The 4th Damn) talking about politics and society in Algeria I’m not going to talk about it so much let it when it’s posted and analyze it needs the 4th verse to be finished and it’ll be ready for post. I hope you will like it Inshalah thanks for your support my brother you’re appreciated again.

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

mmmm 1/ nazik is from iraq n read for her ,in her poems there's smth very special there's grief and unbearable pains
2/ i read it n it took me a while but it worths but man you're playin you're playing with words with those rhymes i heard the tune n i felt like i get a new breath that's what such meaningful rap exists bro to let you breath n cry out all the damn things hidden inside you bro that's why you were fighting there but honestly between the lines there was an enemy you're facing him saying that you're a different person ;a different persons who has no relation with fantasy ,who lives the moment and who lives among reality
you were fightin there bro ^^
the last verse was the best ever it makes me wonder can we even dream ?do we have the right to do so ?it's a dead country with zombies who are us n shinigami * which are our dawla "them" we don't have neither the choice to live nor to die ...is it reality or an other bluff ?reality sucks but dreams are even worst
shinigami is a japenes word that refers to those who controls ghosts
i won't say it's wow because we surpass such words but imma thank you for sharing n the 4th damn seems interesting don't make us wait



Oh, it’s a grief based themes then, though I hate reading sad writings I’ll try to do so that’s for sure since it’s poems and thoughts it won’t take a long time to read them you know Hhhh I’m lucky it’s not novels J
The rap game depends on plying with words and rhymes it’s the main basic. Between the lines … there you find the goal of the writing I guess every writer hide something for the reader and if this latter is a smart one he’ll see it. Each verse has special message the 1st verse talks about How/why/ I write? Which inspiration drive me to write and telling that I’m doing it like a habit for me I don’t earn nothing from it I just want to share it not like the ones who want to be famous and be seen on TV. I had so many opportunities to drop my records the recent days I was invited to do a show in my town to show that it has a cultural background I refused coz most of colleagues don’t respect and see themselves high and I won’t mix mine with theirs! So the response was in the 2nd verse telling them that they are affected of what they see on Hollywood things and imitating telling them I do rap coz I luv it not coz I want to step on it and reach fame. Moving to the 3rd verse which prove that I’m matured and don’t clown and presented a general situation in Algerian society and how I find myself in another world which is not how I imagined in my childhood and then in the 4th verse it’s something that I wanted to tell them that I can be professional and make you feel tired to reach the real meaning of what I wanna say … Like if you have a cultural background about the political situation in Algeria you will understand my 4th verse and if you don’t you’ll lose the line. BTW the 4th verse is talking that it seems that our people still enslaved economically, psychologically tortured and wounded so first (Once I wanted to fly I lost my wings) when I dreamt which is the first step of any person, (I couldn’t find something where I cling) I found nothing that promises me to continue no help. (Then I fell in a dirty dry field … Killed) it’s the sick society with no respect no values where people suffer a lot those who were dead it’s the victims of homicides and those who were chilling are the surviving ones that are facing problems. (I tried to figure out what’s going on, no body spoke but they pointed out) this tells about the freedom of expression in my country where people can’t speak frankly but they sign to avoid troubles. (To a white castle with greens around, Dead king crowned by his surround, Celebrating, laughing, dancing, I wanted to step in I kept advancing) it’s the unconscious old president and his surrounds in El-Mouradiya castle, I included greens around the castle after I said before Dirty dry field and it was near to the castle itself here to say that only those who are in the government are living good but the others are suffering even if they are working coz they’re like slaves it’s the reality when we have no time for ourselves to entertain and waiting for our salaries each end of months to pay for our needs you know and so on. (I wanted to step in I kept advancing, The so called ogress started cursing, Back to your field serve some nursing) when I wanted to see what’s happening inside the castle an ogress offended me and ordered me to back to my field this latter has another meaning (domain). Like we see on media when a doctor, journalist or a teacher want to do some politics and try to understand what’s on behind the scenes he’s attacked by the government servers from society or lower class to tell that doctor to back to his domain (field) do his job coz it’s not his business to intervene in politics.
Thanks for passing by and thanks for your time the next one has not been completed yet it needs the 4th verse I’ll post it as soon it’s done and you’ll like it it’s a bomb.

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

I told u once that your place is between shiney stars so keep it and try to reserve ur place there..

Hhhhhhh
yaaaak baaaynna fi dzayer
thanks for passing by, and droping such star comments hehehe
i'm keeping it man I'm keeping it
allah yehafdekk

[نَازِكْ]

Oh, it’s a grief based themes then, though I hate reading sad writings I’ll try to do so that’s for sure since it’s poems and thoughts it won’t take a long time to read them you know Hhhh I’m lucky it’s not novels J
The rap game depends on plying with words and rhymes it’s the main basic. Between the lines … there you find the goal of the writing I guess every writer hide something for the reader and if this latter is a smart one he’ll see it. Each verse has special message the 1st verse talks about How/why/ I write? Which inspiration drive me to write and telling that I’m doing it like a habit for me I don’t earn nothing from it I just want to share it not like the ones who want to be famous and be seen on TV. I had so many opportunities to drop my records the recent days I was invited to do a show in my town to show that it has a cultural background I refused coz most of colleagues don’t respect and see themselves high and I won’t mix mine with theirs! So the response was in the 2nd verse telling them that they are affected of what they see on Hollywood things and imitating telling them I do rap coz I luv it not coz I want to step on it and reach fame. Moving to the 3rd verse which prove that I’m matured and don’t clown and presented a general situation in Algerian society and how I find myself in another world which is not how I imagined in my childhood and then in the 4th verse it’s something that I wanted to tell them that I can be professional and make you feel tired to reach the real meaning of what I wanna say … Like if you have a cultural background about the political situation in Algeria you will understand my 4th verse and if you don’t you’ll lose the line. BTW the 4th verse is talking that it seems that our people still enslaved economically, psychologically tortured and wounded so first (Once I wanted to fly I lost my wings) when I dreamt which is the first step of any person, (I couldn’t find something where I cling) I found nothing that promises me to continue no help. (Then I fell in a dirty dry field … Killed) it’s the sick society with no respect no values where people suffer a lot those who were dead it’s the victims of homicides and those who were chilling are the surviving ones that are facing problems. (I tried to figure out what’s going on, no body spoke but they pointed out) this tells about the freedom of expression in my country where people can’t speak frankly but they sign to avoid troubles. (To a white castle with greens around, Dead king crowned by his surround, Celebrating, laughing, dancing, I wanted to step in I kept advancing) it’s the unconscious old president and his surrounds in El-Mouradiya castle, I included greens around the castle after I said before Dirty dry field and it was near to the castle itself here to say that only those who are in the government are living good but the others are suffering even if they are working coz they’re like slaves it’s the reality when we have no time for ourselves to entertain and waiting for our salaries each end of months to pay for our needs you know and so on. (I wanted to step in I kept advancing, The so called ogress started cursing, Back to your field serve some nursing) when I wanted to see what’s happening inside the castle an ogress offended me and ordered me to back to my field this latter has another meaning (domain). Like we see on media when a doctor, journalist or a teacher want to do some politics and try to understand what’s on behind the scenes he’s attacked by the government servers from society or lower class to tell that doctor to back to his domain (field) do his job coz it’s not his business to intervene in politics.
Thanks for passing by and thanks for your time the next one has not been completed yet it needs the 4th verse I’ll post it as soon it’s done and you’ll like it it’s a bomb.





i see bro you 've just shew them what's you're made of ^^
n i got exactly the things hidden in the 4 verse i've even imagined them in ma imagination
n i also read your conversation with yakumo n it make me wonder what kind of things i do write ?i really have no idea i just write i mean it's just nonsense ,so pls can you tell me what's right and what's wrong in my writings?just to improve n i wanna ask you too about "free lines "i do follow some writers in tumblr and they are " native speakers" they just write without any rules ,what kind of poems do they write ?

[yakumo]

:19:

I don’t if i got your message for real or not; I mean about the new style if you mean the new method of writing I mean in the first writing I used to write randomly without measures and without counting lines and other Musical criteria. The lines here are shorter than the previous due to the kind of beats I was writing on they are slow and each line must contain only one bar after the middle of it and so on … and you can feel the flow reading it. My causes come coincidently sometimes when I’m walking street or watching TV or doing anything else words come to my mind and then I start to compose lines Two, three, four lines and a new subject and theme is built then I carry on writing till the end it depends on how much information I have about the topic, searching for rhymes, assonance, consonance … etc. about writing anything I want! I’m trying to be mature and having my personal attitudes no hypocrisy and paradox only reality and being real it’s the characteristics of a good citizen and freedom of expression. You’re my fan man thanks a lot for your following and time actually it’s the reason I carry on, you are appreciated; actually I found your vote last year on the contest of 10 best topics in the Member’s writing. For the next one (The 4th Damn) talking about politics and society in Algeria I’m not going to talk about it so much let it when it’s posted and analyze it needs the 4th verse to be finished and it’ll be ready for post. I hope you will like it Inshalah thanks for your support my brother you’re appreciated again.



From the looks of your comments, it sounds like we may have come up with a winner with this great topic!! :19:Thanks man, I really appreciate every single word you wrote!
The human mind is powerful, it can literally create darkness or light,,it's our choice!...& when you think you have the world in the palm of your hand, keep in mind life has a pretty way of knocking us off the perch we create in our magical magnifying minds..So stay brillant, be confident!..& I'd be willing ,bother, to bet you're learning how to do better.That's the point of getting older :) ; & it's my chance to also get better..(It's a brave thing to have a such good company) :) let’s do our best to spend more time in our heads and much more time in our hearts (with rhyme as you used to) LOL),,& with that, into the world we go! :19:
The ending caption of this one;;;Believe in yourself, follow your words, and never EVER give up. You were really my best & you still are! :19:...Exciting to read your next greatest topics brother
God bless you

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

i see bro you 've just shew them what's you're made of ^^
n i got exactly the things hidden in the 4 verse i've even imagined them in ma imagination
n i also read your conversation with yakumo n it make me wonder what kind of things i do write ?i really have no idea i just write i mean it's just nonsense ,so pls can you tell me what's right and what's wrong in my writings?just to improve n i wanna ask you too about "free lines "i do follow some writers in tumblr and they are " native speakers" they just write without any rules ,what kind of poems do they write ?


Well depending on my own experience, I learnt how to write step by step. In my very first days I used to write free lines; a year after I started to compare my writings with Rap this latter has much common similarities with poetry, so I found that my writings lack rhymes in the end of each line hence I learnt to do it. I wrote so many poems but they seemed they lack balance and you can see that in my old topics of the banned membership. What I did is trying to make lines equal but I could not coz I was trying to do that looking to the size of lines but this was a mistake; I wrote some poems/ raps like that but it didn’t work. Lately I learnt that lines need to be equal in a different way it should be by counting syllables (syllabification) in poetry it’s called Meter; and you can see that in solitary mind, ain’t playin and the next ones Inchallah and i'm going to re-make for about 10 writings of mine i mean the previous ones to correct and add what's lack and move what's a plus; so;
Meter: is the number of syllables in each line; if the 1st line is composed by 14 syllables it would be nice if the 2nd line is composed by 14 / 13 syllables; lines will be balanced and equal.
Rhymes: we all know about it, it’s the main basic of poems. When two words that have the same endings. Example: brain, pain, strain, rain… etc. it’d be beautiful if you include internal rhymes I mean rhymes inside the lines not only in the end of each line.

I gotta rhymes like troops; like a team or a troupe
It’s a voice of the truth, from a hopeless youth
I’ve been raised in a hood; where the life is not good
Been chased by gloom, which creeps to my room
From: True 2 da Game

If you don’t respect Rhymes and Meter this means your poem is considered a (Free Verse) just like in Arabic
(الشعر الحر)
coz it’s free from the main rules it doesn’t contain them. I noticed you do respect the Rhymes sometimes 4 lines have the same rhyme, sometimes 2 lines have the same rhyme and sometimes 6 lines have the same rhyme and this makes your writing a poem so respect rhymes.
Rhymes and Meter are not the only elements that a poem concludes we’ve also:
Assonance: it’s when two words have the same vowel sounds example: brain, claim/ vibe, hide … etc.
Consonance: two words having the same consonant sounds at the beginning and the end but have a different vowel sound example: slip, slap / scape, scope … etc.
Alliteration: words that start with the same consonant, it produces a cool sound; example: silly stupid singers seek for sum of money
with these elements ur writings will be attractive and good looking so this is for the technics and for the things you write it's your choice u r free …. whatever u respect rules it will be poem ... what else?

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

:19:From the looks of your comments, it sounds like we may have come up with a winner with this great topic!! :19:Thanks man, I really appreciate every single word you wrote!
The human mind is powerful, it can literally create darkness or light,,it's our choice!...& when you think you have the world in the palm of your hand, keep in mind life has a pretty way of knocking us off the perch we create in our magical magnifying minds..So stay brillant, be confident!..& I'd be willing ,bother, to bet you're learning how to do better.That's the point of getting older :) ; & it's my chance to also get better..(It's a brave thing to have a such good company) :) let’s do our best to spend more time in our heads and much more time in our hearts (with rhyme as you used to) LOL),,& with that, into the world we go! :19:
The ending caption of this one;;;Believe in yourself, follow your words, and never EVER give up. You were really my best & you still are! :19:...Exciting to read your next greatest topics brother
God bless you

Yeeah; due to the facts that I love rhymes I learn words everyday and sometimes I forget about writing in english coz i'm also into arabic raps and if my french is good I can do it in french too ^^. sometimes I decide to stop writing but few months after I find myself typing again lines like rain words drop here and there common HHHH that's crazy man this is a good company too i mean words :D
for darkness ummm! i just hate that kind of writings that depict me as very sad and wanna suicide I don't choose to see these kind of writings coz it is really negative but reality and truth never hurt as soon as we're keeping it real. I do not blame those who write sad things it really affect them psychologically the cool thing if they don't care about it and let it go and i don't know if i'm right or wrong maybe i'm wrong but this is my point of view. sometimes I wonder if I may stop writing in the future or not I leave it for destiny!

thanks for ur time man and it's a pleasure to be on our family i mean the rest of the family coz it's been tripped and left by some members -maalish- this is life welcome anytime man thank u faithfully :)

[yakumo]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FIy14j3VnL0

That will be done, short-term!:19:
Have a peaceful day!!

[نَازِكْ]

Well depending on my own experience, I learnt how to write step by step. In my very first days I used to write free lines; a year after I started to compare my writings with Rap this latter has much common similarities with poetry, so I found that my writings lack rhymes in the end of each line hence I learnt to do it. I wrote so many poems but they seemed they lack balance and you can see that in my old topics of the banned membership. What I did is trying to make lines equal but I could not coz I was trying to do that looking to the size of lines but this was a mistake; I wrote some poems/ raps like that but it didn’t work. Lately I learnt that lines need to be equal in a different way it should be by counting syllables (syllabification) in poetry it’s called Meter; and you can see that in solitary mind, ain’t playin and the next ones Inchallah and i'm going to re-make for about 10 writings of mine i mean the previous ones to correct and add what's lack and move what's a plus; so;
Meter: is the number of syllables in each line; if the 1st line is composed by 14 syllables it would be nice if the 2nd line is composed by 14 / 13 syllables; lines will be balanced and equal.
Rhymes: we all know about it, it’s the main basic of poems. When two words that have the same endings. Example: brain, pain, strain, rain… etc. it’d be beautiful if you include internal rhymes I mean rhymes inside the lines not only in the end of each line.

I gotta rhymes like troops; like a team or a troupe
It’s a voice of the truth, from a hopeless youth
I’ve been raised in a hood; where the life is not good
Been chased by gloom, which creeps to my room
From: True 2 da Game

If you don’t respect Rhymes and Meter this means your poem is considered a (Free Verse) just like in Arabic
(الشعر الحر)
coz it’s free from the main rules it doesn’t contain them. I noticed you do respect the Rhymes sometimes 4 lines have the same rhyme, sometimes 2 lines have the same rhyme and sometimes 6 lines have the same rhyme and this makes your writing a poem so respect rhymes.
Rhymes and Meter are not the only elements that a poem concludes we’ve also:
Assonance: it’s when two words have the same vowel sounds example: brain, claim/ vibe, hide … etc.
Consonance: two words having the same consonant sounds at the beginning and the end but have a different vowel sound example: slip, slap / scape, scope … etc.
Alliteration: words that start with the same consonant, it produces a cool sound; example: silly stupid singers seek for sum of money
with these elements ur writings will be attractive and good looking so this is for the technics and for the things you write it's your choice u r free …. whatever u respect rules it will be poem ... what else?



nothing else except of too many thanx for ya bro ^^
ok i've found out too many things now it's clear that it needs more time ,more time n for real you helped me
arigato :)

[**kamy**]

heY brO this's the first time i read your writing and in fact i was like O.M.G ...words can't explain what i wanna tell ... your rich vocabulary.. the structure of your ideas ... i felt so relaxed while i was reading ...in sum that was perfectly done ... u did a great job..any one read this would be taken away by the fascinate of your words ... keep it up .... that was really amazinG :)
accept my passing by ^^ & good luck !!

[yakumo]

Peace be upon you!
What's up bro!! Hope u're doin' good!!
well, turning to our story, I wanna ask, if u do know th system (A_G), cuz it's gonna clarify all thing, if every tone is represented by a letter, it makes it easy, & if u're able to understand it,,it will be easier to use Piano, & fr the black keys, by (A#_G#), & that's repeated with every similar dividends, goin' to the thinner or the coarse voice, (depending on ur choice), & u can also change th musical timbre( according to th developement of ur piano & its brand ,sure) into another musical instrument(such a violin, flute...& so on) , If it's possible I can make sme exp, like givin' sme tones, & u can devin th song ..or conversly, I hear th song & then, I can devin th tones( as I called it: th musical ear), we can also discover melodies frm our own, by followin' our feelings :19: ..& that depends on hw much u're capable enough to play fuently th piano,, on hw much time u spend with it,, & 'bout experience v course,

It's just a general view...Rap needs "Tones" ! :) & whenever u do so,,, I'll be here :19:!!

Yours very sincerly! .... @ th earliest opportunity incha'Allah
:):)

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FIy14j3VnL0

That will be done, short-term!:19:
Have a peaceful day!!
Dear friend i don't know how it sounds coz my headphones are broken and i'm going to download it to listen to it when i'm home okaaay

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

nothing else except of too many thanx for ya bro ^^
ok i've found out too many things now it's clear that it needs more time ,more time n for real you helped me
arigato :)

hhhh nah do not thank me coz when i was in need of someone to teach me things about writing in a good way no body they hid!
and i'm still learning if i learnt something new i'd tell u definitely
:mh92:
one thousand times
work hard and learn

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

heY brO this's the first time i read your writing and in fact i was like O.M.G ...words can't explain what i wanna tell ... your rich vocabulary.. the structure of your ideas ... i felt so relaxed while i was reading ...in sum that was perfectly done ... u did a great job..any one read this would be taken away by the fascinate of your words ... keep it up .... that was really amazinG :)
accept my passing by ^^ & good luck !!

Hey wassup Kamy, u made me happy for real and ur passing by give me the encouragement to do it again and i'm going to drop it again so be ready for the new one and it'd be great to have a good reader like u and the ones above too :D:D



:dj_17:

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Peace be upon you!
What's up bro!! Hope u're doin' good!!
well, turning to our story, I wanna ask, if u do know th system (A_G), cuz it's gonna clarify all thing, if every tone is represented by a letter, it makes it easy, & if u're able to understand it,,it will be easier to use Piano, & fr the black keys, by (A#_G#), & that's repeated with every similar dividends, goin' to the thinner or the coarse voice, (depending on ur choice), & u can also change th musical timbre( according to th developement of ur piano & its brand ,sure) into another musical instrument(such a violin, flute...& so on) , If it's possible I can make sme exp, like givin' sme tones, & u can devin th song ..or conversly, I hear th song & then, I can devin th tones( as I called it: th musical ear), we can also discover melodies frm our own, by followin' our feelings :19: ..& that depends on hw much u're capable enough to play fuently th piano,, on hw much time u spend with it,, & 'bout experience v course,

It's just a general view...Rap needs "Tones" ! :) & whenever u do so,,, I'll be here :19:!!

Yours very sincerly! .... @ th earliest opportunity incha'Allah
:):)


Wassup dude!
yeah concerning the tones and black/white I actually learnt that naturally i mean just with spending time remarking piano on fl studio
but my problem is that I do not have a piano key bord
it'd be easier if i got it but unfortunately i do not !
it's expensive as i think
:o:o:o
so as i told u in the private message
waiting for the news man
:19:

[**kamy**]

Hey wassup Kamy, u made me happy for real and ur passing by give me the encouragement to do it again and i'm going to drop it again so be ready for the new one and it'd be great to have a good reader like u and the ones above too :D:D



:dj_17:


hi .. i'm fine ... you deserve that encouragement .. i'm waitinG for the new :D
good luck ^^

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

hi .. i'm fine ... you deserve that encouragement .. i'm waitinG for the new :D
good luck ^^

ok thanks
inshallah just be patient

[Bouchra mimi]

Salem Karim , How r u Bro ?

how's life with u ? i hope u r fine i just wanted to make sure that u r okay

by the way am still waiting for ur next ..

BTW n gud lluck

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Salem Karim , How r u Bro ?
how's life with u ? i hope u r fine i just wanted to make sure that u r okay
by the way am still waiting for ur next ..
BTW n gud lluck


Salem; Bouchra i'm doing good how r u ! thanks for asking it needs 2 lines only :o It's time that i don't have that's why i'm lil bit late but it's a matter of 2 days at most u'll see it inshallah
:D:D:D:D:D:D

[Bouchra mimi]

Salem; Bouchra i'm doing good how r u ! thanks for asking it needs 2 lines only :o It's time that i don't have that's why i'm lil bit late but it's a matter of 2 days at most u'll see it inshallah
:D:D:D:D:D:D



I 'm doing fine thanx , n am glad to hear that u r okay

Dont rush ur self ^_^

Best of luck:19:

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

I 'm doing fine thanx , n am glad to hear that u r okay

Dont rush ur self ^_^

Best of luck:19:

Few minutes and it's done
:D

[vauxhall]

Great job Karim and good continuation

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Great job Karim and good continuation


thanks a lot ... good luck u too

[fâscînat]

good work wish u would continue

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Thank you and yeah I'm going to continue what i started

[vauxhall]

you're ain't playin ya man