Solitary Mind

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

“Solitary Mind”
02.11.2013

I hold no grudge; I don’t wanna feel neglected
No attention for the mess but the mess was started
Everything is passed; now it belongs to the past
I opened brand new page; I deleted the scars
Used to call me adorable, used to be honorable
Used to be adaptable, and now I’m just an horrible
They think I’m an envious, worthless and helpless
Coz they found me ambiguous, ruthless and heartless
How these bastards grew up? They’re Sick and silly
When will they stop talking about me the yellow-belly?
No time to waste they love backstabbing, cannibals
I just taste no taste in a society full of animals
Relations turned me insane; they gave me a raw deal
Try being real; how I’m supposed to feel
Alone and proud, still I ride
Still I rise with a solitary mind

Solitary mind thinking so deep;
Life goes on everyday another trip
Solitary mind Relations I rip;
Coz friendship became so cheap

I just got enough, I don’t need no friends
They just gonna leave ya When ya being frank
The money bring greed, the greed bring venality
Especially the crafty that has no personality
Karim-Rap-4-Life is not fool like Simple Simon!
To put his trust in the world full of demons
I can’t keep chasing friends, and be a Wishy-washy
I don’t like begging them, I hate being a Pushy
I can’t control my anger, so please don’t push me
I hide my wounds in case a friend acted scratchy
I don’t trust the heart because the heart is a Squashy
I rely on my brain to avoid any trouble rashly
My heart is so normal it’s not made from a stone
I’m just keeping silence, I live my sadness alone
I don’t wanna bother y’all keep my friends from my dark zone
Coz the ugliest stuff to a mane is when he moan

Solitary mind thinking so deep;
Life goes on everyday another trip
Solitary mind Relations I rip;
Friendship became so cheap

Forget it like it wasn’t, my dignity I warrant;
Yes I drop my Laments; but only for my parents
I’ve buried my sentiments; I’m always on advancement
Yow Snow white you know my circumstances
Ya daddy asked so much ya mammy wanted to sell ya
I’m not that Richey Rich and I’ve no romance to tell ya
Every story has an end and mine is an example
The fact made me blowing this freaky-sample
No need for relations, I got no romanticism
I got my own reasons to hold a tight criticism
I spit the lyrics of IZM; I’m a student of realism
If you wanna lie, lie I believe in behaviorism
I don’t need an irritation; I don’t wanna be in a vortex
I’m not good for tests no guarantee for consequences
These obvious lines telling ya I’m doing fine
Solitary hymn written by a solitary mind

Solitary mind thinking so deep;
Life goes on everyday another trip
Solitary mind Relations I rip;
Friendship became so cheap

The trouble in my life, is after I was going deep
I realized the wolves behind the masks of sheep
I think about tomorrow every night before I sleep
Will I live or will I die or will I have eternal sleep
I became an anti-social the people I vomit
I was born with a habit, realist to no limit
This is my tendency need no Sympathetic
I don’t give a damn I am just an apathetic
I got a heart and a brain; I know how to make em mingle
If you got hurt sorry, I never said that I’m an angel
Trying to be social for me is an inconsequential
I got snitches from people; my state’s consequential
Living in this jungle; we say no confidential
This is my definition; and I prefer to be a single
It’s a peaceful way to live my life high
Just the way it is, the solitary mind
Word up!


Give someone a raw deal = to treat someone unfairly or badly.
Simple Simon = a name used to refer to a foolish man or boy. Originally it was the name of a foolish boy in a nursery rhyme.
Wishy-washy = not having clear or firm ideas or beliefs.
Pushy = trying hard to get what you want, especially in a way that seems rude
Push me = don’t make angry, or don’t annoy me.
IZM = concerning ideas and beliefs for example: realism, racism…etc.




Previous
Original and frank (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=1390409)

Next
Ain’t playin (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=1654282)

[amine pop 4 life]

you're the man in the mirror!!! Just like always a shiny star in the dark bu' wait a second!! there's no life on this planet 15 seen and no comments!!! Believe me Karim It's hard to know what are thinking about and it's so hard to believe that these words came out of ya mind But trust me you're on top like always and u deserve the best and all the best bro so keep it up !!! and don't forget chasing your dreams (Don't forget that you were the one who said that :) )

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Ahla
Amine How are you doing man;
you mean I explained your thoughts like this!
well I wrote this since a long time but I've noticed that the forum was asleep till now it is but with topics like yours and Intisar it will be awake again
the problem we have here is that members read and go but don't reply
that's the reason behind the laziness here :p
emmm! about dreams I don't have any dreams they all gone with the wind once
boom
ayo amine thank ya for passing brother it's kind of you to put a reply
yesterday it was 15 views = 0 reply
today is 22 views = 1 reply
actually I expected that I told you the forum is really deserted I feel pety for it :/
but still another one will put a comment and else I really don't know if i'll have some comment but whatever it is I accept it :)
good luck Amine

[amine pop 4 life]

thank u Karim no matter what happened u know that you are bigger than that ok and this forum was not like what I imagined b4 Coz I thought that I'll find comment; relpies that motivates me but unfortunantly there's nothing good here exept some members who makes this place alive (Like U Karim - Intissar- and don't forget me )

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Yeah I told you it's deserted since one year and half maybe coz the main moderator is absent or members are passing their holidays on the beach

[Silly Me]

i'm speechless ! it's beyond amazing !
i wish i had your vocabulary , it's outstanding

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

i'm speechless ! it's beyond amazing !
i wish i had your vocabulary , it's outstanding

Salam My sister thanks for passing by
well it's not that impossible to have an enormous Vocabulary
it comes with practice and reading :)
Remember that everyone was once with 10 words only...

[نَازِكْ]

sorry brother i am late i guess
well ,first reading it's amazing seems like i'm gonna learn too many words
i'll be back to comment because it desreves a long discussion
& welcome back

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

sorry brother i am late i guess
well ,first reading it's amazing seems like i'm gonna learn too many words
i'll be back to comment because it desreves a long discussion
& welcome back


Hello Talented Intisar nice to see you around here
you're late but it's not a problem :)
take your time and enjoy

[نَازِكْ]

It's so realistic just as you usual and like you said you're really realist to no limit, i know you have your reasons and i do believe in every single word written above ,
solitary mind opens for you the whole world ,it deepens your thoughts and let you realize how to deal with ppl and to give every one what he deserves .Also being away from people let you avoid too many troubles
we all got too many wounds from being surrounded by wrong persons and we often heal them with new stitches i mean by being alone but at least we will no longer suffer from cannibals as you 've mentioned
i like it as a whole but these lines were so damn great
I don’t need an irritation; I don’t wanna be in a vortex"
I’m not good for tests no guarantee for consequence
"
being so social will deeply involves you in more than one vertex
what i really like about the things you write is that your writings are such a pure mirror that reflects your thoughts
and don't give a damn about the few replies look at me you're the only one who replies on my topics and i appreciate even though i'll never stop because it's my way to say" i exist"
thank you bro i learnt too many new words waiting for "ain't playin "don't be late .

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

It's so realistic just as you usual and like you said you're really realist to no limit, i know you have your reasons and i do believe in every single word written above ,




Yeah It's the best way to be known and no body tries to play with you. thank you for the fact of believing what I say

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

solitary mind opens for you the whole world ,it deepens your thoughts and let you realize how to deal with ppl and to give every one what he deserves .Also being away from people let you avoid too many troubles



Yeah it seems good when you're young but when you get older it'll be the worst plan you did in your life but for me I don't have too coz when it come it's too late coz i'll be already gone I have that idea that I won't last so long I'll be gone and
The good die is young the bad one is old

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

we all got too many wounds from being surrounded by wrong persons and we often heal them with new stitches i mean by being alone but at least we will no longer suffer from cannibals as you 've mentioned


I was surounded by a lot of them and after what they did I realized that I need to do something and solitary was the key... I wish it could be another solution but unfortunately there was not!


i like it as a whole but these lines were so damn great
I don’t need an irritation; I don’t wanna be in a vortex"
I’m not good for tests no guarantee for consequence




yeah it came without thinking deeply :1:



what i really like about the things you write is that your writings are such a pure mirror that reflects your thoughts
and don't give a damn about the few replies look at me you're the only one who replies on my topics and i appreciate even though i'll never stop because it's my way to say" i exist"
thank you bro i learnt too many new words waiting for "ain't playin "don't be late .


nah I don't care how many comments I got but I'm sure that more than a dozen will bookmark it and read it carefully and I don't blame no body if he didn't leave a comment but I can tell them that their comments mean a lot to me and they give me the power to write again
but it's okay I got two of the best writers in the section now
Intisar and Amine and that's " elbaraka "
and for the Ain't playing it's done since 6 months or more but I just feel lazy to post it but I'll inshallah just hold onn
thanks million times for your annalysis I hope you really learned some words and I forgot to put the definition of
Yellow belly = Coward

gooooood luck sister *

[نَازِكْ]

Yeah It's the best way to be known and no body tries to play with you. thank you for the fact of believing what I say




never mind because i know exactly that situation
Yeah it seems good when you're young but when you get older it'll be the worst plan you did in your life but for me I don't have too coz when it come it's too late coz i'll be already gone I have that idea that I won't last so long I'll be gone and
The good die is young the bad one is old



don't say things like that allah is the only one who knows what 's written he knows when our missions is done
I was surounded by a lot of them and after what they did I realized that I need to do something and solitary was the key... I wish it could be another solution but unfortunately there was not!



[SIZE=4][FONT=Comic Sans MS]it was your choice so you gotta carry it along till the end and it's the best in my opinion
yeah it came without thinking deeply :1:
that's what made it special i guess you know the most brilliant thoughts come by their own



[SIZE=4][FONT=Century Gothic]nah I don't care how many comments I got but I'm sure that more than a dozen will bookmark it and read it carefully and I don't blame no body if he didn't leave a comment but I can tell them that their comments mean a lot to me and they give me the power to write again
but it's okay I got two of the best writers in the section now
Intisar and Amine and that's " elbaraka "
and for the Ain't playing it's done since 6 months or more but I just feel lazy to post it but I'll inshallah just hold onn
thanks million times for your annalysis I hope you really learned some words and I forgot to put the definition of
Yellow belly = Coward

gooooood luck sister *



that's mean a lots to me bro really ;i'll be waiting and i'll always read for you because you're the boss bro the members writing boss.
yeah of course i did so that i'm happy ,in fact i forgot to ask about it i searched or it but no results so thank you really

[miss_cool]

Hey brother .. remember me !!! hhhhh its been nice reading your writings again bro , missed it!!

i read your poem for like 3 times & im havin flashbacks to everything happened be4 and many things were said before
but i totally agree its better to be alone cause these days even your closest people to our heart can't take us when we'r in a bad times

I just got enough, I don’t need no friends
They just gonna leave ya When ya being frank

this caught my eyes !! which friends u r talkin about ! i mean from the forum or real life
i want to ask u about black poison, is she replying on ur emails or anything cause i can't seem to reach her :( :(


peace

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

that's mean a lots to me bro really ;i'll be waiting and i'll always read for you because you're the boss bro the members writing boss.
yeah of course i did so that i'm happy ,in fact i forgot to ask about it i searched or it but no results so thank you really

Oh, that's too high when you say that i'm the boss of Member's writing... there are plenty of talented people but still need chance to shine
about the yellow-belly it's called idioms, figurative expressions you can't find them in normal dictionaries and in case you are looking for something like that type it in google + meaning and i'm sure you'll get the answer but be patient in your search you know just type the key words and google will answer :)
hope you good luck
:mh92:

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hey brother .. remember me !!! hhhhh its been nice reading your writings again bro , missed it!!

i read your poem for like 3 times & im havin flashbacks to everything happened be4 and many things were said before
but i totally agree its better to be alone cause these days even your closest people to our heart can't take us when we'r in a bad times

I just got enough, I don’t need no friends
They just gonna leave ya When ya being frank

this caught my eyes !! which friends u r talkin about ! i mean from the forum or real life
i want to ask u about black poison, is she replying on ur emails or anything cause i can't seem to reach her :( :(
peace



Owya chkouuuuun
Where have you been girla?

http://im80.gulfup.com/f8ht7p.jpg

It's a shame on you leave us without warning!
but i'm sure you had your personal reasons and I don't want to know them
it's enough that you back right!
wyaaa I can't believe this sara how ya doing girla !
I saw your comments somewhere but I didn't recognize that it's you

well thanks for passing by happy to see you again emm for the reason behind (I don't need no friends ...) it's mixed between real life and virtual life of the net that's all I can say

emmm well for Black Poison didn't you both cut your friendship? emm now we're ennemies I've not talked to her since september 2013 I but Jimmy used to .....I'll ask him to make you contact each other okaaay

:mh92:

[miss_cool]

Thanks bro :)

well i dont know what happened exactly to my account , the last time i was here september 2013
then i tried to log in but i couldnt i even contacted the responsible but no answer
so i thought a new account would work hhh

about fedwa its the same last time we talked she said she's leaving the forum
& i couldnt do anythin abt it :( i tried to contact her i called her and i sent her msgs but she doesnt reply im so afraid :( she wasnt feelin good last time



well bro don't stop posting your poems u know im a big fan since like forever hhh :D & i can totally agree with u , being alone is the best thing sometimes but remember that ur sister sara and many others here r havin ur back always ;)


and im still waiting for the rest of the story u wrote last year >> u r thinking ; damn this girl neveer forget about it hhhhh




peace

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Thanks bro :)
well i dont know what happened exactly to my account , the last time i was here september 2013
then i tried to log in but i couldnt i even contacted the responsible but no answer
so i thought a new account would work hhh
about fedwa its the same last time we talked she said she's leaving the forum
& i couldnt do anythin abt it :( i tried to contact her i called her and i sent her msgs but she doesnt reply im so afraid :( she wasnt feelin good last time
well bro don't stop posting your poems u know im a big fan since like forever hhh :D & i can totally agree with u , being alone is the best thing sometimes but remember that ur sister sara and many others here r havin ur back always ;)
and im still waiting for the rest of the story u wrote last year >> u r thinking ; damn this girl neveer forget about it hhhhh
peace


salammi
if u still have your gmail it's easy to turn it back
if u don't i'll show u how
and that story don't remind about it coz I don't really remember it i lost that inspiration got no time for it :1:
about Bp Jimmy told me that she's upset from u coz your justifications were not logic well it's a matter between u and her so I asked him to give me her fb and you know i can't post fb links here
just type
(Rose Ammaru Shakure)
profile picture + cover all in black okay
good luck Sister
keep in touch
:o

[miss_cool]

Yeah sure bro :)
well im happy with my new account it doesn't matter now , but thanks anyway :) really


and thanks for telling me about Bp ... now i got it ,i think she could have just told me this , but it's okey

peace

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Be easy on her and tell her the truth be true just tell her the real reason and ask her to give ya another chance she'll be happy
^^

[miss_cool]

I never lied to her be4 to be honest this time bro :(
i guess we were bfs , i guess tellin me why she's not replyin is simple, i dont blame her , it's fine


anyway it doesnt matter now , the important is that i knew sh's fine, coz i was worried
btw the FB doesnt exist , i dnt know whats wrong


peace bro :)

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

I think it's done now :)

[miss_cool]

Yeah i received somethin ... but .....


:)

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

But .... whuuut! :)

[miss_cool]

I dont have a fb :( i asked my friend to check

if she can give me her email !!!!

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

um! I don't have nothing to say then :/

[miss_cool]

Yeah its fine :)
but thnx though

[Asolvip]

hey bro ! i didn't see u for long time ! well i don't know but there's always something catches my eyes & my mind and attracts and say go and read deeply what this man writes ! i'll say only one word "AWESOME " YOUR WORK IS FANTASTIC

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

hey bro ! i didn't see u for long time ! well i don't know but there's always something catches my eyes & my mind and attracts and say go and read deeply what this man writes ! i'll say only one word "AWESOME " YOUR WORK IS FANTASTIC


Oh! Asolvip wurrup!
it's been a long time since the last time we have contact with eatch other
but it's u who left the section not me coz I'm always being here but find nobody :D
for the thread haha thanks a lot this means a lot to me and push me to post more and more
all I can say is what I write is real thing
:rolleyes:
good luck
keep in touch
:dj_17:

[Asolvip]

Oh! Asolvip wurrup!
it's been a long time since the last time we have contact with eatch other
but it's u who left the section not me coz I'm always being here but find nobody :D
for the thread haha thanks a lot this means a lot to me and push me to post more and more
all I can say is what I write is real thing
:rolleyes:
good luck
keep in touch
:dj_17:


your welcome well i passed through taugh time & i hadn't much time to write but of course ill come back & i'll see u on skyrock ! i wanna learn from u bro!

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

your welcome well i passed through taugh time & i hadn't much time to write but of course ill come back & i'll see u on skyrock ! i wanna learn from u bro!



oh I totally forgot that I have a skyrock blog but I came in I did not find any friend in my contacts liste :o
umm! but i'll be here and there and every where hhh
i'm here to provide any help :mh92:

[Bouchra mimi]

Hi karim How r u ?
Seriuosly i dont know what to say
cuz everytime i read one of ur writings i become speechless , i wish one day i 'll have a little bit of ur voucabulary and knowledge

Go on is all i can say n Best of Luck

By the way i wanted to ask u about Fedwa is she okay

have u heard from her am worried

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hi karim How r u ?
Seriuosly i dont know what to say
cuz everytime i read one of ur writings i become speechless , i wish one day i 'll have a little bit of ur voucabulary and knowledge

Go on is all i can say n Best of Luck

By the way i wanted to ask u about Fedwa is she okay

have u heard from her am worried
Kheir Kheir Bouchra How are u doing
I'm fine hmd
thanks for dropping ur encouraging comments
don't worry it's a matter of time I was not born speaking english and I was not that level when I started writing
it all became step by step with reading and memorizing words
:rolleyes:
Hmmmm!
For Fadwa I do not know how she is doing now
but once her friend told me she's good
:mh92:

[Bouchra mimi]

I'm glad she is ok ,
i forgot to say dont u think that i envy u cuz i felt like u did miss understood me
I really admire ur dedication n ur work karim , n i look forword to be like u (i mean ur voucabulary )
w rabi y7afdek mal hasadin

see u

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

,
i forgot to say dont u think that i envy u cuz i felt like u did miss understood me


:mad::mad::mad::mad:
- Envy -
don't say that again
I got what u meant



I'
I really admire ur dedication n ur work karim , n i look forword to be like u (i mean ur voucabulary )
w rabi y7afdek mal hasadin

see u

:D:D:D

See u soon coz I got new one coming so soon
becareful Hhhhh

[Bouchra mimi]

Hhhhhhhhhh , okay am exited to see wats coming next
Take care

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hhhhhhhhhh , okay am exited to see wats coming next
Take care

لا تقلقي
It's a matter of 2 days at most
I'm working on it

[Bouchra mimi]

yeah , dont rush ur self

Inchaallah i'll be here to read it .

see ya at then

[vauxhall]

Your wonderful man even you used a really hard words

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Your wonderful man even you used a really hard words

I was obliged to include some words that are not understandable to anyone because they came directly to my mind sometimes they're only new acquired words which i like to use them in order to memorize them hhh thanks for passing by

[للعلا طالبة]

May god bless you! I am immensly amazed at how well you have written this piece, how calm it sounds yet so agitated, how it is overwhelmed with different emotions.It is just a masterpiece I am reading now. I wish you will strive to show this raw talent of yours, I believe you will thrive one day, if you aren't already.
I am in by no mean close to your level, but I believe that we say in the 6th verse of your 1st strohpe: a horrible. And in the end of the 2nd I belive it is: when he moans.
I am profusly apologizing for spotting such things, but I am really indepted to you, for it's been a while since I haven't been able to read such piece of art.
With god's blessings.

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

May god bless you! I am immensly amazed at how well you have written this piece, how calm it sounds yet so agitated, how it is overwhelmed with different emotions.It is just a masterpiece I am reading now. I wish you will strive to show this raw talent of yours, I believe you will thrive one day, if you aren't already.
I am in by no mean close to your level, but I believe that we say in the 6th verse of your 1st strohpe: a horrible. And in the end of the 2nd I belive it is: when he moans.
I am profusly apologizing for spotting such things, but I am really indepted to you, for it's been a while since I haven't been able to read such piece of art.
With god's blessings.



Hey, how are you
thanks for passing by and yes those are mistakes for the (moans) I discovered it but It was too late to modify it an dfor (an horrible)yes till now i got it coz i used to silence the (h) haha a big scandal! a is used before a consonant sound and an before a vowel and sometimes before (h) when it's silent yeah
well for the poems I just keep them most of the time for myself being hidden somewhere between books and sometimes i post them here in djelfa forum but It never happened that I delivered them outside to the world you can say that in Algeria there is less interest in such things except music and football :o
Thank you

[للعلا طالبة]

Hey, how are you
thanks for passing by and yes those are mistakes for the (moans) I discovered it but It was too late to modify it an dfor (an horrible)yes till now i got it coz i used to silence the (h) haha a big scandal! a is used before a consonant sound and an before a vowel and sometimes before (h) when it's silent yeah
well for the poems I just keep them most of the time for myself being hidden somewhere between books and sometimes i post them here in djelfa forum but It never happened that I delivered them outside to the world you can say that in Algeria there is less interest in such things except music and football :o
Thank you




Hello, I was scrolling down the web and I suddenly remembered a piece of art I read a few years ago and I adamantly looked for it till I found it and I'm glad I did..
I just had to drop by and comment and more importantly to encourage you to write more, cause writing is an art and a therapy to both the writer and reader and it should never be looked down on.
, There is always a chance to thrive for more even if our country let us
down and only roots for music and football as you named it. But there's a will, there's a way..
your rythm and rhymes and the meaningful things you write are amazing! You really do have a talent. And may god bless you.
:D

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hello, I was scrolling down the web and I suddenly remembered a piece of art I read a few years ago and I adamantly looked for it till I found it and I'm glad I did..
I just had to drop by and comment and more importantly to encourage you to write more, cause writing is an art and a therapy to both the writer and reader and it should never be looked down on.
, There is always a chance to thrive for more even if our country let us
down and only roots for music and football as you named it. But there's a will, there's a way..
your rythm and rhymes and the meaningful things you write are amazing! You really do have a talent. And may god bless you.
:D

Hellooo
I hope you're fine thanks for remembering this deserted area hahaha
well I've got some bad news... I stopped writing I'm always busy with work and inspiration is gone completely
thanks again for passing by and encouraging me

[Goury516]

:19::19::19::19::19::19::19::19:

[Goury516]

:19::19::19::19::19::19::19::19::19::19::19::19::1 9::19::19:

[oussgamer]

Thanks for sharing this