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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Alone In The Dark Part 02


amine pop 4 life
2014-06-10, 19:43
Hello guys
sorry for being late but I was too busy
but here's my second part of my poem "Alone In The Dark" and sorry coz I'm still live in the darkness of my friend's absence ...
enjoy!!!
The hugs are gone
The hurt has grown
And I feel the same
And my heart is alone

I guess it's the best way
To forget u is to say
I don't need u any more
I don't want u to stay

I'll be lying on my heart
If I said I can restart
Coz I'm not that boy stronger
And I know I'm not smart

Cleaning the tears with my hand
Something that makes me understand
How it feel to cry alone
How it hurts to lose a friend


Calling u through the sky
Wish some day you can reply
But I know it's impossible
So don't blame me when I cry

Coz your absence I can't take
I can't handle that ache
I really want to forget
But I'm always acting fake


I say to myself what ever
He will never be closer
I'll be waitng in the dark
It's the only way to remember

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2014-06-11, 11:14
Ahlan;
Wassup brother em I thought you passed that bad memory but unfortunately it still living but remember. Anything people will tell you you already know it anything I say you already know what I'm going to say forget and ...etc and Death is our destiny we all go but your problem is that you can't deal with this idea offorgetting your friend and no body can forget easily but you have to keep you head up and be strong this is the life expect everything to live a peaceful living
We was Born alone we'll leave alone....

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2014-06-11, 11:18
I'm still live in the darkness



Taking your high level in consideration I guess it's a typing mistake :)
I'm still living in the darkness


Cleaning the tears with my hand



it would be better if you said
Wiping the tears with my hand

amine pop 4 life
2014-06-11, 11:47
It's good to have you with me bro to correct my mistakes
but wait a second you should be thankful that I still have that skills because I forgot my passion and I'm afraid that I'm Gonna forget my English
and then I won't be exisited

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2014-06-12, 11:43
Yawedddi I told you one hundred times that you're in the wrong position English is your future and you'll have a nice career but you strong head like a woookriiif hahahaha
so you started to lose your english emmm it's the same to me I lost so many voccabularies and expressions I can't even run a normal conversation without stress and anxiety
Life in Zaazayer

Silly Me
2014-06-13, 10:45
i loved it (y)
and if you are afraid of loosing your english practice it more , hold on to it