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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Accumulated Sins


نَازِكْ
2014-04-15, 21:35
Peace ppl

Accumulated Sins




"the midnight orchestra starts playing its sad tune
i bend my back ,walk and stare at the dazzling moon
holding lots of secrets ,without a single answer
why is the black night endless ?why is the moon getting larger?
Yeah ,the moon is getting larger
our heartless heart are getting darker
to hell we are getting closer
and from heaven we're getting further"

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i tried to look for answer thus i faced reality
i looked back in the past i found a book called muslim's history
we were so fine ,we made a great legend
but when i reached our lifetime the page was bloodied
we believe in perfection ,we forgot that life costs lots
we're paying the price :"eternal sadness of all sorts "
we wear lies ,we love stabbing each other ,we trust a lot in history
we have been taught only how to say :"never mind it's destiny"
because we are "BELIEVERS"unfortunately now we 're worshiping silence
we keep watching our brothers dying ,our "OMA" collapsing in a whole silence
and if our hearts shook just a lil we turn off the channel
because we feel afraid of blood ,indeed we 've entered in a dark tunnel
so far ;we are still the same "so knaves"
selfishness ate huge parts of our souls it becomes a disease
struggling with things that can't be changed
Ignoring those that need to be changed
chasing after life and money ,we became so materialistic
we aim for the sky while we are beneath the ground ,c'mon be realistic
we abandoned our identity in order to obey our BOSSES
we forgot to learn life 's basics now we 're attending etiquette's classes
history won't show us mercy any more
it's too late to clear up our rusty dusty cores
because dust was piling up all these years as well our sins
silence won't help now we reached the brim


"i'm still walking surrendering myself to the endless tune
like a hopeless diver ,i'm drowning in the beauty of the round moon
the moon that reflects our sins and guilts
even the fake civilization we have built
our sins are piling up so that the moon is getting larger
indeed ,these accumulated sins made the moon seems bigger;;;;"

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2014-04-16, 11:44
seat is reserved i'll be back

نَازِكْ
2014-04-16, 15:39
seat is reserved i'll be back


hi brother your seat is reserved even before postin the thread ,welcome take your time

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2014-04-16, 22:57
you're so right Intisar that's what's happening when we all forgot who we are. no one cares what about the others or how are the others doing? sometimes we be busy with our life problems not having time to look back only running forward our future without living for the moment.
I find this one very diffrent from the previous the fact that they were talking about you or one of the friends but this one is about us all in all if i am alrigh that's how I understood it
Our Oma is being collapsed but it never fade away coz it'll be stronger again that's what destiny keeps saying
but still we be suffering and maybe it's of the sins in us
allah guides us through the right path
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I liked very much now you're talented I guarantee
and you can do better and better keep it up and take care
^^

نَازِكْ
2014-04-17, 17:43
you're so right Intisar that's what's happening when we all forgot who we are. no one cares what about the others or how are the others doing? sometimes we be busy with our life problems not having time to look back only running forward our future without living for the moment.
I find this one very diffrent from the previous the fact that they were talking about you or one of the friends but this one is about us all in all if i am alrigh that's how I understood it
Our Oma is being collapsed but it never fade away coz it'll be stronger again that's what destiny keeps saying
but still we be suffering and maybe it's of the sins in us
allah guides us through the right path
.
.
I liked very much now you're talented I guarantee
and you can do better and better keep it up and take care
^^


]indeed bro that's deeply what i was saying ;you know i believe that happiness is worthless if we don't share it ,and you can't help yourself if you can't feel the other's pain that will help you to cure your own
someone taught me that , i've been changed ^^
but on the other hand ,we keep running all the time as you said it's so hard to realize it in reality
me talented ?i'm happy to hear that from you but i still have a long road to improve and i'll inshallah
thank you brother i really mean it
[

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2014-04-18, 22:48
]indeed bro that's deeply what i was saying ;you know i believe that happiness is worthless if we don't share it ,and you can't help yourself if you can't feel the other's pain that will help you to cure your own
someone taught me that , i've been changed ^^
but on the other hand ,we keep running all the time as you said it's so hard to realize it in reality
me talented ?i'm happy to hear that from you but i still have a long road to improve and i'll inshallah
thank you brother i really mean it
[
yeah that's right I agree with you 100 %
yes you're talented u don't believe that emm okay
only few people can write like what you write emm
many teahcers of english Langu-age can't even write half of what you wrote trust me
:rolleyes:

نَازِكْ
2014-04-25, 22:50
yeah that's right I agree with you 100 %
yes you're talented u don't believe that emm okay
only few people can write like what you write emm
many teahcers of english Langu-age can't even write half of what you wrote trust me
:rolleyes:

ah that's too much for me
thanx for the encouragement bro it really helps in time like this

oumhanni
2014-04-26, 15:09
very high style of writing and expressing
I did not know before that in this forum there are talented members

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2014-04-26, 19:27
ah that's too much for me
thanx for the encouragement bro it really helps in time like this


I really really mean it just trust in yourself and keep it up
eh I want to inform you that there is a contest in thje French section
so please if you can enter read and interpret and vote for the best topic okaay

for the best one


Votez pour le meilleur sujet de la compétition (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=1577925)

نَازِكْ
2014-04-26, 20:43
[QUOTE=oumhanni;1056224402]very high style of writing and expressing
I did not know before that in this forum there are talented members[/QUOT
thank you for dropping by dear sister and welcome between us ,n happy you like my style
well there'rea too many hidden talented ppl here just get back in the pages n you'll see
peace

نَازِكْ
2014-04-26, 20:46
I really really mean it just trust in yourself and keep it up
eh I want to inform you that there is a contest in thje French section
so please if you can enter read and interpret and vote for the best topic okaay

for the best one


Votez pour le meilleur sujet de la compétition (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=1577925)
yeah thanx for letting me know ,i've read them n voted for the best ,indeed my choice was the best cus it wasn't boring but interesting though i rarely enjoy readin french ;you deserve it bro keep it up

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2014-04-27, 18:34
yeah thanx for letting me know ,i've read them n voted for the best ,indeed my choice was the best cus it wasn't boring but interesting though i rarely enjoy readin french ;you deserve it bro keep it up

hhh neither me too I just like challenges hhhhh
well thanks for your favour u r appreciated Intisar
eh I want to ask u; White cloud is absent for months do you know anything or the reasons why she's absent?

نَازِكْ
2014-04-28, 08:53
hhh neither me too I just like challenges hhhhh
well thanks for your favour u r appreciated Intisar
eh I want to ask u; White cloud is absent for months do you know anything or the reasons why she's absent?
never mind ;;;;
nah we are not in touch i hanv't talked to her for months ;hope she is fine and safe

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2014-04-29, 11:04
never mind ;;;;
nah we are not in touch i hanv't talked to her for months ;hope she is fine and safe

ok thanks coz I noticed her absence for 4 months I asked the moderators they did not reply and Mr Ath 111
told me that he doesn't know too