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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Advice in writing expression


ali gourgache
2009-07-12, 12:59
The word thing and its compound like anything something..etc should be avoided much as possible;because they make the overal aspects of the composition vague.I'll give you an example:
the thing was that i didn't understand anything of all the things she was trying to tell me.I had to think of something to face the situation but i couldn't find anything to make her understand.So;i just smiled without a thing.These red words make you imagine others to be instead them.So guess them to make the short text meaningful and clear.Good Luck:rolleyes::19::mh31:

matrix_hamdi
2009-07-12, 14:35
The word thing and its compound like anything something..etc should be avoided much as possible;because they make the overal aspects of the composition vague.I'll give you an example:
the thing was that i didn't understand anything of all the things she was trying to tell me.I had to think of something to face the situation but i couldn't find anything to make her understand.So;i just smiled without a thing.These red words make you imagine others to be instead them.So guess them to make the short text meaningful and clear.Good Luck:rolleyes::19::mh31:
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ali gourgache
2009-07-12, 18:12
Thanks i'm sorry for my erratum or printing error.sorry again and thank you for your comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!G.L

matrix_hamdi
2009-07-12, 21:07
Thanks i'm sorry for my erratum or printing error.sorry again and thank you for your comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!G.L
Hello, again:mh92:
Sorry for what? This often happens
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sabiha18
2009-07-23, 21:16
good point indeed
thanx

ali gourgache
2009-07-24, 10:55
You are welcome Sabiha,just make a diffrence
The problem was that i didn't understand the meaning of all the story she was trying to tell me.I

ali gourgache
2009-07-24, 11:04
the problem was that i didn't understand the meaning of all the story she was trying to tell me.I had to think of the solution to face the situation but I couldn't find a way to make her understand.So,Ijust smiled without saying a word.i I think that the idea is clear to you just compare between the first and the second paragraph.thanks again Sabiha.

ali gourgache
2010-08-05, 13:53
it's just an advice

charmed girle
2010-08-10, 14:49
thx for the advices

yakumo
2010-08-10, 14:57
Thanx 4 the advice bro!!
God bless u
Look at my advice : Be clear, short & simple to get what u want

ali gourgache
2010-08-10, 21:19
thx for the advices

you're welcome and thank you for your comment too....Good Luck:mh92::mh92:

ali gourgache
2010-08-10, 21:21
Thanx 4 the advice bro!!
God bless u
Look at my advice : Be clear, short & simple to get what u want

thanks my brother for the advice .....it's great and very kind from you...thanks again:19::19::19::19: