sad word

[amelhope]

hello everyone i would like to share a peace of my writing with you :


i don't know why
there are tears in my eyes
and even though i can't cry
now i wish if i could fly
just like a bird in the sky
i want to go high
to clean the hearts from every lie
but this won't happen even if i try
and i couldn't deny
that it's just a dream that I
always see when i close my eyes
and now i have to tell you bye
cause this words made me cry

[bainf]

Nice, I Hope the tears will find their way out, to be more relieved

[amelhope]

yes i hope so thank you

[amelhope]

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[toulay]

it's really amazing

[أميرة العرب]

salééém

nice style
so original
keep it that way


good luck, sister

[manel1997]

God bless u this so great , good luck

[amelhope]

thank you happy to hear that

[imen03]

nice words
I love it

[فاطمة الحالمة]

every day i turn the pages of this life..
aloune..no friends no children no wife..
i swim with my tears sadness and grief..
and all days i remember the pain's knife..
but i try to to smile because i live in this life ..


really ..perfect words ..definite your real felling ..
i like that ..be happy

[نجمة الرمال]

its really amazing
i like it ^^
and tears are words that we cant say , everyone needs sholder to cry on nd someone to hug u when u cry
i really wish that u wont have neither worries nor sadness ...

[fafafoufou]

really nice words

[Bouchra mimi]

Hi

such a simple and Beautiful words , very nice

thanks , and good luck .

[miss_cool]

Very nice poem

full of sadness

but why r u so sad???
be happy

[amine pop 4 life]

I thought I told you once that your name has a deep sense of hope!!!! so be Optimist and forget ....... just forget and remember that when u fly no matter what was the reason u'll make someone somewhere missing you

[amelhope]

thankS for the replies

and yes amin pop 4 life i still remember you're kind words thank you