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Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-08-15, 21:54
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Original and Frank

13/08/2013





Verse 01:

By The year 2004, In Saida city I was a teen

Introvert and Poor, I was absent from the scene (boy)

While I was suffering, you were on the super sweet sixteen

You got a better life your daddy got the Algerian scheme

At the school classes, always falling on a daydreaming

Hearing my name Karim, that’s my teacher she’s screaming

And when we finish she say good night happy dreams

Hell yeah, I don’t even know what it means

That rich girl didn’t know for what I’ve been thinking (hell yeah)

Something she never missed it’s the smell in the kitchen

All the time everyday every hour every minute

I was not skipping reality, my Imagination got no limit

Thought I wasn’t Timid I was shy and so much nervous

Elementary rapper, lost in the world of the disses

You meant to be happy, from the money of the lobby

You got it all! boy, while my mind was Scrappy

I would be a criminal, if I did not get a hobby

Personal and original, check it it’s not a copy

I don’t get yours I mean the life of the riches?

You know bodyguards, driver the expensive watches

You wanna get my talent bring forty seven witches

Now get out of my way, I’m not that kind of pitches

Getting a car and Currency, are you living properly

You gonna lose it suddenly, fool save your property

I heard about the Morris dancing so much fascinating

Interruption I got some wolves, with them I am dancing

Usually men like me, are stable in a good function

I’m growing up so fast, and death is keeping inching

These days I feel a tension in all my friendship relations

Maaan I’m losing it, I’m losing it, the passion

I switch on the wax light, had one night conversation

Till she collapses definitely, she left me alone thinking

So hard to be alone, alone and lonely

Switching off the phone, dying slowly

If you don’t care y’all it’s not that big deal

But to lie and pretend I’m not Dr. Phil

Due to ya talks I was going in Labyrinth

Thanks Allah I knew it and I’m Elaborating

I’m letting out, Original and frank

You may not like it, Original and frank

Enemies switch off the light, Original and frank

Original and frank Original and frank

Original and frank





Verse 02:

Ethics before Lyrics, this later will be the Monument

Got my own method, it’s not for the money, man

I don’t worship the Rain-man like the rapper Eminem

I bet that white puppy still scared of the Bogyman

Open your E.Y.E I’m not the D.R.E

Neither the B.I.G nor the Eayzy-E

Lyrically unstoppable, Unreachable legible

Secret and Survival, untouchable invisible

Fool that’s DZ and that’s my mentality

My tongue refuses to say Nuttin but only the reality

I am not that Idiot who loves to be an Arab Idol

A gussy talent of pen that turned me to a suicidal

Social RAP writer, I am the Trouble maker

But after all and then, I’m not that too much Talker

To you all player haters, grow up let’s talk later

Too simply you are not, the sharpest knife in the drawer

I told them once before, ain’t plain’ fool we the men

Oh dang I told them we the gangs that’s the land

No comment much respect for street boyz band

I hope ya don’t get mad coz, I got ya homie n friend

That night looking for a trouble, I hit him with a shovel

He felt pain in double, walked home lost in a scrabble

I’m sorry I have a dignity, that I’m obliged to Maintain

Black and white’s purity, my word remains in

The good got nothing but the bad got a lot

That’s for a reason that’s why I don’t care about

They know how to pretend I figured it out

Hate it or Love it maaan I’m letting it out

Excuse me when I say original and frank

When you lie at me I don’t count you my friend

A secret enemy, what’s the different

I gotta some better rules I always use

Rule number Ono; never trust anybody

Destroying you, with ya secrets is handy

Rule number Two; know who you are mixing with

I tell who you’re when I see whom you’re messing with

Rule number three; I be the one who I wanna be

Being so free I love my character yeah that’s me

Rule number four, no friends I shut the door

After opening it, their deceit got more

Rule number five; be happy love the life

If you wanna survive, hustle and strive

Rule number six; avoid the materialistic

Now just Leave me alone, and after saying this,

I seem a pessimistic; somehow I’m a realistic

Leave me alone I’m just tired and sick,

I’m letting out, Original and frank

You may not like it, Original and frank

Enemies switch off the light, Original and frank

Original and frank Original and frank

Original and frank

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Algerian scheme: some of you heard of the American dream which isthe belief of Americans that their country offers opportunities for a good and successful life. For minorities and people coming from abroad to live in America, the dream also includes freedom and equal rights.



I mentioned the Algerian scheme which is a plan for getting money or some other advantage, especially one that involves cheating other people: and as we know Algeria is full of these kind of animals eh citizens.



Peaches: a particularly good or attractive person or thing.



The Morris dancing: a type of old English dance traditionally performed by men wearing special (usually white) costumes, often with small bells around their legs below the knee. Dances from some parts of Britain involve waving handkerchiefs, and in others the dancers knock sticks together. Morris dances are usually performed outdoors in the summer. Women now also sometimes take part.





Not the sharpest knife in the drawer: idiomatic expression that means Not Intelligent



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Katy Pretty girl
2013-08-16, 16:40
wow
oh
my
god
damn this is so much amazing
the words the rythme
the expressions
everything i say everything is so much greaaaaaaaaaaaaat
oh my god
i didn't hear it yet
i only read it
and i'm speachless
damn i'm so amazed
this so brilliant karim so amazing and wonderful
i'll go back to read it again
wow again

Katy Pretty girl
2013-08-16, 16:43
this one
is the best
it's better than "no fear","the message","criminal mind" it's the best
u better get ready to be famous
congratulations
and keep up
u have a great and big talent
u better keep it up
cheer up

Asolvip
2013-08-16, 23:18
amazing as always !!!!

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-08-18, 21:31
wow
oh
my
god
damn this is so much amazing
the words the rythme
the expressions
everything i say everything is so much greaaaaaaaaaaaaat
oh my god
i didn't hear it yet
i only read it
and i'm speachless
damn i'm so amazed
this so brilliant karim so amazing and wonderful
i'll go back to read it again
wow again


hhhhhh hey thank u for your encouraging
it's so clear that you liked it hhhh ok read it again if u got anything
wrong tell me i'll explain if u want

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-08-18, 21:34
this one
is the best
it's better than "no fear","the message","criminal mind" it's the best
u better get ready to be famous
congratulations
and keep up
u have a great and big talent
u better keep it up
cheer up



hhh thank u thank u
famous nah! it's not gonna be like that
hhhh you the rules can't be changed
thank u so much katy ^^

نَازِكْ
2013-08-18, 21:43
gotta read it first iit seems exited

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-08-18, 21:46
amazing as always !!!!



........Thank you ..........

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-08-18, 22:05
gotta read it first iit seems exited


hey intisar ^^ take ya time
emmm exciting i don't know they say it's the best
but me i don't know i'm waiting your opinion
i hope ya like it

نَازِكْ
2013-08-19, 15:36
well ; i read it till the end it's so frank n harsh at the same time yeah truth always hurts i loved the second verse the most
ur rules were so obvious about friendship someone here taught me thet friendship is still alive in some ppl 's hearts
thanks for sharing brother it's really beyond "wow" i learnt too much of new words and thanx for the idioms they are very helpful and as usaual you're still the teacher.

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-08-19, 18:29
well ; i read it till the end it's so frank n harsh at the same time yeah truth always hurts i loved the second verse the most
ur rules were so obvious about friendship someone here taught me thet friendship is still alive in some ppl 's hearts
thanks for sharing brother it's really beyond "wow" i learnt too much of new words and thanx for the idioms they are very helpful and as usaual you're still the teacher.



ah nice to see your comments again
Intisar
it's harsh yeah hhhh
rules I jusr wrote them ina hurry you know
5 or 10 minutes is not enough
to produce a well organized lines
but I believe in the C o n t e n t of the rules
Friendship haha I just hear about it but
in reality i got no friendship
except three Friends no more
and honestly I'm very slow at making new friends
yeah still there are some few ppl whith a nice hearts
but
Hard to find

thank you so much for your encouraging
Teacher nah I'm not at that high level
i'm just a rhyme game playyer
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Thank u
^^

نَازِكْ
2013-08-21, 15:44
ah nice to see your comments again
Intisar
it's harsh yeah hhhh
rules I jusr wrote them ina hurry you know
5 or 10 minutes is not enough
to produce a well organized lines
but I believe in the C o n t e n t of the rules
Friendship haha I just hear about it but
in reality i got no friendship
except three Friends no more
and honestly I'm very slow at making new friends
yeah still there are some few ppl whith a nice hearts
but
Hard to find

thank you so much for your encouraging
Teacher nah I'm not at that high level
i'm just a rhyme game playyer
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
Thank u
^^


hi again brother^^
well ; i have troubles in making bonds with others it's just like curse
i 've put for my self afraid that the death gonna steal them from me again as it did ,afraid that they are gonna stab me again
but here i've been changed thanks to a special person
i won a sister and alots of friends i'm really gratefull for all of you
now i really don't care that i'm alonely girl in my world n that i have only one friend coz no thing worths to worry about except of "the bonds "i've made here
never mind
you're welcome it's the truth

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-08-29, 11:57
hi again brother^^
well ; i have troubles in making bonds with others it's just like curse
i 've put for my self afraid that the death gonna steal them from me again as it did ,afraid that they are gonna stab me again
but here i've been changed thanks to a special person
i won a sister and alots of friends i'm really gratefull for all of you
now i really don't care that i'm alonely girl in my world n that i have only one friend coz no thing worths to worry about except of "the bonds "i've made here
never mind
you're welcome it's the truth



yeah it's the same to me I don't have many friends the few friends I have are those in the net.....emmm if you're afraid to be stabbed in the back by your friends just expect that anything will heppen to you

nothing bad would happen to a wise man always expect bad things to happen

man / woman the same

Black_Poison
2013-08-31, 15:38
Hey! Sorry for the delay..i know i'm a little late
just...didn't know what to say...it was better to wait
I can see how you drow...played by cold hands of fate
Mr Death is hunting us down...and Mrs Life is the bait
Ironic...yeah...that the ugly truth...but it's better than a pretty lie
This is the big picture that everyone could deny
Welcome to reality...fallen masks and betrayal
We live between humans...a human is not an angel
But...we still can see if you hold on for a moment
Save your hope for the ones who deserve it
Bro....life is full of disappointment
And you think that you was put as a target
It's not your choice who gets in your life
You wouldn't know who hides a knife
But now you certainly know
who is to keep and who is to throw

Through the storms and being hurt all along
I know that you was made to be stong

You won't lose it...true friends never run
They share Pain ...just like they share fun
There'll be those to give you a hand
Someone to be called a friend
Just keep on faith and lift your head
and...be your self until your're dead

Even though life is hard and rough
There're someone who thinks that "just you" is more than enough
And...btw...Now i realise
The rules are hard...but also wise
But i follow no rules cuz i recognise
I can see.....with no needing eyes

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-08-31, 16:36
Hey! Sorry for the delay..i know i'm a little late
just...didn't know what to say...it was better to wait
I can see how you drow...played by cold hands of fate
Mr Death is hunting us down...and Mrs Life is the bait
Ironic...yeah...that the ugly truth...but it's better than a pretty lie
This is the big picture that everyone could deny
Welcome to reality...fallen masks and betrayal
We live between humans...a human is not an angel
But...we still can see if you hold on for a moment
Save your hope for the ones who deserve it
Bro....life is full of disappointment
And you think that you was put as a target
It's not your choice who gets in your life
You wouldn't know who hides a knife
But now you certainly know
who is to keep and who is to throw

Through the storms and being hurt all along
I know that you was made to be stong

You won't lose it...true friends never run
They share Pain ...just like they share fun
There'll be those to give you a hand
Someone to be called a friend
Just keep on faith and lift your head
and...be your self until your're dead

Even though life is hard and rough
There're someone who thinks that "just you" is more than enough
And...btw...Now i realise
The rules are hard...but also wise
But i follow no rules cuz i recognise
I can see.....with no needing eyes






ooh thank u bezaf for your sweet reply Dear Sister 3lah cha9iti ro7ak ga3 kimahak hhhhhhh
thank u so bezaaaf ok thank u so much for this reply emmm yeah I agree with u for all what u have said
and i promise i'll be always the same for whatever i won't change and the few friends I got i'm keeping 'em but if they gone i won't forgive them for anything whatever the reason is hhhh evil hhhh loolingnationementagefully

Black_Poison
2013-08-31, 16:43
Emmm ...you're saying thanks and i'm gonna kill you
just...fon't mention it
I said what on my mind...and my mind rhymes hhhhh
Anything for you boss ...
And...yeah...they won't be gone even if you kick them out
they'll come and kick you and say" what the hell is wrong with you"
^^
Happy you liked it
and
What a laugh...Loningationementagefully
hhhhhhhhhhhhh
yeah ...i memozised it hhhhhhhhh
Peace yo

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-08-31, 16:46
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh okay
thanks hhhhhhhh
yeah u rhyme well u r very talented
keep it alive
:p