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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : New day ... New life ! I'm strong !

Asolvip

2013-07-19, 16:13

** * * * * Part 1:

New day new life !
My brilliant rayons can cut your jealousy as a knife
So you'd better stop that strife
I'm the bomb I'm the rocket
I can't show you everything I gotta keep some in my pocket !
You can call me official*
I'm the star I'm *the initial
I don't care *I'm not artificial**
I'm the important , I'm the main*
I don't cry anymore under rain*
I got over every pain
I deleted every nightmare from my lain
No feelings,I'll *always use my brain .
**

** * * * * * * Part 2:

My life *was *bad ... Too sad
I never felt *Alive, I was always dead*
I got no home , not even a bed
But my dreams never got out of my head*
I lost too many friends*
But I won a lot instead*
Life is a circle ! Now look at me*
I'm the queen ! I always wear my diamond rings
I'm a bird I got wings*
I can hear my danger bell rings*
My pen is a guitar and My words are its strings

** * * * * * Part 3:

I was always wrong !
But now I'm the strong !
My way was so long*
You used to treat me like a dog
Can't u see me now ! I'm covered by fog
U are such a crazy green frog
You told me you're love maker !
No, you're a heart breaker
I'm your *heart taker*
Watch out, I'm a good baker*
My poisonous *****es will kill you hater*
I'm good , good , greater , greater*
Die hard* .. Faker !
You said, I've got a million sin*
I'm satisfied about myself ,so,I won't lose my grin :D

** * * **

Asolvip

2013-07-19, 16:19

Hey guys....
Well, I just gave you my new poem ... I feel good those days .. So I hope you'd like it ...
Part 3 : my poisonous c ooki es will kill you hater :)

I'll be absent for few days too but I'll always keep shining ;)

Katy Pretty girl

2013-07-19, 17:17

good one
i love strong girls
like u
i'm happy for u too

Asolvip

2013-07-19, 21:26

Thanks my princess perry !
I'm trying to do my best to have a better life .. And to come over all the obstacles that stand in my way :)

aliass

2013-07-19, 23:16

great poem from a greater poet
thnx for sharing such a great poem dear
keep it up always

Hillin

2013-07-20, 09:38

Hi every one
well done sister
KEEP IT UP

شدى الياسمين

2013-07-20, 17:25

hey it's really a good one i liked it
keep it up

that's me

2013-07-20, 19:10

:19::19:this a is not just a poem this is a sweet cake . thank you it is very delightful :19::19:

○•ميسون•○

2013-07-24, 19:20

exelent and perfect poem

this is all what I need

thenq you my dear

Asolvip

2013-07-30, 12:53

thank guys just wait for the new fresh topics and don't forget the old ones too

أم حمزة

2013-07-30, 15:57

I do really appreciate it, seems like it comes from a powerful girl's spirit ....

good for you, keep it up

براهيم جموعي

2013-08-05, 22:16

sa7a ftourkem

wow really i like it :19:

especially this part

My life *was *bad ... Too sad
I never felt *Alive, I was always dead*
I got no home , not even a bed
But my dreams never got out of my head*
I lost too many friends*

لزرق

2013-08-16, 10:14

[QUOTE=Asolvip;1053636182][FONT="Georgia"][COLOR="Blue"]** * * * * Part 1:

New day new life !
My brilliant rayons can cut your jealousy as a knife
So you'd better stop that strife
I'm the bomb I'm the rocket
I can't show you everything I gotta keep some in my pocket !
You can call me official*
I'm the star I'm *the initial
I don't care *I'm not artificial**
I'm the important , I'm the main*
I don't cry anymore under rain*
I got over every pain
I deleted every nightmare from my lain
No feelings,I'll *always use my brain .
**
[SIZE="6"]would you please explain this poem to me

Asolvip

2013-08-16, 23:16

لزرق

2013-08-17, 07:38

it is fantastic poetry thanks
would you write some about the situation in egypt

Asolvip

2013-08-17, 12:07

it is fantastic poetry thanks
would you write some about the situation in egypt

i will try of course ... as i wrote about palestine
well , i don't know so much about politics but i'll try to do my best :)

لزرق

2013-08-17, 12:32

i want some strong words about human life value

سماح41

2013-08-18, 14:01

hey i like it it is relly good poem

نضار

2013-08-28, 21:23

<3 <3 <3 <3 it so much keep writting ............

SuperMarket

2014-01-12, 10:56

Nice poem, thanks for sharing

Asolvip

2014-01-13, 12:01

hey i like it it is relly good poem
thank you friend

♫مريومة♫

2014-01-13, 18:46

well done sister
i really enjoiyed reading it
keep it up

RIMA19

2014-01-17, 12:44

great i really like it
thank you very much sister

Asolvip

2014-01-28, 22:28

thank you so much my friends ...... your support means so much to me

cilin

2014-06-10, 12:57

well done girl :19:
that's pretty good I REALLY LIKE IT SOOO MUCH
especially this part

My life *was *bad ... Too sad
I never felt *Alive, I was always dead*
I got no home , not even a bed
But my dreams never got out of my head*

and this one too
You told me you're love maker !
No, you're a heart breaker
I'm your *heart taker*

mina1995

2014-06-10, 23:12

Cool!! i like it !

fifita14

2014-07-05, 14:39

I really like it too much ♥ .. u r a creative ;)

#Keep_it_up

Estrella Negra

2014-07-19, 17:10

Pefrect !! I love your poem <3
Keep it up , waiting for more ;)

Asolvip

2014-07-25, 17:52

Pefrect !! I love your poem <3
Keep it up , waiting for more ;)

just wait lil more , i ve got lot in my pocket :19:

**kamy**

2014-09-03, 14:55

hey .. that was really awesome .. your words have a special effect on me & i love strong girls .. you're really amazing .. God bless you .. keep it up :)

noriya

2015-05-05, 12:53

awesome poem thank youuu

Asolvip

2015-05-29, 15:58

awesome poem thank youuu

Thank u for reading ... I hope it could fill your soul with strength

حيـاء

2015-05-30, 14:10

Hello
Great poem .. dear
Keep it up always

ahmed225

2015-08-19, 22:38

keep moving , never quit , that's what we should say

freecherif

2015-08-24, 23:47

that's awesome dude......you sure have a talent....

MedAbdelhadi

2015-08-30, 10:06

WOW, Strong words, I love it.
Thanks for sharing,

and

Keep it up ;)

maghi

2015-08-30, 18:59

Hey dear, that’s brilliant, it’s just amazing! Thank u, your words are like sun shine which dispels shadows.

ahmedamicus

2015-09-10, 14:34

niiiiiiiiiiiiice oneeeee

Asolvip

2015-10-09, 14:23

thank you so much if you wanted to read more ... join me in f.a.c.e B .o.o.k : AbirSolVip

moonlight19

2015-11-21, 19:00

great , very well chosen words

you were/are and will be a strong girl 4 ever

god bless u sweety

La reine Nour

2015-11-28, 20:45

Thank you . you are the best one.I really liked your poetry.

Asolvip

2015-12-29, 15:48

Thank you . you are the best one.I really liked your poetry.

Thank you so much ....I'll publish more when I'm free :mh92:

La reine Nour

2015-12-29, 19:57

very niece poeme.thank you

othmane smail

2016-01-01, 16:33

Nice poem, i like it thanks for sharing whit as whiting for more