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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A story


the fly boy
2013-07-06, 01:07
A story

Oh time ! let me speak let me tell you a story
About a people were the best once upon a time
People were leading this world with pride and glory
Like a sun shining but being kind was thier only crime
A people from different races under the same flag
This is roman the other is african persian or arab
didn’t matter where are you from or what’s your slang
A place where morals took place and no misstep
A people who were raised by the hands of a gentelman
In a middle of a big dessert with the its golden waves
A civilization started to grow and rise like a big star
Under the leadership of a people who were all braves
The civilization which the world didn’t witness like it so far
Hearing the stories of its heros and you cannot imagine
Like a fairtyles which you don’t wanna reach thier end
This civilization which turned now to be low and sadden
You open the TV and don’t belive you simply can’t
Waiting for a new heros to bring it to life once again
Even if what is happening now from pain and sorrow
This civilization still have brave women and men
We will do it and its sun will shine again tomorrow
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Written by : B.O.Chou
The FlY boY

Asolvip
2013-07-06, 10:56
Good job! It is really cool. And nice ... We are enjoying reading a poem in same time it's a story
Great !!! keep on \(^o^)/

.kiki
2013-07-06, 15:47
In Sha Allah, yes, tomorrow our sun will shine again
very beautiful story, and I'm sure that the end will be even more beautiful
despite everything.

I enjoyed reading these lovely sincere lines
hats down for you, my brother, for always having this unbelievably pure level of faithfullness to your aim.
may Allah Subhanahu Wa Taala grante you everything you wish for, happiness and success in this world and in the hereafter.

My Dua's.

Katy Pretty girl
2013-07-06, 18:05
a story in a poem
that's realy creative and nice
i loved the story about thoses people
good job

the fly boy
2013-07-06, 19:35
Thank you sisters for passing by
I really appreciate it
Inchallah Sis Kiki
We will Inchallah
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